ok the continuation of my story
naruto:
i will save you not only because you are my brother also because the most beautiful kunoichi is crying for your leave i wont let you go to orochimaru sasuke!!!!
sasuke:you cant do nothing for it i need power and he can give me that power!!
naruto:you wont do it *jups in the air and hits sasuke in the face 10 times*
sasuke:*bleeding* you hit like a girl...
naruto: *hits him more times* shut up and react!! dont the missions we did as team 7 even make you think twice!!!
sasuke:that missions...were just a distraction
naruto:
i cant belive you!!! *hits him one time more* you stupid selfissh bastard!!! orochimaru only wants your body!! he wants your sharingan!! *hitting him*
sasuke: i dont care if it means that orochimaru takes my body... i only wnat to kill itachi
naruto: what will you gain killing itachi!!
sasuke: peace
*sasuke hits him in the stomach and sends naruto to the water*
naruto:
you really have changed...sasuke kage bunshin no jutsu *3 clones appear and help naruto stand in the water* if tha is the case i will have to crush all your bones to return you!!!
sasuke:hmp dobe
*they start a taijutsu match*
with sakura
sakura:
i need to stop crying and i need to have faith in naruto... but its so difficult
sakuras mom: sakura you have visitors its ino
sakura: pass ino
ino:sakura why are you crying?
sakura:*sniffs* sasuke-kun...
ino:*slaps sakura* come on forehead girl you need to wake up and have faith in the team!!
specially in naruto he promised you he will bring sasuke back right? RIGHT?!
sakura:yes...but
ino:no buts you need to stay good because you will see sasuke again!! come on lets put you beautiful!!
sakura:
valley of the end
*the taijutsu match is over*
sasuke: well dobe you kept a good fight but bye *hits naruto and sends him to a tree then a lot of wires come and ties him to the tree*
:naruto::
i cant move
sasuke: katon: ryuuka no jutsu *the stringsd begin to burn and naruto is burned*
naruto:
almost...burned
sasuke: dobe ave you noticed that i havnt activated my sharingan?
naruto:yes
sasuke:well its because i dont need it to beat you
naruto:you are too confident sasuke
sasuke:no *starts forming chidori* but you will die now
naruto:*seeing the chidori forming*
kage bunshin no jutsu *a clone appears and starts forming rasengan*
sasuke:
chidori
naruto:
rasengan *they are going to hit*
with sakura and ino
sakura:ino do you really think naruto can save sasuke?
ino:yes
but im still doubting it
sakura: i hope the team is ok
ino: yes
shikamaru, chouji please be ok
sakura:
naruto please save sasuke and be ok
ino:well lets continue shopping
sakura:yeah
valley of the end
sasuke: you made me activate my sharingan:sasuke: hmp dobe you sure have improved something but still you cant be at my level
naruto:*turning into kyuubi form 0[1]* i will bring you back!!! no matter what!!! *kyuubi form 0 complete*
sasuke:
what is that red chakra? its not human katon: goukakyuu no jutsu
naruto: *hits the jutsu and returns it*
I WILL RETURN YOU!!!
to be continued io now its a little longer but hope you enjoy it [1] the kyuubi form without tails
