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〜Angel Reborn〜

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Lost....

The stormy wind in my ears,
The black waves against the rocks,
Below shows its greys,
The spray of salt against my face,
Hides and covers my tears,
As this mask of mine,
Shatters to show its fears,

What do I fear?
You may ask,
I fear none but one,
For who this heart that of mine,
Has lost and beats as such,
Why does its beat,
Beat that crazy rhythm,
A rhythm that won't leave me be?

Spikes of hurt n pain,
Goes n goes yet again,
The grey water beckons to me,
Its dark waters calls for me,
What oh what am I to do?
For why... why does it...,
Why does this make me feel,
Feel all lost and alone..
 
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...i'd like to have a bit more of the picture and epicness - don't make it that random and wholesale (i mean just water? just shadows? and so one - something personal would make it more unique).

But still... :T_T:
 
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