Lost Love.

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Michael92

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Love is a lie, that you can not deny,
no trust, no hope, just glimmer of soap,
to wash you clean, as the devil has seen,
what lies beyond the goodness in your heart.


Purify your soul, get ready to get whole,
because love is pure to the ones that feel,
and understands the mysterious deal,
between two soul-mates that have fallen in love.


Hold on hard, never get lost,
because if you do, you'll never see what's real,
because once you've left that seal, to bind the deal,
you will have to endure when your love loses flame to burn...


Nothing lasts forever, regardless of your desires,
what once was shall not be again, your dreams, your heart,
it was all for none as the flame dies down and your life seem to come to an end,
but do not falter, you will rise again, when your heart has healed, you will once again be free.


Stand true to who you are, no matter what people say, and no matter what happens. Don't let your broken heart rule your path, because no good comes from it. Stand up and become whole again, because life has so much more to offer than the pity of a fool. You've done it once, you can do it again, and even if it wasn't meant to be, don't stop believing in yourself!
 

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Sir you have the best sig I could ever dream to have :whip:

And the poem is quite good. Your first one or you are more experienced?
 

Michael92

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Sir you have the best sig I could ever dream to have :whip:

And the poem is quite good. Your first one or you are more experienced?

Maiden/Real fan? =p

My 4th I think, plus a "moral story" that I did... All of them are quite random though, like this one. But, they do serve a meaning.
 

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Took a time from writing fanfics and decided to write a poem? Well, I am not really into poems but this one is good! I like it.
 

Michael92

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Took a time from writing fanfics and decided to write a poem? Well, I am not really into poems but this one is good! I like it.

Haha, it's not my first, but yeah, poems really aren't my thing to say the least :p Needed a break to write down what was on my mind and heart right now... And my next chapter is the biggest in the history of NB, so it's taking some time to complete ;)

But right now, this is what I had to offer, glad you found it a bit interesting ;D
 

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Broken heart sucks :(

Nice poem man.
 

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Lol, I love this! If only all the kids of today's generation wrote poems after being dumped, instead of drowning themselves into alcohol, drugs and the emo shitz...U_U The world would have been a better place xD

...it was all for none as the flame dies down and your life seem to come to an end,
but do not falter, you will rise again, when your heart has healed, you will once again be free.


Now I wanna
 

Michael92

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Lol, I love this! If only all the kids of today's generation wrote poems after being dumped, instead of drowning themselves into alcohol, drugs and the emo shitz...U_U The world would have been a better place xD

...it was all for none as the flame dies down and your life seem to come to an end,
but do not falter, you will rise again, when your heart has healed, you will once again be free.


Now I wanna

Why do one, when you can do both? xP Though, only alcohol applies to me though, haha :p
And this poem is bad compared to the rest I wrote, haha. In fact, I only think one of them is any decent.
 
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