Lokus Hatake Plz leave comments I am New

[Lokus Hatake]

Name: Lokus Hatake
Age:13
Clan:Unknown
Birthplace: Konoha
Ninja rank: Chunin
Familyarents died in NW4(bodies never found)
(Teachers gave name Hatake because he looked and is wise as Hatake was,Kakashi himself said so NOT RELATED 2 :kakashiHe should be jonin be was asked to join ANBU


White Grayish Hair similar to a old man and hair is like Kakashi but longer in ponytail. Face is rounded but is slim as it goes down.Red eyes in summer and blue eyes in winter and his can see half of what Hinita can see(can't see though walls or see chakra just can see very far.Skin is a light brown.Nose is sharp.Same height as Sasuke in part 1, 85 pounds. Black long sleves and black under pants.Chunin vest green and black :headband: with short katana on back.


Fire Release

Giant Fireball Technique
Rank:C
Hand signs: Snake, Ram, Monkey, Boar, Horse, Tiger

Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Type: C-rank
Hand Seals: Snake, Dragon, Rabbit, Tiger

Name: Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Missile
Type: B-rank
Hand Seals: Ram, Horse, Snake, Dragon, Rat, Ox, Tiger

Name: Fire Release: Mist Covering Technique
Type: Unknown rank
Hand Seals: Snake, Ram, Monkey, Tiger

Wind Release

Name: Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
Type: Unknown rank
Hand Seals: Tiger

Name: Wind Release: Rasengan
Type: S-rank
(but it is kind of small )



Wind Release: Infinite Fire Tornado

He does some hand signs and then he releases a tornado out of no where.When person or group dodges it disappears.Then he does Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique and he misses but he was aiming for tornado and it reappears (CHAKRA filled tornado can reappear or disappear if user need chakra).Can only be stopped by a Rank A or S class water jutsu by that will only get ride of flames



It is as fast as ichigo's bankai flash step and takes 30% chakra at full speed. Only Naruto ,raikage and Minito can keep up with ease others struggle a little

I am new plz help me with tis character and tell the truth plz. No harsh comments. Ill think harder next time but this was my first one.

 

[Q of the Sharingan]

If this is for RP then it is not the right format and you just don't give yourself jutsu. There is also a process for making custom jutsu.

 

[Οdin]

I believe you need at least 50 posts before you can make a Bio.

 

[gordo1]

Welcome to NB

 

[~Dream~]

Ya need more posts. Welcome to the Base, hope you have fun and please!!! Make a bio after 50 posts.

 

[Lokus Hatake]

If this is for RP then it is not the right format and you just don't give yourself jutsu. There is also a process for making custom jutsu.

Can u explain plz i dont understand

 

[Lokus Hatake]

Ya need more posts. Welcome to the Base, hope you have fun and please!!! Make a bio after 50 posts.

ty

 

[~Dream~]

You put alot of work into this but ya need more posts. :/

 

[Lokus Hatake]

I believe you need at least 50 posts before you can make a Bio.

ty but where do i know my post

 

[Joon]

You need 50 post to make a Bio. Follow Bio Template: Ninja Rank is Genin, Add pictures and a History, etc. You know the Basic Ninjutsu and Taijutsu which E-rank. You have no training so remove the Ninjutsu. Any other Anime reference besides Naruto is invaild and needs to be remove such as Bleach. Also, your abilities are impossible becuase you have no previous training so remove them.

For other information: (Cannot provide links at the moment) Click on the Tab above, Fourms, RPG, Click Character Bio-, Stickys should hlep for there-on.

Alternate: Click Forum at the top page. Click the Questions and Suggestions Tab, Sticky Naruto Base Frequently Asked Questions. Under the first post you would see Lawliet Signature, links. One would say Role Playing (or someting along those line). Click it and should help you with rest.

 

[Lokus Hatake]

You put alot of work into this but ya need more posts. :/

Ty for understanding but where do i see posts

 

[Lokus Hatake]

You need 50 post to make a Bio. Follow Bio Template: Ninja Rank is Genin, Add pictures and a History, etc. You know the Basic Ninjutsu and Taijutsu which E-rank. You have no training so remove the Ninjutsu. Any other Anime reference besides Naruto is invaild and needs to be remove such as Bleach. Also, your abilities are impossible becuase you have no previous training so remove them.

TY sorry new here lol

 

[Q of the Sharingan]

Here is the Bio rules in bulk

You must be registered for see links

Here is the Bio template

You must be registered for see links

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And like others said. You need 50 posts before you can make a bio.

 

[Lokus Hatake]

Here is the Bio rules in bulk

You must be registered for see links

Here is the Bio template

You must be registered for see links

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And like others said. You need 50 posts before you can make a bio.

Ty

 

[Οdin]

ty but where do i know my post

It's right under your avatar.

 

[Ouacus]

Ty for understanding but where do i see posts

Look at the left side of your post where your picture is then look under it and it will say your amount of podtd under your join date

 

[Lokus Hatake]

It's right under your avatar.

lol tyxd

 

[Uzumaki Naruta]

1. Welcome to NarutoBase
2. You must have 50 posts before making a bio
3. Multiposting is not allowed
4. Read the rules It helps you get started in NB

 

[Gèckö]

ead the rules

You must be registered for see links

and use

You must be registered for see links

as a template
also you aren't allowed to have cj's atm cj=custom jutsu if you need more help on your bio contact me when you reach 50 posts i'll be gald to help you ^.^