ll Death Note ll Fan Art + Ryuuzaki's Pain (Video)

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

:hey:NB,

I started watching Death Note a few weeks ago and is still in awe of the finale ! :T_T:
I recommend it !


I'm on holiday to Philippines in 2 days so I decided to get one last drawing in the Fan Art section before I left.

Here it is:

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What do you think ? ^-^

Any and all feedback is welcome !

Here is a bonus: (Contains Spoilers)

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[Killer Vision]

this is my favorite on all your works bro. i like it! +rep

 

[Legendary Broly]

Well bro , the usual
rep+
Thanks
5 stars
and I see your lines have improved - seem more darker and defined - mega improvement xd
Keep it up

 

[lol99]

you are good

i would have +rep'ed if i could

 

[+Kyon+]

Nice

 

[ll FREESTYLE ll]

this is my favorite on all your works bro. i like it! +rep

...My work cannot even compare to yours...
You have my respect ! :worshippy:

Thanks anyway :y

Well bro , the usual
rep+
Thanks
5 stars
and I see your lines have improved - seem more darker and defined - mega improvement xd
Keep it up

Thank you, thank you, thank you !

Been spreading rep lately ?

you are good

i would have +rep'ed if i could

That's cool. It's the thought that counts.

Thanks for viewing ^-^

Nice

Thanks +Kyon+ xd

 

[ElementNami92]

I have no Idea who that is..Is it L? Or that other guy? I might start to watch it. Great Job on the drawing btw! +Rep if I can xdxdxd

 

[Ashflura]

Nice nice angles and headshots buddy! I think you captured the first two panels (the headshots) really well. Sketched lines are nice and defining as well.

L in the right corner, is looking a little stiff, maybe it's his hair, I've only scene images of him, never watched the show, so not sure if he looks like that. But I still like it nonetheless.

Suggestion, maybe instead of the smudging to fill up space, use patterns or even lighter pencil to shade strongly, it would give it a bolder effect.

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Quite good! If I were to give any critiques it would be in accordance with Ashflura's point about filling up the background. You could even leave some of it blank just to give some neutral space. Also, the shadow figure at center could be shaded to show depth and shadow (i.e. not shaded evenly throughout).

Really though, you did a bang-up job!

 

[Οdin]

Amazing. They are very good. +Rep.

 

[Aze]

I like the arrangement.


But I myself like more darker drawings.


But overall , good work

Also , Thanks for sharing + rep.

 

[Shiina..]

Niceeee Really awesome...

Well done, ++Rep

EDITED: Oops, sorry cant rep.. So I will vote your thread
5stars

 

[naruto s06p beastmode]

Awesome! this is a awesome one man

 

[Yuka]

this is really Amazing Fan-art

 

[Supermacaquecool]

Hum! This is gud
I'll point (and this might be due images's quality) that the face with front view looks a bit flat. The possible reason might be it is a slighty width.
Also in the central panel background needs more profundity.

 

[Nimmy]

So I just recently started reading the Death Note manga, and I love it too! I'm gonna watch the anime too :3 But I love this drawing! ^_^ Awesome job!

 

[Scooby Doo]

I like it, very good job! I cannot give any feedback because IMO its good as it is