Listen.. or nah

[Smirk]

what i do for fun
sorta kinda has somethin to do with the Narutoverse so figured, share it.

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[Pumpkin Ninja]

The music was kind of choppy but the flow was nice.

 

[Sasuke The Solo God]

Straight fire. Love the flow and unique rhymes. I like how you added in naruto stuff. The mixing could be bettter, things don't mesh well i.e. your voice is overpowered by the beat.

Did you make the beat???

 

[deadtor93]

That was a really enjoyable listen. Good job.

 

[Jazzy Stardust]

i had saved this in my notes and forgot to post my bad :nefer:

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so i listened to that and few other things you have on soundcloud. you definitely can rap nicely i also like your lyrics, its real shit youre being brave with your innerself which is very important to your artistry and expression. idk how old you are but your voice tone sounds like it might mature some more but even so youre flow is nice. you have natural timing with the rhythm and accents, nice job. only thing i would say is try adding more emotion to your tone to match the words, i mean yell if you have too..sometimes. playing cool and mild is easy, but the more you sell the feeling, the more people will react. at least in my experience

its obvious you're just having fun and experimenting, which i encourage you go keep doing. like one song that had a chill guitar backing youre rapping like big Sean, i mean it straight up sounded like him so bravo because hes a good rapper. but all of those songs are clearly unfinished, its just a long verse with a intro and outro in mono signal lol which isnt bad, i have tons of ideas like that..just saved not uploaded xD so im not gonna really comment too much on that song structures, other than maybe on the Sight one i would add more eastern melodies, would just add to the Naruto theme but thats just me

but anyways keep having fun and doing that, youre on the right path. working on your expression and creativity is the absolute most important thing. then when youre ready for an EP or mixtape itll be easy to let the energy flow out into a track. also i like the beats you picked as well

 

[Tantalus Thief]

pretty good. Beat is lit and the flow is strong. Keep working at it. Try experimenting with other styles.

 

[RuckenTM]

Nice flow but not my style

 

[Smirk]

The music was kind of choppy but the flow was nice.

Thanks bro

Straight fire. Love the flow and unique rhymes. I like how you added in naruto stuff. The mixing could be bettter, things don't mesh well i.e. your voice is overpowered by the beat.
Did you make the beat???

Thanks man, i appreciate it and it should sound better once its leveled and mastered, no sir, someone named "Nish" produced the beat

That was a really enjoyable listen. Good job.

Thank you

i had saved this in my notes and forgot to post my bad :nefer:

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so i listened to that and few other things you have on soundcloud. you definitely can rap nicely i also like your lyrics, its real shit youre being brave with your innerself which is very important to your artistry and expression. idk how old you are but your voice tone sounds like it might mature some more but even so youre flow is nice. you have natural timing with the rhythm and accents, nice job. only thing i would say is try adding more emotion to your tone to match the words, i mean yell if you have too..sometimes. playing cool and mild is easy, but the more you sell the feeling, the more people will react. at least in my experience

its obvious you're just having fun and experimenting, which i encourage you go keep doing. like one song that had a chill guitar backing youre rapping like big Sean, i mean it straight up sounded like him so bravo because hes a good rapper. but all of those songs are clearly unfinished, its just a long verse with a intro and outro in mono signal lol which isnt bad, i have tons of ideas like that..just saved not uploaded xD so im not gonna really comment too much on that song structures, other than maybe on the Sight one i would add more eastern melodies, would just add to the Naruto theme but thats just me

but anyways keep having fun and doing that, youre on the right path. working on your expression and creativity is the absolute most important thing. then when youre ready for an EP or mixtape itll be easy to let the energy flow out into a track. also i like the beats you picked as well

Thank you, everything i have on soundcloud is raw, no mixing no leveling, unmastered, just some reverb n some have a slight effect just to make mesh as well as possible, im working on a project to put out in the Fall, my actual projects will all be done with better quality =D

pretty good. Beat is lit and the flow is strong. Keep working at it. Try experimenting with other styles.

Im all about variety, once im finished with my actual projects, it'll be easier to see lol

Nice flow but not my style

I appreciate that you listened tho !

Thanks to everyone who listened, i appreciate it, but if theres anyone interested, i uploaded two new tracks.

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Note: Nothing is mixed/leveled and /or mastered. Yet.

 

[Jazzy Stardust]

Thank you, everything i have on soundcloud is raw, no mixing no leveling, unmastered, just some reverb n some have a slight effect just to make mesh as well as possible, im working on a project to put out in the Fall, my actual projects will all be done with better quality =D

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yeah no problem and good luck with whatever youre trying to accomplish