Lightning with Nathan.

[Unatural]

Getting better.

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Gather your raiton chakra around your whole body, then run at my clone and shock him.

-Creates clone.-

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra around my whole body,and runs at sensei's clone and shock him*
"Lightning Style: Raging Thunder"

 

[Nathan]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra around my whole body,and runs at sensei's clone and shock him*
"Lightning Style: Raging Thunder"

Getting better.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Gather your Raiton chakra up then create an electric field shield that explodes on impact.

 

[Unatural]

Getting better.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Gather your Raiton chakra up then create an electric field shield that explodes on impact.

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up and creates an electric field shield that explodes on impact.*

 

[Nathan]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up and creates an electric field shield that explodes on impact.*

It needs to be longer.
Please try with this next jutsu.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Now, gather your ration chakra in your mouth, then release a wave of lighting bolts at your target.

 

[Unatural]

It needs to be longer.
Please try with this next jutsu.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Now, gather your ration chakra in your mouth, then release a wave of lighting bolts at your target.[/QUOTE

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my mout and releases a wave of light bolts at tree boom and it get cut*

 

[Nathan]

Alright.
But I want at least three lines when it comes to these jutsu's. I also want pros and cons for each jutsu too.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

This is a simple jutsu, gather a small amount of raiton chakra in your hands, then release the chakra to create a wave of electricity. The wave can vary can be a surge to shock or a powerful stream of lighting. This jutsu is ideal to use with a water jutsu.

 

[Unatural]

Alright.
But I want at least three lines when it comes to these jutsu's. I also want pros and cons for each jutsu too.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

This is a simple jutsu, gather a small amount of raiton chakra in your hands, then release the chakra to create a wave of electricity. The wave can vary can be a surge to shock or a powerful stream of lighting. This jutsu is ideal to use with a water jutsu.

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my hands and then releases the chakra to create a of electricity.the wave can vary can be a surge to shock or a powerful stream of lighting. This jutsu is ideal to use with a water jutsu.*
Sasuke:sensei nathan! whats pros and cons

 

[Nathan]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my hands and then releases the chakra to create a of electricity.the wave can vary can be a surge to shock or a powerful stream of lighting. This jutsu is ideal to use with a water jutsu.*
Sasuke:sensei nathan! whats pros and cons

Getting better.

Example;
The advantage & disadvantages of the jutsu.

Moving on, try it with the next jutsu.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

First, gather your raiton chakra in your hands then release it while you're releasing it, manipulate the shape of the chakra to form a ball of electrical energy and launch it at your target.

 

[Unatural]

Getting better.

Example;
The advantage & disadvantages of the jutsu.

Moving on, try it with the next jutsu.

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

First, gather your raiton chakra in your hands then release it while you're releasing it, manipulate the shape of the chakra to form a ball of electrical energy and launch it at your target.

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my hands and then while i am releasing it,manipulates the shape of the chakra to form a ball of electrical energy and launch it at sensei*
sasuke:sorry sensei

 

[Nathan]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my hands and then while i am releasing it,manipulates the shape of the chakra to form a ball of electrical energy and launch it at sensei*
sasuke:sorry sensei

Okay, I really need it to be longer, also you need to add a advantage & disadvantage of each jutsu, you preform.