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[Alternative]

1. Very good. Electromagnetic Murder is created more for shredding through rocks and so on, so it's rather plausible. I'm not too sure if the Water Dragon Whip is self-sustaining, but it should be plausible. You might be better off using the C-Rank Water Whip instead.

2. Another good one, classic Fire/Lightning combo with a little twist on it. Not much I could say here.

3. Never underestimate the power of freeform Taijutsu. That is a powerful tool and you can do a lot of stuff with it which isn't limited to what we have in our jutsu list. While this technique is better suited to single hits like punching and kicking, you can still do some pretty nifty stuff with it. If you've ever tried or looked into some mixed martial arts, you can perform things you see in there: roundhouse kicks, double punches, grapples and so on, the possibilities are endless!

I'm not sure if you have Genjutsu yet, but you could pair it off with this:

( Genjutsu: Kahen Tonsou ) - Illusion Technique: Flower Petal Escape
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes five handseals, appearing to dissolve into a shower of cherry blossom petals. These petals surround the opponent, blocking his vision. This allows the user to mask his movement effectively.

Giving yourself an effective escape and means to get in close without your opponent relying on sight, which is the main sense people rely on in fights.

4. It's fine that you've gone about creating the situation yourself, it shows initiative and I like that. But I think you've misinterpreted the usage of this technique. What this does is use Lightning's natural strength against Earth to run up a cliffside and create an electrical discharge to dislodge the rocks to fall on them. Your situation is great, but you'd just be sending rocks into the water basically.

5. Great combination, straight forward, nothing to say about it really.


If there's no questions, we'll move on.

 

[drxdroopy]

no quetion sempai. Also I ee the meaning of the cliffside jutsu now. I originally pictured it differently. Say an enemy creates a wall off eathr. Could I run up said wall and use it to destroy the wall?

 

[Alternative]

I suppose it could be used that way, using chakra to run up the wall, though I wouldn't recommend it. Though because this is only a C-Rank lightning technique, because of the elemental weakness Earth has to lightning, it wouldn't work on anything above B-Rank.

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( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s.

A little situational, you'd need to be carrying a sword with you which a lot of people do nowadays. You channel the chakra into the sword to levitate it with electromagnetism. You then create two copies of the sword, which would be made of Lightning essentially and control them to spin towards your opponent. Think of this as larger electrified version of throwing shuriken at people. Unfortunately you'd lose your sword in the process unless you go to pick it up. Sometimes people carry more than one sword which makes this better to use, so you have a sword to use afterwards.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid (Short range for the discharge)
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm and they then jump into the air. The user will then land slamming their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

Another simple technique, you jump and slam your hand onto the ground causing an electrical shockwave to spread from your position. This is similar to the D-Rank Lightning Surge, except it spreads around in all directions with a 5 meter radius from your position. It's useful, but again you want to be careful with when you use it.

( Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release Wall
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their chakra and then releases it in front of them whilst holding their hands out and they generate a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver a small electrical shock that can temporarily reduce their physical capabilities.

Now that I look at this technique, it seems really interesting as to what it can do. This is your Lightning version of the Rumbling Wind Wall technique, except it's differently oriented. It's best used against Taijutsu users though, seeing as Lightning has more burning capabilities. If you were able to burn their hands, you could pretty much stop them from using hand seals and so on.

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

Quite a useful technique, it's similar to a watered down version of False Darkness. You emit an electrical current from your hands after performing the hand seals and release it toward your target. THis is sort of like a stream, or spear or electricity but it's not solid like the parent technique, but rather just a current. You can control it in mid flight to avoid techniques or to weave over and under specific objects if you please, so it's incredibly useful.

Next batch of techniques, though there's one less technique due to this being the remainder of the techniques. Same process, I'd like for you to pair these up with other techniques and form combinations, along with explanations to them.

 

[drxdroopy]

1. I would pair this technique with my halberd which my bio Bankotsu carries if that is possible. Though it is very large so I am not sure it would. I would cause the halberd to become magnetic by flowing my lightning chakra into the blade the focusing it to create three exact copies and send them at the enemy in a triangular manner formation. If I can use this with my halberd then these would be very large and if used up close hard for the opponent to dodge easily.

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2. Well I don't really see how this is mid range unless you are jumping from mid range. So I don't really have a combo to go with this rather a counter. If an enemy would use a B-rank earth jutsu that affected me or attempted to trap me I would jump and release the discharge in the area around me (5 meters) and destroy the foundation of said earth techniques. It could just be where I don't have anything to go with this as to the reason I have no combination for it.

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(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

I would use this to create the large wall of flames that is equal in both vertical and horizontal size, thus blocking the opponents view of me if he were on the ground and baiting him into using a water technique. As the opponent were to try to douse the flames I would create the wall of electricity hoping to have the electricity from the lightning wall conduct through the enemy's water technique hopefully harming them.

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4. This one I could combine with the water style jutsu:

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(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

BIf I were to trap the opponent inside this water prison they would be incapable of moving easily, so I would quickly form the three hand seals this electric current requires and release the current from my hand at the enemy from mid range in an attempt to electrocute the water prison with the enemy trapped inside of it.