[Raiton] Lightning training With Hard

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Alright, we can continue then.



Stepping onto the training field, I see how another "Senphai" left. I gaze upon my student and slowly take my grey jacket off. With one hand-seal I grow an earth pillar with a small hook on it, where I hang what I just took of. I then begin with my basic introduction.

Greetings, I am Nikodo Uzumaki and I shall be your new lightning Senpai. I have looked over your previous training and judging by your previous performance I guess we will have a great time together. But as the greater ones before me said, everything can be further improved, so let us continue towards perfection one step at a time. My training method is relatively simple. I will request from you to perform the technique yourself and mention a few advantages and disadvantages. WE can continue then.

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defense to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.
This is a nice technique, which you can use is more than one way, so never overlook a technique. The obvious might just be a mask to something far more useful and powerful. You will make the Ox handseal and hold both of your arms forward. Charge lightning chakra inside your body and slowly set it towards your shoulders, arms, forearms, wrist and hands. Slowly release lightning chakra from both hands and shape it into a shield which encompasses not a small area right before yourself. Then charge the chakra nature into lightning, but keep it under control. Even though a harder process because of the violent nature of lightning, this is a test of how well you can keep the element at bay. This will be a test whether you you can control lightning or it controls you. This shield now, cannot only be used for defense as I told you. But when you are in close range of your enemy, you can create the shield and give him a very nice shock. Use the shield similar to how the Spartans do it, and come victorious from battle. Now...I will make a clone which will attack you with a earth based technique. Defend from it.

I make a clone which fires several earth projectiles at you.
 

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My attention is immediately caught as a I see the clone releasing several earth projectiles moving towards me. I then change my stance and firm my body balance. After this, I quickly execute a OX hand seal and thrust forth both my arms. I would continue and charge up my lightning chakra towards my shoulders, arms forearms, wrist and hands whilst releasing my Lightning chakra and then manipulating it from both hands into a shield against the Earth projectiles.

Advantages:
This technique has a high range of versatility considering it can be used offensively to shock an opponent and defensively to block against earth-base projectile attacks. It's also less complex and easy to execute in battles.

Disadvantages:
Although it can void earth projectile techniques, it cannot be used for defense against attacks the requires body contact or against solidity structure. It also immobile meaning, it can't be extended or thrown towards an opponent.
 
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Nodding after the reply I take notice how the simple performance and reply was all I deemed necessary. The individual before me seemed talented and a quick learner, so I continue further.

Nice work, let's keep going.

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.
This technique is a fairly versatile one. Put your hands in front of you one more time, and charge chakra in front of them. Using chakra control, create a wall or more precisely a half dome of lightning. This dome will then be pushed forward by you at will, and it can cause 2 effects on your opponent. Due to the momentum and seeming almost solid, it can stop attacks which are mainly from earth, but it can even work offensively by shocking and/or paralyzing your opponent. What I will do is simply attack you with a very simple small ranked earth projectile, you will break that apart and stop it, then shock and paralyze my clone without any need to finish him off.

I make a clone which fires a small earth projectile.

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.
This is another useful technique, but it can only be used when you are really close to the target, so if most cases when you will be fighting him physically. You will charge lightning to one of your punches and generate pure lightning around it. Once done, you will punch the target, at at moment that your fist connects, a directed and localized lightning explosion will form, which will further damage your target, in a way rip their body to shreds, as it shocks him. It can be very useful as a sneaky taijutsu attack. Kill my clone.

I make a clone which dashes towards you.
 

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As I see an object what looks like a projectile moving towards me, I'll extend my hands forward whilst manipulating my Lightning chakra and create a dome made of lightning that easily stops the earth projectile. In continuation, I further manipulate my lightning chakra and pushed the dome of lightning towards the clone which stunned and paralyze it.

Advantages:
This technique can be used defensively, as well as offensively. It can paralyze targets upon contact.
While in terms Disadvantages, this technique is only limited to short-range.


Again as I see the clone dashing towards me, I manipulate my Lightning chakra towards my right fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. Once the clone reaches a few meters from, I thrust foward my arm, punching the clone on his left cheek whilst unleashing lightning in form localize electrical explosion.

Advantages: Quite versatile as it can be used in conjunction with taijutsu techniques.
In terms of Disadvantages, this technique like the former is also limited to short-range.
 

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.
This is not a bad technique. Prior to the directed offensive measurement, you will lift your hand up and send a lightning discharge towards the sky. This electrical discharge can then be used in an offensive manner by creating a lightning strike everywhere where the user desires in mid range of him. This lightning discharge can be released in anytime after you have sent the discharge but only in the same move or turn, don't forget this. Anyway, just attack my clone with it.

I make a clone.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.

This is maybe the most confusing technique in lightning release as it seems to conflict with it, but bear with me on this one. You will make a set of 5 handseals and then release lightning chakra into the ground. Then, you will rise 4 lightning pillars, around the target. You will then send the lightning to each pillar and they will send over a barrage of lightning bolts towards the enemy a a very high speed. Since it will attack the enemy all around him, it might be a little problematic for him to dodge, so you can have an advantage there. Use it on my clone.


I make a clone which stands there.
 

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As I see the clone few meters from me, I restrain from unnecessary formalities and quickly raise my right hand, sending an electric discharge towards the clouds which creates an alternate lightning that struck down the clone.

In terms of advantages, this technique is quite easy to execute as it doesn't require hand seals. The lightning strikes are also fast upon execution. While in terms of disadvantages, this technique cannot be executed on clear skies.

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After completing the first technique, I immediately venture unto the second technique. Taking in a substantial air, I execute a series of hand seals and release my lightning chakra unto the ground. Through further manipulation, four lightning pillars emerges from the ground surrounding the target. I would then carefully send lightning to each pillars which triggers the pillars to release barrage of lightning bolts towards the clone.

One important advantages of this technique is that, target becomes virtually unable to evade the bolts when they are released from the surrounding pillars. While in disadvantages, the technique requires a period of time before completion.
 

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Your disadvantages are unique indeed, but some of them are misplaced like for example in the second technique, the techniques lasts for a while. Yeah the technique lasts, but that is not a disadvantage. If anything it is an advantage allowing you to fire of something else. And if I could request, could you increase the number of advantages and disadvantages? The more you mention the more I am sure that you understand each technique. Let us continue.

Stating that I hope my student didn't take it the wrong way. I was trying to make him work slightly more and show me his true resolve. Hopefully he will understand and keep his fire ongoing.

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.
This is a rather nice technique shown by Darui. You will need to make 5 handseals and then generate lightning from your hands which can be either released in a very uncontrolled matter, or you can have it the way that Darui did way back. You could use the technique in conjunction with other techniques which allow lightning to move through them, in many cases a water stream. The lightning will be able to be boosted in strength greatly and cause a fair amount of damage to everyone that will hit him. Though, As Darui used them both, is because of storm release and the ability to use both elements at the same time, granted from that. If you want to do the same, you will need an ally or a clone.

I make 2 clones, one aiding you into using water and one as the target.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial - Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
This technique is not a bad one either, it can even be great when used against more than one enemy. Slap your hands into the ground after you have sent electrical current to them. Have the electrical current use the earth as a conductor and move through it. The lightning will travel directly there till it chooses to break up and explode in tendrils which attack the enemy separately. This can be perfect in order to force your enemy back whenever you need him to, or use them separately making dodging or evading even harder. The potential is simply huge.

I make a clone reading a newspaper.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.
This is very similar to a previous technique, just faster. Send chakra into the sky above you, and that would be raw chakra as the technique states. Then, simply unleash the lightning energy in form of a lightning bolt, which will fall on the enemy, killing them most likely. This is about it...

I make a clone waiting.
 

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I'll begin by executing a series of hand seals, and generate bleary lightning on my hands. Seeing the aid clone beside me, I unhesitatingly signal him to release his water stream attack towards the target. Concurrently, I also release my lightning on the water stream simultaneously. This increases the strength, as well as the damages upon infliction.

Advantages:
In terms of advantages, this technique is quite versatile as it can used in conjunction with other paradoxical elements such as water. It's also quite dreadful against defensive targets as the output becomes greatly enhance due to the later element.

Disadvantages:
Due to the fact the lightning is unfocused when released, The user may potentially get caught in it without utmost cautiousness and concentration.

It feels am been mocked upon seeing the clone reading a newspaper a few meters from me. Angrily, I bring both my hands together and manipulate my lightning chakra which causes bleary lightning begins to crackle around them. I then continue and slam my hands on the ground, sending electric current towards the clone. The moment it reaches a few meters before the clone, the electric current splits into multiple tendrils.

Advantages:
Again in terms of advantages, this technique is very unpredictable due to its specialty of spliting into multiple tendrils making it hard for target to evade or even counter. It's also relatively fast to execute as it doesn't require the use of hand seals.

Disadvantages:
Not advisable to use in extreme wet conditions and wet environment. For example if it's raining, the user is expected not execute this technique nor its variations taking into account (s)he may get electrocuted.

With this technique, I simply thrust my hand towards the sky, whilst sending lightning chakra. This creates a lightning bolt which struck down the clone, destroying him.

Advantages:
This technique is also fast to execute similar to the former. It could strike down opponents even before retaliation. While in terms of Disadvantages, it cannot be executed upon clear skies just like the former.
 

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Not bad, I liked the performance this time around. We shall continue in the same pace U_U

Stating that, I continue.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.
This technique is an easy one as you will simply start by clapping your hands together. Once you have done that, charge chakra inside your hands, and bring a connection between your hands in form of a concentrated lightning rod, or rope. Then, you can simply detach one side, creating a sort of whip, which can be used by you in a free matter. The whip will considerably be strong and versatile. But, be careful as it is very weak to being cut from wind release, simply dissipating the rest into nothingness when it is disconnected to the chakra source. And while you have the whip active, you can't use any other elemental jutsu. I don't think it is truly worthy of the trade offs.

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.
This is a technique which was shown by kakashi in his battle against pain. You will send chakra to your dominant hand and hold it forward. The raw lightning will bounce of your hands, and shape into a wolf, while still being connected to the hand in form of a lightning wire. This wolves movements can be controlled, and have them attack in an unpredictable pattern, while you could even evade around techniques in a very fast matter allowing you to stand in an advantage. While, you need ti be careful because as you are using it, as before...no other elemental techniques, not even lightning.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

This is another easily explained technique. You will simply charge lightning inside your mouth, and release a lightning spear from it. The lightning spear can be split as it travels, but the rank will split evenly among the times it breaks apart. So, it could be useful, but the spear only travels a linear path despite it's long reach, a simple side-step could do the trick in most cases. It is not a bad technique, but not amazingly versatile.
 

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My apologies for the late reply!


Firstly, I'll start off by manipulating my lightning chakra whilst clapping both my hands intensively, creating a connection between both hands that subsequently forms a Lightning rope. Then I'll detached my joined arm, forming a whip of some sort which can be used in numerous ways.

Advantages:
- Very useful when inducing the state of unpredictability against opponents taking into account the lightning rope moves haphazardly.

- Also useful for interrogation purposes.

Disadvantages:
- Due to the unpredictable manner of the way the Lightning rope moves, the user can in some instance get caught within the range of the rope. This only happens when the user becomes less-focused or cautious.

- As a limited range of Short and Mid. Meaning the lightning rope can't be extended more than 10 meters.

With this technique, I'll manipulate my lightning chakra towards my well placed dominant hand, holding it forward. The lightning bounces of my hand, and shaped into a wolf thereof. A lightning string is also connected to my hand, which enables the movement of wolf when released to be controlled.

Advantages:
- Very useful technique against tricky opponents or in other words, opponent who can easily evade an initial jutsu.

- Also every useful when trying to introduce the state of unpredictability.

Disadvantages:
- Unfortunately when this jutsu becomes active, the user can't use any other elemental jutsus.

- Can't use this technique in wet conditions taking into account, the user can probably get electrocuted.

Lastly, I'll simply manipulate my lightning chakra unto my mouth and expel a lightning spear that splits in several tendrils which are more than capable of inflicting damages even against the toughest enemies.

Advantages:
- Very advantageous when facing multiple targets.

- Unlike the previous jutsu, this technique can be extended towards long-range. Making it reliable against long-range targets.

Disadvantages:

- The strength as well as the rank of this techniques are splited during the periods the it becomes bifurcated.

- Terribly technique to use against Wind users.​
 

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Well done, allow me to continue.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
This is indeed a very useful jutsu becomes it is part of a very useful part in RP, which would be the clones in general. You will simply create an image of yourself right by your side in your imagination. Then, slowly sap lighting chakra towards it, and mold your chakra giving him the exact same shape and looks as you have currently, after all it is called a clone. This clone is now a copy of you, made by pure lightning chakra, so if he were to suffer a hit which would kill him, he would simply dissipate into lightning, and if he is close enough to the enemy, or touching him...it would sock him severely. The lighting clone can use Taijutsu to the level of you currently, but you will have to limit it to only basic taijutsu battling, while he can use lightning release as well, only up to B rank. It is indeed useful, you will simply make one, go to my clone, and battle him in a simple taijutsu fight, to test the versatility of the image you created.

I make a clone in a green spandex jumpsuit.

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
This is more a kenjutsu technique if anything. You will hold this blade which I am giving to you. It is a simple Katana, a very basic sword....but rather elegant and useful. You will slowly sap lightning chakra towards it, which increases the vibrating principles of the blade. These vibrations will be able to weaken the structure of the thing you are cutting, therefore the cutting properties of the weapon you are holding will further boost. This is about it, I can't explain much, Translated in the real world, you will get a boost of 15 damage to kenjutsu attacks, or standard weapon attacks. Simply, cut my clone in half along with his own blade.

I make a clone holding a katana.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
This is weirdly enough, the exact same as some techniques above. Simply lift your hand above and send lightning current over to the sky. Then, with lowering your hand, the lightning current will fall over the enemy shocking him. I can't explain much more, everything was explained prior. No need to explain it, simply kill my clone with it.

I make a clone in a lion costume, cause.....he always wanted to be a lion.
 

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Alright, I've looked through the thread, and while the methods your other teachers used have their merit, I'll be doing things quite a bit more simply. Essentially, I'm just going to be checking to make sure that you understand how your character would theoretically perform the technique, and how the technique functions. So long as I'm satisfied that you understand both those things, no additional typing will be required. Of course, if you have any particular questions about anything we learn, just ask.

We'll start by tackling the jutsu you were about to learn from Six Paths.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

This is a pretty standard elemental shadow clone variant. Essentially, to perform it you're going to create a shadow clone with a bit of a twist. With this technique, you'll be using state manipulation on it so that it has a lightning affinity. You'll be using your chakra to give the clone its form, in addition to giving it the ability to move, reform, use lightning techniques, and potentially to shock an opponent upon dispersion. Bear in mind that the clone can only use B rank or below lightning jutsu. Go ahead and explain how you'd perform it, what it looks like, and what all it can do. And I suggest doing so in a little more depth than I just did.
 

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Hidan listened carefully as his new senpai set in motion his lessons. He loved the element of simplicity being introduced into his lightning training, yet for some reason he felt this should had been established sooner than later. Without hesitating, he begins by twisting his wrist, making sure it wasn't too conspicuous and creates a clone made of Lightning. He continues and manipulate his chakra, giving the clone a distinctive form as well as the ability to move. The clone is quite to identical to Hidan's in terms of height, weight and physique. It can use Lightning techniques to shock the opposing target, However it can only use B-rank Lightning techniques and below.
 

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Sufficient. Don't forget that the clone dissipates into an electrical field of sorts, not just a puff of smoke.

Next:
(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
For this one, simply channel your lightning chakra into any bladed weapon and use that chakra to cause the blade to vibrate with an immense frequency, in a manner reminiscent of electricity itself. If done properly, the vibrations of the blade will allow it to act similar to a drill, and the extra movement will grant it greater cutting power. Explain how you'd perform it, what the technique looks like, and what all it can do.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.
For this one, simply perform the ram hand seal and then raise your hand toward the sky while simultaneously channeling your chakra into the sky above your desired target. Then, manipulate that chakra in such a manner that it turns into a surge of electricity which will rain down upon the opponent from above. Bear in mind that this is a b-rank technique, so the electricity you create is of a somewhat mild power level. Explain how you'd perform it, what the technique looks like, and what all it can do.
 

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With the previous technique completed, Hidan swiftly ventures unto the next technique. He brings out a blade from his porch, channeling his Lightning chakra unto it which enables the blade to vibrate continuously with an immense frequency. The unceasing vibration causes the blade to have extra cutting power than that of a standard wind techniques. It can easily cut and penetrate through flesh and objects with bendable surface.

Next, Hidan performs the ram hand seal, and subsequently raises his left hand upwards, whilst channeling his chakra unto the sky towards the target. He doesn't stop there but continues by manipulating his chakra in such a way it turns into a Lightning current that instantly discharges upon the target from above. The Lightning current is similar to that of Thunder bolt and upon contact, the target is burnt severely as well as electrocuted. Additionally due to the fast nature of this technique, the target capability of evasion becomes nigh improbable.
 

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Your reply didn't show up in my subscribed threads for some reason. :( Weird.

No, Large Electrical Discharge Technique isn't particularly comparable to a lightning bolt nor is it particularly difficult to dodge or counter. While it's easy to read many jutsu in such a way that they seem to be really hard to counter, they normally allow for a much larger margin of error than that. Especially if it's a lower rank jutsu like this one. Aside from that, good. Moving on:

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.
You'll start this one off by grabbing two large or windmill shuriken with a wire attached to each of them. Once you've done that, you throw the shuriken and use the wire as a means to control the motion path of the shuriken to assure that they will hit their target. Simultaneously, stream your chakra into the wire and convert into electricity. This will give the shuriken a static charge through conduction and thus give them a shocking component when they make contact with your target. Should your target get hit, they'll receive a numbing paralysis which will restrict their movement for a turn. Tell me how to perform it, what it looks like, and what you can use it for.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.
So this one is laughably simple. Just gather some chakra in your hands, and release it forward while converting it into a surge of purple lightning. On contact, the lightning will blast your target back and damage them. It is only short range however, so bear that in mind. You know the drill. Tell me how to perform it, what it looks like, and what all it can do.
 

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Sorry for the late reply.

Okay, Hidan begins by swiftly grabbing two wind-mill shurikens, with a metal wire attached at both ends of the shurikens. Immediately after this, Hidan throw the Shurikens and use the connected wire to control the motion and movement of the Shurikens, whilst streaming his Lightning chakra into the wire converting it into electricity. The shuriken becomes electrically charged due to this act and thus would electrocute the opponent upon contact. Once electrocuted, the target is rendered immobilize due to paralysis for a single turn. Furthermore, the Shurikens is more than capable of bringing down Multi-opponents simultaneously.

Hidan again gathers his Lightning chakra, unto his hands. Through further manipulation, he releases his lightning chakra in a form of an intense purple lightning. Upon contact, the target is easily blasted backwards, causing physical damages and even shocking the target as well.
 

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Good, though the Thunderbolt Flash doesn't require direct contact to hit, just short range. Not sure if you knew that or not based on your description, so I figured I'd say it just in case. <_>

Moving right along:
( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.
For this one, you'll gather your chakra into the air around you and use it to create a spherical barrier of electricity. This barrier will serve to neutralize incoming threats of suitable ranks, and can be used offensively by either making a charge with it or releasing the energy of the barrier in a desired direction in the form of an electric wave. Whilst active, however, you will be unable to perform anything but lightning release and physical based jutsu.

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.
Go ahead and stream your chakra up into the air above your targeted location, and manipulate it in such a manner that it becomes an orb of electricity. You'll use this orb of electricity as a sort of turret which will rain down bolts of electricity on enemies beneath it.

You know the drill, tell me how you'd perform it, what it looks like and what all you can do with it.
 

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Commencing on this technique, Hidan mold his Lightning chakra, gathering it in the air and around him completely before creating a spherical barrier of electricity. The barrier has a diameter of roughly five meters and it's capable of voiding incoming treats of similar ranks quite effortlessly. It can be used offensively as well by releasing an electric wave towards the direction of the target but as a result ending its effects. In addition, the user can only use Lightning-based techniques and techniques that requires physical encounter upon activation.

Next, Hidan streams his Lightning chakra up into the air above the desire location, whilst manipulating it in such a way that it transforms into a orb of latent electricity. The orb will remained in the air of several seconds whilst releasing a continuous rain of electric bolts, shocking the target immensely. It is used variably to strike down multiple targets.
 
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