Lightning releas for edyelectric by noni1997

[edyelectric]

Thanks for helping me sensei/senpai I don't know what I should call you

 

[Noni]

You just call me senpai. Tell me everything you know of raiton.

 

[edyelectric]

1)It's a powerful element that has defensive an offensive properties and it is one of the basic 5 elements
2)Is made of generating high chakra vibrations
3)Its weak against wind and strong against earth
4)It makes a good combination with water and fire
5)The kg's that utilise lightning is storm release
6)Kakashi,B and A use it
7)The lightning cutter ,chidory,Raging Thunder are all lightning jutsus

I have been taought up to Lightning saber

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[Noni]

I did not know this, then may you please perform that technique with detail?

 

[edyelectric]

Lightning saber


I start gathering and focusing my chakra inside of me.And then I begin to mold it,turning it into Raiton chakra.Once I have gathered enough I begin channeling the previously gathered,focused and molded chakra throughout my whole body.As I have channeled it I release the previously channeled chakra out of my whole body,while simultaniously using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning and shape manipulation to make lightning blast outwards exploding on contact

Advantage:can stop up to c rank earth jutsu

Disadvantage:can be stoped with e rank wind jutsu

Its a good counter becaus you make lightning armour around you

Speed:fast

 

[Noni]

From now on your using this template here.

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B] 

[B]Ways to counter this technique[/B]  

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okay?

 

[edyelectric]

Oky senpai .

 

[Noni]

No need to perform anything either just the template.

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger ? Snake ? Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

After performing some hand seals the user will send a electric current from the hand which can attack several different targets of your choosing. Now its very handy because how far it can travel, it also has the ability to avoid obstacles that is covering your opponent. Its a streaming type technique so you will have to keep releasing it and focus on the technique for it travel, dodge, and hit the opponent. Overall its a great finishing combo technique making it hard on the opponent.

 

[edyelectric]

No need to perform anything either just the template.


What does this meen ? I don't need to do it with the template

 

[Noni]

Yes no performing the technique, just fill out the template.

 

[edyelectric]

Strong points

• - can break earth jutsu up to b-rank .since it is a c-rank jutsu -
• - can avoid obsticale. Like trees rocks boulders people etc. -
• - hits multiple enemy's .since it splits into different bolts to avoid obsticales -

Weak points

• - can be stopped by wind jutsu.since lightning is weak against wind jutsu's that is weaker than itself -
• - can't defend against wind jutsu .since it can be stopped by a leatst d-rank wind jutsu and is even weaker against c'rank wind jutsu's -
• - can't destroy high rank jutsu.since it is still a c-ranl jutsu but can destroy up to !-rank earth jutsu -

Combinations-strategies

Could use to lure target away from their position and attack them with another jutsu off guard.could use to shck your enemy to get close. And do another jutsu.T get past wals and stuff. Could spray water on the enemy and hit them with this jutsu for extra damage

Ways to counter this technique

Use a d-rank or above wind jutsu .attack the user from bellow. Keep making obstiles .attack user directly

Questions

what rank wind jutsu can stop this and what rank jutsu can it stop and what did I not put in the template

 

[Noni]

Very poorly written. I expect 1-2 sentences for each advantage and disadvantage point. As well as 2-4 sentences for combos and counters. Re-do it.

 

[edyelectric]

I edited it

 

[Noni]

A D-Rank wind can stop. You simply were not detailed enough and lacked creativity.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

Okay now its a simple technique and it vary from being a projectile or a streaming technique, depends on how you use it. The user will send lightning into their hands and release it towards an opponent sending a wave of electricity. You can send a short stream making it a projectile or continue to send it to make it a streaming tech. You can use it with a water technique. Its fast to perform and simple. Its rather straightforward though making evasion easy.