[lightning] bobisacoolguy

[Shirou Emiya]

Cole sits on a rock waiting on his new Senpai noni.
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Thanks again bro.

 

[Noni]

If continuation please perform last jutsu.
Also straightforward training or with RP o-o?

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Hmm... We can rp
Cont. btw
Cole got up after listening to his senpais instructions and He quickly performs a sequence of 5 hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground. He then start releasing a powerful surge of lightning chakra into the air. The lightning then manifests into a giant bolt with a triangular-shaped bolt of lightning. The lightning strikes through a cart and then travles upgield a little ways searing all it touched as well as carving a small trench through the ground.

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with

 

[Noni]

*Smacks student over the head with a stick*
Did I forget to mention I like to read o-o, more description please ^_^
Think emotion! Power! Texture! Feel!

 

[Shirou Emiya]

O_O OW!cole is at first taken back at his senpais actions. He then listens and says
yes sir!
Cole got up after being hit with a stick and He quickly performs a sequence of 5 hand seals and then slams his hands on the ground.he can feel the little pieces of dew on the ground. He then starts releasing a powerful surge of lightning chakra into the air above him. He can hear the static in the air as it crackles around him. The lightning then manifests into a giant bolt of electricity that streaks diagonally towards the ground in front of him. Cole can hear the ground where the bolt hits burning, turning into a dark charred color. The lightning bolt then travels forward in a straight line. As it moves little pieces of dirt fly up from around it as a trench is left behind it . The lightning strikes through a cart cutting it in half and then travles upfield a little ways searing all it touched. Cole then stands up from the knealing posture waiting on what his senpai has to say

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with

 

[Noni]

Since you are in A-Ranks we will be going one at a time to make sure we look at this jutsus as good as we possible can. Okay?

I want you to perform it the same way you did, we will perform it a couple of jutsus until I see you progress enough where you don't need to.

[B]Strong points[/B] 

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[B]Weak points[/B]

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[B]Combinations-strategies[/B] 

[B]Ways to counter this technique[/B]  

[B]Questions[/B]

Write in this scrolls okay?

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Cole walks over to noni senpai and takes the handful of scrolls.
thank you noni senpai what technique shall I now study on?

 

[Noni]

The first technique is...


(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

Its fairly simple but nice, with one hand seal the user will gather their raiton chakra into their hands and condense it creating the chidori. They will then raise the chidori high and release its energy which in turn release multiple needles which can pierce through an opponent and paralyze that area hit.

This is a great distracting technique since it fires from all over the place it would be very tough on an opponent to dodge them and blocking is just as tough since their is a constant fire of them being released. Its fast and easy to perform. A downside is you must keep focused on the chidori to contently send the senbons towards the opponents area. So I recommend creating a clone, if you have the training of course to send a straight attack to hurt the opponent. Note you are also a target for water jutsus, so expect the opponent to use a water jutsu on you for if the palm with the chidori is wet the lightning will go crazy and shock your entire arm or body depending on just how much water is used. N

Now enough info from me, the rest I leave to you.

Lancer waits patiently.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Cole sits down and begins to scribble on one of the scrolls.
Strong points

• you don't have to do the 12 or so hand seals that the normal chidories requires only the single one
• it would be hard to defend against b/c in the description it says it can probably go through anything, that coupled with the sheer amount of senbon you could fire you could pulverize most defenses
• this jutsu is really fast and not just a single are specific technique it is sprayed making it rather hard to dodge.

Weak points

• this jutsu would leave you open to a water technique or an iron sand tech b/c they are conductors of electricity so the electricity could be turned against me
• you could easily be struck from a jutsu from behind b/c it requires continual concentration from the user
• I ant think of a third one help me pwease?

Combinations-strategies a few combos and what not I could use are....
1) make a clone that's sole purpose is to pump senbon pinning my opponent behind his defense while I sneak up on him.
2) I could use this jutsu to make them more than likely use a wind tech due to the fact you can use wind in gust to stop multiple projectiles I boulder use this to my advantage and use the wind tech to enhance my fire jutsu.
3) I could make a clone use this jutsu sort of like a sentry gun if my enemy keeps dodging the senbon he wouldn't be as worried with me and I could use a water tech wich would kill my clone but also harm my opponent

Ways to counter this technique
Any b rank or higher ranked wind jutsu that applies in gust instead of precise blows the main reason I would use a wind tech is b/c wind is transparent so I would be able to keep my eye on my opponent still.
Questions I couldn't really find good weak points except for the ones you said could you help me find a third?

After 30 or so minutes of scribbling cole stands up and wakes his now dozing teacher.
oi! Teacher wake up!
With noni now awake cole starts to preform his new technique following te exact instructions.

Cole begins by performing the dog handseal and pulling from his chakra network some chakra to the palm of his hand. He then uses his nature transformation making the pooled chakra like lightning. The chakra vibrates causing crackling noses and what not. The chakra slowly grows till it sounds like lots of birds chirping in Coles Hand. Cole then raises his palm and releases the lightnig chakra outwards. He then uses his shape manipulation to shape his chakra so that lots of tiny little needles of lightning are shot forward at high speeds. The needles travel and travel forward till they embed them selfs deep into the side of a tree. Searing the edges from where they entered the tree.

 

[Noni]

*Noni wakes up*
Don't scream in my ear, and you don't need to perform anymore you suffice. Also another disadvantage could be that the senbons do not go a longer range, why is that bad? It loses the mobility it has, its much difficult to counter jutsus that go long ranges right? Its harder for evasion and distracts the opponent to a larger extent. Also this jutsu has sound to it, that is very loud. Its not a jutsu you would use as a snick attack, we have heard the electrical pops the chidori makes and the senbons are also loud enough to hear. Not a technique to use to try and make a swift quite kill.

Now I gave you two @_@ here are some pointers.

When it comes to figuring out advantages and disadvantages. Think not of what is obvious. Think what is out side the box. Something that you might not have notice until you have given it a second read. What I always did was search the jutsus and looked at the pictures or watched them through the anime to get a better feel. Also how would it be able to go hand in hand with different fighting styles as well as your own? Like I said the senbons are not for snick attacks, though they are great for Guerrilla warfare, sending constant attacks over and over further pushing your opponent back. Also think of battle, if you were to use the jutsu think how would you use it to put yourself in an advantage in the battle. Here is a big example, I'm going to use a jutsu you are familiar with.

Lets take Amaterasu, seemingly a OP technique with no weakness, little do you know it has many. First of all is its anticipation the user is smart will notice from which eye the Amaterasu flames are cast with the MS. So you would anticipate and make a defense to it. Also another huge one is though its blazing fast it burns very slow. I mean in the anime a Samurai was covered all over it though he wore regular armor and was still able to take the armor off with the help of those sand shinobi and be left unharmed. It has the same burning sensation but is simply is slow and easy to anticipate.

Now I used that one for you to get a much larger picture. I figured all this out by watching the anime or manga when they were used, and thought to myself "What is its true strength and Weaknesses" I'm going off track here, but I hope you understand now. Shall we continue? Anymore questions?

P.S. If you ever fight a MS user take those tips in consideration.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

OOC: Thanks noni sempai this is really valuable info I'll take to heart especially if I ever fight an ms user.

 

[Noni]

We will do one more singular jutsu and then we will be doing sets of three. As long as writing is done properly.


(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.

Very simple technique. The user will gather lightning in their right hand condense it all in one ball and release its energy towards the opponent causing a explosion, which can shock the opponent and push them back with some force. It only goes short range, its a fast performing technique as well as a quick release. Very simple and basic, nothing you have not already seen.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Strong points

• this jutsu is really fast so it would be a good use for a counter attack
• due to this jutsu exploding if it hit a wall of something close to the opponent it could still hit them.
• this is a good jutsu to use to move my opponent between ranges.

Weak points

• I could get hit by the explosion in this jutsu.
• This jutsu is short range only.
• this jutsu requires the use of both hands leaving me open to any counter attacks/attacks

Combinations-strategies I could use the sticky starch capture field to bind my opponent in place and then blow him away with this tech

Ways to counter this technique I could use this jutsu

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Futon: Kibishii Shippuu Kabe) - Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will swing their Giant Folding fan or Giant War fan at their target to create a small but powerful hurricane that drags the target with it several meters. Normal users can perform this technique by use of 3 hand seals before creating the Hurricane.

forming a tornado to block the orb from a distance b/c of the explosion.

Questions what would you use as a combo?

 

[Noni]

Now thunder up is a projectile based attack. Combos can consist of.
-Trying to force the opponent to lose balance or get distracted on his feet and then send the attack towards the opponent would make it hard for evasion.
-You could use guerrilla warfare sending attacks which cover many directions so a ground attack (Mud Swamp), an attack from above, in the sky (Flying Thunder God), and this technique which is aimed straightforward. Making it hard to block all of the attacks as one or evade.
-You can use a supplementary like genjutsu or hurt the opponents senses. Creating a mist or very bright light to hurt the vision.

Their I gave you some of the really basic combos.

Also to add to the counter you presented. It would not work, unless you had a fan in your bio which I do not know but if you don't, you will need 3 hand seals. This technique has none, you will be shocked before you send your technique. Lastly I want the combos to be more creative don't just tell me what jutsu you use, tell me how would you counter but also take the advantage to yourself and attack the opponent back before he can react. Look back up to remind yourself.

continue?

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Alrighty thanks noni we can continue ill work on a better counter next time.

 

[Noni]

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

Funny technique since it does generate any lightning whatsoever but it can work with combos and is very large. The user will 16 pillars after performing 3 hand seals which wrap around to create a box almost to trap anything within it. Its large enough to trap a summon or many opponents. The bind has a small box which you can send techniques in to finish an opponent off. The pillars are made of earth.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Cole starts writing on the next scroll

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Strong points

• This technique is able to trap opponent from all sides.
• Using it in combination with Fire Release and Earth Release, especially if you're in a team, you will be able to completely immobilize your opponent.
• would most likely force my opponent to escape by going up or down so you could prepare for escape and plan ahead

Weak points

• It takes a lot of time for pillars to rise up, giving your opponent time to come up with something he wants to do next and how to swiftly counter this technique.
• It requires 4 hand seals and isn't really great if used on its own.
• someone could attack you directly and force you to counter resulting in you not being able to finish molding the tech.

Combonations-strategies Except the original combinnation which in my opinion requires to much effort (Earth Release: Mud Fall and Fire release: Firing Biscuit), I think that this technique is good to be used with something that will limit opponents movements from the underground as well making him very limited, and also for it to be a very powerful technique, like Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld.

Ways to counter this technique The best way to counter this technique alone is to simply cut through the pillars before they succeed to trap you. Even when they already trap you, ou'r enot in a big hurry. Considering that wind is stronger than lightning, that goes in my favor and I would use something like Wind Release: Vacuum Wave. Although it as well requires 4 hand seals, it can definitely be done on time.
Questions none

Here you go noni senpai cole then hands noni the scroll

 

[Noni]

You have proven your worth, continue how you are now but this time 3 jutsus at a time.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

The user will form a chidori which he then summons a spear to erect out. The spear is very useful to keep a distance away from an opponent, it also acts as a chidori which on contact will numb the area of the opponent if caught. You can wield the spear with great ease, it can cut through the most solid of metals. Its great to use to finish an opponent off, and the spear when release is very quickly. The spears also after piercing an opponent can release more spears at the tip to completely destroy the opponent.

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(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

The user will release wind chakra and spin it around like a vortex, then add lightning on the edge of the wind chakra not touching one another. The wind acts as a base. Now the vortex can be a barrier and a attack. Its projectile based when launched but needs to remain focus while performing it, though its quick performance. The best part is if a opponent tries to evade the lightning can be manipulated and jump out the vortex to shock a evading opponent. It inflicts serious shock and pain.

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(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

The user from short range will begin to deliver punches and kicks at the opponent. Now with this small attacks be sure to describe where you are hitting and how. I recommend aiming for areas like the groin, head, and ankles. Then the user will have to deliver a final punch or kick to the chin sending the opponent in the air. From the air they will be hurt from the body attacks, then with great speed you will jump so high and fast your going to appear right behind the opponent in the air, then strike a chidori in their back. Piercing them from behind, the movement is very quick and hard to evade when you jump into the air. I recommend before you start the body attacks try to put the opponent off guard, something basic is sending a flash bomb to blind the opponent for a second, which is all you need to be in range and hit the opponent. Its a devastating jutsu, very deadly.

 

[Shirou Emiya]

Alrighty sensei here you go *hands over scrolls*

Spoiler

Strong points

• Requires no handseal to perform so it can be executed easily and quickly this coupled with its destructive power makes this a deadly jutsu.
• This jutsu could be used in a moments notice due to the speed of the jutsu.
• It can numb your opponents body parts, where you hit your opponent so you can use that as an advantage throughout the rest of your spar.

Weak points

• It would be easy to evade since it is thinner and it is straightforward so you can dodge where you see the spear getting longer
• You will have lightning in your hand so you are extremely vulnerable to water techniques, especially large scale water techniques
• The range is okay, i guess but it won't go to long range so your opponent can evade with that.

Combinations-strategies I would use this technique second or third, my first or second technique would be a goal to keep them in one spot and not move so i can aim this properly. I would use bringer of darkness first so they cannot see anything and most likely will not move. Then i will use an earth technique to create two walls of earth between my opponent so i can aim it better, and pierce from the sides where they only see walls.

Ways to counter this technique I would counter this technique by my usual hurricane fist because i can punch the spear of lightning and both of them would be neutralized. I can also use a fire technique that is larger, like great fire annihilation because it is much large in size compared to this chidori spear.

Questions Combos you would do? (No gen)

Strong points

• Even if your opponent evades the dragons head then you can have the lightning disconnect from the dragon's base of wind and continue on to your opponent.
• The technique is really large but also noisome so not a good sneaking move
• Requires no handseals so it can be performed pretty quickly

Weak points

• Once it is neutralized by any wind technique that is capable of neutralizing the lightning, the wind dragon will be seperated since the wind can't do anything on its own.
• Cannot go up to long range and that would suck because even though they evade the dragon, they can evade it by moving to long range
• You need to remain focused while using it b/c you have to constantly mol chakra so unless you have yy it could leave you open
  

Combinations-strategiesI would use this technique with a water source. If me and my opponent is battling in a terrain like an ocean, then i would use the C-rank water technique that creates a swirling vortex of water underneath my opponent to suck them in. Then i would use this technique to shock them while they are swirling and because of how this technique is, it can be performed quickly right after the vortex is formed.

Ways to counter this techniqueI would counter this technique by using pressure damage b/c it requires only one hand seal and is big enough so that it could hurt the enemy while also neutralizing his technique

Questions would this be a good defense too?

Strong points

• It is going to be in mid-air and because they are in mid-air it would be hard for them to maneuver themselves and they would have a harder time to evade or attack
• Requires no handseals to perform this technique so it can be executed quickly and faster then most lightning techniques
• You hit a chidori to their backs which is sure to cause major damage and even give them life threatening back damages.

Weak points

• You have to engage in fistfight in first and most opponents would never let you land a punch.
• You can only perform it in short-range so the range is limited, really limited
• You will have to risk getting into short-range to attack with the chidori which can be dangerous
  

Combinations-strategies I would start out with a clone so that I could do the punching part quicker and easier also makin it harder to defend and it gives me the chance to use the clone for a defensive jutsu while I'm in close range

Ways to counter this techniqueI would counter this technique by countering the freeform punch and kicks they release onto me so that my opponent won't be able to execute the rest of the chidori in my back.

Questions any other strengths/ uses?

 

[Noni]

Questions Combos you would do? (No gen)

I like using it since i have full control of the spear when it erects. So if I'm in close range battle and we are using some taijutsu since its a very simple and fast technique, when it seems like I'm about to punch I will release the spear. The opponent won't expect a thing. You also have the range in your favor.

Questions would this be a good defense too?

Very good actually. One of my favorites to use, I use it to defend a basic attack then send the vortex towards the opponent. It might be slightly weakened; depends on what technique it took but it would still be strong enough to send at the opponent and turn the tables.

Questions any other strengths/ uses?[/spoiler]

Sadly its main purpose is close range battle which makes it very limited. What I have already mentioned like how deadly it is and powerful. The opponent will not have much to be able to do if you connect with him in the punches. When we progress you will notice many more versions almost the same but with higher benefits.
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(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

This is very much similar to the jutsu from above but with only a sword. Now when the user dash towards the opponent with the sword the user will begin to strike the opponent with the sword slashing them upward into the air, the slash will cut them pretty badly. I would say aim for the stomach or chest, this would make the cut very long as well as have a large place to aim at in the body. In the air they will be vulnerable, when they begin to descend you will once again appear from behind them and send a chidori to crash them back into the ground, great jutsu to use for short range. Very deadly technique.

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(Raiton: Raiko Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

This is pretty much a combo of the two jutsus above. User will dash towards the opponent and slash upwards sending opponent in the air, while they are in the air you will jump up and begin to deliver a series of punches and kicks sending them even further up. Then with the opponent with serious injuries, the user will drop down to the ground and create a chidori. Then the opponent will fall onto the chidori piercing them. This is a brilliant short range attack and hard to evade. I recommend evasion to be Drunken fist, makes it hard for the opponent to guess your movement and will be unable to touch you. This is a combo in itself.

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( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

This is a very wide range technique. The user will create a clouds above the battlefield right above the opponent. The clouds will be generated with with a large amount of raiton chakra. Right when the cloud is made which does not take much time, the cloud will release its energy into a series of fast moving lightning bolts the size of rains. They rain down and cover a wide range. Try not to get caught under the cloud when it launches the bolts or else you can be effected. The bolts can pierce and paralyze. Its great for attacks in the air to distract or create awesome combos difficult for the opponent to evade. All you need to do is form the cloud and then release the bolts, you can move onto the next technique. The cloud though can be blown away with ease.