[Lightning] - Bazz >_>
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Ulquiorra as his Senpai enters the training grounds, the moment he saw him Ulquiorra realized what to do, He stood up back on his feet unzipping his coat down to his chest, Ulquiorra closes his eyes while inhaling the fresh air directly through his nose, as a moment passes by Ulquiorra exhales the air determining that his mind had been calmed. Ulquiorra begins to focus on his chakra, keeping his focus and concentration Ulquiorra gathers a specific amount of chakra to his stomach, Ulquiorra then channels the gathered amount of chakra from his stomach to his mouth, Using Nature manipulation to convert the gathered chakra into lightning, Ulquiorra could feel the presence of it inside him, Ulquiorra releases the lightning in front of him without wasting a moment Ulquiorra spreads out his hands and uses Shape manipulation to spread the lightning around creating a wall of lightning which would electrify anyone who come in contact with it which is proved after Senpai's clone charges through the electric wall, as he comes in contact with the wall he gets electrified leading to the clone to disperse.
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Ulquiorra as his Senpai enters the training grounds, the moment he saw him Ulquiorra realized what to do, He stood up back on his feet unzipping his coat down to his chest, Ulquiorra closes his eyes while inhaling the fresh air directly through his nose, as a moment passes by Ulquiorra exhales the air determining that his mind had been calmed. Ulquiorra begins to focus on his chakra, keeping his focus and concentration Ulquiorra gathers a specific amount of chakra to his stomach, Ulquiorra then channels the gathered amount of chakra from his stomach to his mouth, Using Nature manipulation to convert the gathered chakra into lightning, Ulquiorra could feel the presence of it inside him, Ulquiorra releases the lightning in front of him without wasting a moment Ulquiorra spreads out his hands and uses Shape manipulation to spread the lightning around creating a wall of lightning which would electrify anyone who come in contact with it which is proved after Senpai's clone charges through the electric wall, as he comes in contact with the wall he gets electrified leading to the clone to disperse.
Is impressed greatly by your abilities.
I have a great student in my hands.
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Throws them at you.
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I have a great student in my hands.
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Throws them at you.
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( Raiton: Bakurai ) - Lightning Release: Depth Charge
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After enveloping themselves with lightning, the user emanates a powerful bolt of electricity targeted at their opponent.
Okay here is a simple technique. The user will envelop their whole bodies with lightning and then aim at the opponent sending the lightning which was once around their body now sent as projectile; A powerful bolt of electricity at the opponent. Now this is a projectile base so you can send more techs after for combos. It is a straightforward technique but can be used for combos and distractions. A huge problem is you will first be covered in lightning, and that spells trouble for water attacks and leave you vulnerable to wind attacks. Its a small window but a smart opponent can easily take advantage. Be weary.
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand.
This is a fast paced technique which I like to use with combos and trying to force my opponent into a corner. The user will raise their hand/weapon send lightning chakra and a discharge is tricked and a bolt is sent back to the opponent towards any location of the users choosing. This gives the technique a rather flexible motion and is easy to perform. Right after sending the lightning technique you can continue to another technique making this a great speed base technique.
(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram ? Boar ? Dog ? Bird ? Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
This is a rather slow technique. After doing 6 hand seals the user will summon 4 pillars to grow from the ground and around the opponents area. Now the pillars take some time to grow but they go grow nonetheless in time, I recommend you do a distraction for the opponent to allow them to erect in time. Anyway when they rise you will send a lightning charge through the pillars and bolts of lightning is sent towards the areas covered. Anything inside the pillars will be shocked and paralyzed. This is great to trap large summons.
( Raiton: Bakurai ) - Lightning Release: Depth Charge
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After enveloping themselves with lightning, the user emanates a powerful bolt of electricity targeted at their opponent.
Okay here is a simple technique. The user will envelop their whole bodies with lightning and then aim at the opponent sending the lightning which was once around their body now sent as projectile; A powerful bolt of electricity at the opponent. Now this is a projectile base so you can send more techs after for combos. It is a straightforward technique but can be used for combos and distractions. A huge problem is you will first be covered in lightning, and that spells trouble for water attacks and leave you vulnerable to wind attacks. Its a small window but a smart opponent can easily take advantage. Be weary.
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand.
This is a fast paced technique which I like to use with combos and trying to force my opponent into a corner. The user will raise their hand/weapon send lightning chakra and a discharge is tricked and a bolt is sent back to the opponent towards any location of the users choosing. This gives the technique a rather flexible motion and is easy to perform. Right after sending the lightning technique you can continue to another technique making this a great speed base technique.
(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram ? Boar ? Dog ? Bird ? Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
This is a rather slow technique. After doing 6 hand seals the user will summon 4 pillars to grow from the ground and around the opponents area. Now the pillars take some time to grow but they go grow nonetheless in time, I recommend you do a distraction for the opponent to allow them to erect in time. Anyway when they rise you will send a lightning charge through the pillars and bolts of lightning is sent towards the areas covered. Anything inside the pillars will be shocked and paralyzed. This is great to trap large summons.
Strong points
This Jutsu is must when the opponent is distracted in battle, such as using Earth shaking palm technique to strip him off balance then as he recovers he will be electrified.
Ways to counter this technique
As soon as i see my opponent cover himself with lightning i would use wind release great break through technique to strip off his lightning then use another high rank technique to finish him off.
Questions
Nope.
Strong points
Like you said you could force your opponent in a corner then use this jutsu, or possibly using Earth Mud shots towards their feet sticking them to the ground, with the opponent unable to move you could use this tech.
Ways to counter this technique
I would use Earth release under ground projection fish technique to merge with the ground below and utilize chakra to emerge at long range evading the range of the tech and using high rank tech to finish him off.
Questions
Nope.
Strong points
I would use Earth shaking palm technique giving me enough time to preform the handseals and use this jutsu.
Ways to counter this technique
When the Opponent is preforming handseals i would use Fire release Intelligent hardwork and burn him alive.
Questions
Just to confirm you made a typo when you said it requires 6 handseals when on the actual jutsu there are only 5 or ?
- The range of this technique can lead you to an advantage.
- It requires no handseals seeing that it can be assumed its a less time consuming technique.
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- Requires your entire body to be wrapped with lightning the chances of the opponent using a water jutsu while you're covered in lightning are likely, therefor it can be proved as a sucide in battle.
- It requires your body to be covered in lightning first which would result in the opponent to expect a lightning attack coming so they would likely prepare counter.
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This Jutsu is must when the opponent is distracted in battle, such as using Earth shaking palm technique to strip him off balance then as he recovers he will be electrified.
Ways to counter this technique
As soon as i see my opponent cover himself with lightning i would use wind release great break through technique to strip off his lightning then use another high rank technique to finish him off.
Questions
Nope.
Strong points
- An easy and less time consuming tech along with the fact it doesn't require handseals.
- The range isn't bad for the tech.
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- Requires Clouds (?).
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Like you said you could force your opponent in a corner then use this jutsu, or possibly using Earth Mud shots towards their feet sticking them to the ground, with the opponent unable to move you could use this tech.
Ways to counter this technique
I would use Earth release under ground projection fish technique to merge with the ground below and utilize chakra to emerge at long range evading the range of the tech and using high rank tech to finish him off.
Questions
Nope.
Strong points
- Like you said quite a good tech for giant summons.
- The range is quite good seeing as how it covers the whole area in where the pillars are placed.
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- Requires 5 handseals which consume some time to preform the tech.
- Using this jutsu head on would be pointless seeing as how long it takes the opponent would have already prepared a counter so without a distraction this is quite pointless.
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I would use Earth shaking palm technique giving me enough time to preform the handseals and use this jutsu.
Ways to counter this technique
When the Opponent is preforming handseals i would use Fire release Intelligent hardwork and burn him alive.
Questions
Just to confirm you made a typo when you said it requires 6 handseals when on the actual jutsu there are only 5 or ?
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A little more effort and thinking man. Here is the next set. If you need me to do an example I will.
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
Okay this is a very nice jutsu and its sole purpose is to use with combos. The user will send from their hands unfocused lightning chakra, which can travel towards the opponent as a stream. That is fairly simple method which has basic combos and counters to it. Its best feature is it goes hand and hand with basically any water jutsu, not only that but it is a very fast when coming into conjunction with the water. Right when you send out the water, you can perform the technique which will meet with the water almost instantly and travel all through the water. Now little should I say that its power is increase by a lot when with water, has so many combos. For the counter I want you to counter it if someone was to have sent a wave of water in conjunction of this jutsu.
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
A great ground attack. The user will release lightning all throughout the edges of their skin and with a good thrust send that lightning towards the ground which begins to rush at the opponent, when it gets to the opponent it shock them on the feet sending a surge through their whole body which can hurt them badly. The tendril can also be split apart in separates tendrils to attack multiple targets. I should mention this is a rather loud technique, something you would not use for snick attacks, when you release it around your body cracks are heard and when channeled in the ground you can hear it easily. It travels long range, as well. It move rather fast as well, its great to pressure an opponent with.
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.
Very simple the user raises their hand towards the sky where their are going to be clouds, the user will gather a portion of lightning chakra from those clouds in the sky and condense it in the palms of their hands which they then send as a stream of lightning bolt towards the opponent. Problems is you will have to focus in the sky to gather the chakra, literally raising your arms leaving your arms occupied and focus towards the clouds. Little to say it can leave you open seriously. Everything else is very simple.
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
Okay this is a very nice jutsu and its sole purpose is to use with combos. The user will send from their hands unfocused lightning chakra, which can travel towards the opponent as a stream. That is fairly simple method which has basic combos and counters to it. Its best feature is it goes hand and hand with basically any water jutsu, not only that but it is a very fast when coming into conjunction with the water. Right when you send out the water, you can perform the technique which will meet with the water almost instantly and travel all through the water. Now little should I say that its power is increase by a lot when with water, has so many combos. For the counter I want you to counter it if someone was to have sent a wave of water in conjunction of this jutsu.
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
A great ground attack. The user will release lightning all throughout the edges of their skin and with a good thrust send that lightning towards the ground which begins to rush at the opponent, when it gets to the opponent it shock them on the feet sending a surge through their whole body which can hurt them badly. The tendril can also be split apart in separates tendrils to attack multiple targets. I should mention this is a rather loud technique, something you would not use for snick attacks, when you release it around your body cracks are heard and when channeled in the ground you can hear it easily. It travels long range, as well. It move rather fast as well, its great to pressure an opponent with.
(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Flying Thunder God
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.
Very simple the user raises their hand towards the sky where their are going to be clouds, the user will gather a portion of lightning chakra from those clouds in the sky and condense it in the palms of their hands which they then send as a stream of lightning bolt towards the opponent. Problems is you will have to focus in the sky to gather the chakra, literally raising your arms leaving your arms occupied and focus towards the clouds. Little to say it can leave you open seriously. Everything else is very simple.
Strong points
This technique can be combine with nearly every water attack, so the user should not just depend on water but use other elements, Imagining an attack from the enemy is headed straight towards you, you could use earth wall technique to defend from it meanwhile preform an water technique and after the wall crumbles, release it towards the opponent catching the opponent with a sudden attack and soaking him you could use this technique to finish off the combo.
Ways to counter this technique
To counter this technique it would be pretty obvious to avoid the water jutsu at first but since they are both headed towards me i would use underground projection fish technique to avoid this technique.
Strong points
This jutsu is a loud jutsu also it travels through the ground so the opponent could possibly avoid this by jumping and staying airbone, the counter to his counter would be to use the multiple mudshot techniqe which would hit him and increase his weight so he would fall down alot quicker then usual and could use this technique to finish him off.
Ways to counter this technique
i would use strong gust of wind technique to blow myself up into the air and while i'm airbone i could use great fireball technique to overall finish him off.
Strong points
This technique leaves you momentarily open, considering that it would be pretty wise for you to preform a jutsu to leave the opponent vulnerable for this attack, such as any water or earth technique but doing this i should also stay aware of the distance.
Ways to counter this technique
The time my opponent is vulnerable for a moment i could use any deadly attack which is pretty easy seeing as how the range is i could possibly make a safe distance between me and the opponent first before attacking though thats for you to decide. One more possibility is to use arth shaking palm technique to make him lose his concentration cancelling his attack
Questions
- Is proven to be very deadly if used in conjunction with water.
- The technique is quite fast itself so when you consider using it right after a direct water attack you won't have to worry much about time.
- One more thing is that it can be used with Water which is what its original purpose is, but it can also be used as a one shot.
- The bad thing about this jutsu is that the enemy will have enough time to counter the attack after you hve use d a water tech.
- This jutsu without water its damage is the same as any other simple raiton attack.
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This technique can be combine with nearly every water attack, so the user should not just depend on water but use other elements, Imagining an attack from the enemy is headed straight towards you, you could use earth wall technique to defend from it meanwhile preform an water technique and after the wall crumbles, release it towards the opponent catching the opponent with a sudden attack and soaking him you could use this technique to finish off the combo.
Ways to counter this technique
To counter this technique it would be pretty obvious to avoid the water jutsu at first but since they are both headed towards me i would use underground projection fish technique to avoid this technique.
Strong points
- Its range is quite a useful advantage in battle.
- The lightning travels at a fast speed.
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- Its a very loud technique and can alert an off guard opponent.
- The time when the caster is covered in lightning can be a great oppurtunaty for the opponnt to take advantage of by using a water technique.
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This jutsu is a loud jutsu also it travels through the ground so the opponent could possibly avoid this by jumping and staying airbone, the counter to his counter would be to use the multiple mudshot techniqe which would hit him and increase his weight so he would fall down alot quicker then usual and could use this technique to finish him off.
Ways to counter this technique
i would use strong gust of wind technique to blow myself up into the air and while i'm airbone i could use great fireball technique to overall finish him off.
Strong points
- Doesn't require any handseals and is quite a quick technique to be preformed.
- pretty simple technnique.
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- Leaves you temporarily vulnerable for a attack while preforming.
- The range is quite a disadvantage.
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This technique leaves you momentarily open, considering that it would be pretty wise for you to preform a jutsu to leave the opponent vulnerable for this attack, such as any water or earth technique but doing this i should also stay aware of the distance.
Ways to counter this technique
The time my opponent is vulnerable for a moment i could use any deadly attack which is pretty easy seeing as how the range is i could possibly make a safe distance between me and the opponent first before attacking though thats for you to decide. One more possibility is to use arth shaking palm technique to make him lose his concentration cancelling his attack
Questions
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(Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
A very simple and straightforward technique. The user will summon a water field right under the opponent after the water has been created, the user will send lightning chakra towards the water which will shock the opponent terribly right when its sent. It might seem very fast of a jutsu but it does take time between the water being made and the lightning chakra being sent. So the user can evade the water when it is created. Now you can only use ir from mid range, and after you send the lightning towards the water it become unusable. Simple technique, I would also say if a opponent was running and you create the water they might slip and fall giving you time to send the lightning. If they are attacked they will be shocked and paralyzed.
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[B]Drawbacks/counters:[/B](Raiton: Horyu Raika no Jutsu) – Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.
A very simple and straightforward technique. The user will summon a water field right under the opponent after the water has been created, the user will send lightning chakra towards the water which will shock the opponent terribly right when its sent. It might seem very fast of a jutsu but it does take time between the water being made and the lightning chakra being sent. So the user can evade the water when it is created. Now you can only use ir from mid range, and after you send the lightning towards the water it become unusable. Simple technique, I would also say if a opponent was running and you create the water they might slip and fall giving you time to send the lightning. If they are attacked they will be shocked and paralyzed.
Perform the technique:
I gather in my feet then spreading it across the ground and using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into a field of water under the opponents feet before gathering more chakra and releasing it whilst into the water which quickly electrifies your clone.
Creative uses/strengths: This technique itself is quite a useful technique and is surely one that is useful in battle but the question is when, The best time would be when the opponent is not in my sight yet he is in my range i would release a chakra and create a field of water below the opponent as he would realize this he will already be electrified, because this jutsu is mainly risky if the opponent to avoids the water technique which would most likely be as soon as he sees the water or when the user is airbone.
Drawbacks/counters: This jutsu, like i already said is mostly avoidable when the opponent is airbone, the one way to counter this technique which comes to mind would be to; as soon as he sees the water field below him would be to mold his earth chakra sending it into the ground below and forcing a pillar rise above the ground carrying me and avoiding the electric attack, its funny to be using a earth jutsu to avoid a lightning attack, so the possibility of the pillar being crumbled are most likely, so while you're falling down you could spew out a fireball at the opponent from mid air then once i have landed i could finish him off.
I gather in my feet then spreading it across the ground and using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into a field of water under the opponents feet before gathering more chakra and releasing it whilst into the water which quickly electrifies your clone.
Creative uses/strengths: This technique itself is quite a useful technique and is surely one that is useful in battle but the question is when, The best time would be when the opponent is not in my sight yet he is in my range i would release a chakra and create a field of water below the opponent as he would realize this he will already be electrified, because this jutsu is mainly risky if the opponent to avoids the water technique which would most likely be as soon as he sees the water or when the user is airbone.
Drawbacks/counters: This jutsu, like i already said is mostly avoidable when the opponent is airbone, the one way to counter this technique which comes to mind would be to; as soon as he sees the water field below him would be to mold his earth chakra sending it into the ground below and forcing a pillar rise above the ground carrying me and avoiding the electric attack, its funny to be using a earth jutsu to avoid a lightning attack, so the possibility of the pillar being crumbled are most likely, so while you're falling down you could spew out a fireball at the opponent from mid air then once i have landed i could finish him off.
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(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
Okay what you will do is simply channel lightning chakra towards the palm of your hand release it and straighten it out into a whip. The whip size travels up to mid range, and can only stay active for no more then one turn. You must keep it in your hand for the duration, if you don't do other wise it will be released. You can whip anywhere you aim and its rather flexible as well. Hitting an opponent with it can seriously shock them, nice simple technique. Huge downside is your a open target for water techniques.
(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
Okay what you will do is simply channel lightning chakra towards the palm of your hand release it and straighten it out into a whip. The whip size travels up to mid range, and can only stay active for no more then one turn. You must keep it in your hand for the duration, if you don't do other wise it will be released. You can whip anywhere you aim and its rather flexible as well. Hitting an opponent with it can seriously shock them, nice simple technique. Huge downside is your a open target for water techniques.
Perform the technique:
I gather Raiton chakra throughout my body before channeling it to my left hand, once i have gathered a sufficent amount of raiton chakra i use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning, before releasing it and manipulating it into the shape of a whip which i lash towards your clone as the electric whip hits the clone, it electrifies him whilst he disperses.
Creative uses/strengths: Okay, now this technique has a rather nice advantage for you, You could use this in many ways, the range is also very impressive. The one way i or lets say anyone who will use this technique in battle would be to firstly limit the opponents movements, and the best way to do this would be to use Genjutsu; the technique where you put your opponent under a genjutsu simply by preforming 2 handseals and making your opponent see his biggest fear leading him to be shocked and unable to move due to it, with that done you could use this technique to result damage to the opponent.
Drawbacks/counters: Now like you said, once you have the whip in your hand it leaves you vulnerable to water attacks, but not only that it can be avoided by some ways, possibly when your opponent is wielding the whip you could attack him with a water technique or when the opponent is about to hit you with the whip you could cover your entire body in lightning via the lightning armour technique so the whip would prove useless, though keeping in mind the armour last for only one attack meaning if he attacks with the whip again you would have to activate the armour again.
I gather Raiton chakra throughout my body before channeling it to my left hand, once i have gathered a sufficent amount of raiton chakra i use nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning, before releasing it and manipulating it into the shape of a whip which i lash towards your clone as the electric whip hits the clone, it electrifies him whilst he disperses.
Creative uses/strengths: Okay, now this technique has a rather nice advantage for you, You could use this in many ways, the range is also very impressive. The one way i or lets say anyone who will use this technique in battle would be to firstly limit the opponents movements, and the best way to do this would be to use Genjutsu; the technique where you put your opponent under a genjutsu simply by preforming 2 handseals and making your opponent see his biggest fear leading him to be shocked and unable to move due to it, with that done you could use this technique to result damage to the opponent.
Drawbacks/counters: Now like you said, once you have the whip in your hand it leaves you vulnerable to water attacks, but not only that it can be avoided by some ways, possibly when your opponent is wielding the whip you could attack him with a water technique or when the opponent is about to hit you with the whip you could cover your entire body in lightning via the lightning armour technique so the whip would prove useless, though keeping in mind the armour last for only one attack meaning if he attacks with the whip again you would have to activate the armour again.
(Raiton: Raiju Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.
Okay the user will once again gather their raiton chakra in their hand and release it forward towards the opponent, while manipulating the lightning into a hound/dog which attaches itself to the users hand through a bolt of lightning running towards the hound. Hound stays on for one turn as well, the user can send it towards the opponent and on contact can shock them badly, it can be controlled to go anywhere and react anyhow through the user. One huge disadvantage is you can not use any jutsu other then raiton, unless you have Yin-Yang so be sure to use it right for the one turn you have with it. Lastly since its attached to you water jutsus are a problem for you.
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.
Okay the user will once again gather their raiton chakra in their hand and release it forward towards the opponent, while manipulating the lightning into a hound/dog which attaches itself to the users hand through a bolt of lightning running towards the hound. Hound stays on for one turn as well, the user can send it towards the opponent and on contact can shock them badly, it can be controlled to go anywhere and react anyhow through the user. One huge disadvantage is you can not use any jutsu other then raiton, unless you have Yin-Yang so be sure to use it right for the one turn you have with it. Lastly since its attached to you water jutsus are a problem for you.
Perform the technique:
I gather lightning chakra throughout my body, once i have gathered a precise amount of chakra i channel it all to my right hand using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning itself before releasing it and shaping it into that of a dog before directing it towards my opponent, it stays attached to me via a lightning bolt attached to my hand as hit hits the clone it electrifies him.
Creative uses/strengths: This jutsu is pretty useful in battle mostly to the users of yin-yang. It doesn't require any unnecesarry handseals so its a eventually fast technique to be preformed, seeing this you could firstly use Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique to paralyze him and use this technique to double the damage, though there's a possibility the shock would release his paralysis xD
Drawbacks/counters: Well its attached to you, which leaves you vulnerable to water attacks, so one must firstly use a distraction before this. Seeing as how this technique is straightforward you could use underground projection technique to avoid this technique but thats a most likely way, likely things should be done on risky situations, but when you have the upperhand you do stuff with style. Another way to avoid this technique would be to preform a quick short free form jump and use wind stream technique to blow him self the other direction avoiding the attack.
I gather lightning chakra throughout my body, once i have gathered a precise amount of chakra i channel it all to my right hand using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning itself before releasing it and shaping it into that of a dog before directing it towards my opponent, it stays attached to me via a lightning bolt attached to my hand as hit hits the clone it electrifies him.
Creative uses/strengths: This jutsu is pretty useful in battle mostly to the users of yin-yang. It doesn't require any unnecesarry handseals so its a eventually fast technique to be preformed, seeing this you could firstly use Lightning Release: Discharge Lightning Calamity Technique to paralyze him and use this technique to double the damage, though there's a possibility the shock would release his paralysis xD
Drawbacks/counters: Well its attached to you, which leaves you vulnerable to water attacks, so one must firstly use a distraction before this. Seeing as how this technique is straightforward you could use underground projection technique to avoid this technique but thats a most likely way, likely things should be done on risky situations, but when you have the upperhand you do stuff with style. Another way to avoid this technique would be to preform a quick short free form jump and use wind stream technique to blow him self the other direction avoiding the attack.
(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
Believe it or not this was one of the first jutsus I loved using, especially during my early days of the RP. Its a great projectile based attack. The user will shoot a bolt of lightning shaped as a spear towards the opponent, it can also be split into many pieces though would get weaker with every split you make to it. Its a fast running jutsu as well. I loved it due to its simplicity as well as being quick to perform and very simple as well as effective. It can pierce and shock an opponent.
Perform the technique:
I gather Raiton chakra in my lungs before channeling it to my mouth, using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning itself i lean my head back a bit as if i was about to exhale a deep breath; i then release the lightning using shape manipulation to shape the lightning into the shape of that of a spear before directing it towards your clone, as soon as it comes in contact with your clone it electrifies your clone right before he disperses.
Creative uses/strengths: Now like you said it can be split into many several spears and can be used to take out multiple targets. One great use with this technique that comes to mind is to use after a water technique which soaks the opponent and leaves him vulnerable to lightning attacks, this is where the speed of this technique comes in handy, cause it wouldn't take much time to preform right after a water attack. one more thing is this techniques range is very impressive.
Drawbacks/counters: Although the spears can be split into several spears, for the opponent to take full damage of this technique the opponent would have to take all of the spears directly to equal the damage. Well the one way to counter this that comes to mind would be the lightning wall jutsu which would prove the spears useless once they cross the wall.
I gather Raiton chakra in my lungs before channeling it to my mouth, using nature manipulation to convert the chakra into lightning itself i lean my head back a bit as if i was about to exhale a deep breath; i then release the lightning using shape manipulation to shape the lightning into the shape of that of a spear before directing it towards your clone, as soon as it comes in contact with your clone it electrifies your clone right before he disperses.
Creative uses/strengths: Now like you said it can be split into many several spears and can be used to take out multiple targets. One great use with this technique that comes to mind is to use after a water technique which soaks the opponent and leaves him vulnerable to lightning attacks, this is where the speed of this technique comes in handy, cause it wouldn't take much time to preform right after a water attack. one more thing is this techniques range is very impressive.
Drawbacks/counters: Although the spears can be split into several spears, for the opponent to take full damage of this technique the opponent would have to take all of the spears directly to equal the damage. Well the one way to counter this that comes to mind would be the lightning wall jutsu which would prove the spears useless once they cross the wall.
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(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
A great tool to use, the user will simply create a clone of himself made of lightning. This clone is very similar to a regular shadow clone, it can move physically and use taijutsu. Its very proficient if used correctly. Now a difference is it can only use B-Rank techs for lightning and nothing else. When killed it turn back to a regular state of lightning and disperses. Now their is a way to take advantage of this, the fact that it turns back to lightning chakra means it still has lightning properties. Anyway an extra man in the battle is always good especially if its on your side. Combos are endless as well.
(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.
A great tool to use, the user will simply create a clone of himself made of lightning. This clone is very similar to a regular shadow clone, it can move physically and use taijutsu. Its very proficient if used correctly. Now a difference is it can only use B-Rank techs for lightning and nothing else. When killed it turn back to a regular state of lightning and disperses. Now their is a way to take advantage of this, the fact that it turns back to lightning chakra means it still has lightning properties. Anyway an extra man in the battle is always good especially if its on your side. Combos are endless as well.