[Raiton] Lighting Release with -L- senpai .

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As soon as Aoi sees the clone running towards him , he performs Rat Monkey Horse Tiger handseeals and manipulates his lighting based chakra to create a larger and more powerful version of the Four pillar bind technique . Aoi made a giant cubic oven which trapped the enemy inside . Then by moulding Fire chakra , he released fire inside the oven , utterly burning the clone there .

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind

Adv

1 - It can trap several enemies
2 - The enemy cannot see what your doing , so they wont expect the fire
3 - It can burn enemies down killing them

Disadv

1 - You cant see the enemy
2 - They can escape via hiding like a mole and thus you waste your chakra for the fire jutsu
3 - Its a little huge which can mess your battlefield a lil bit

For combos well , the tech says it . xD Use the fire technique which is better because it has more chances to kill the enemy and he doesnt have much time to perform a suiton tech . As for mud tech idk what it does since I havent learned it




Aoi takes a psycho look (like sasuke xD) and manipilates his chakra to form a Chidori . Then he saw how the clone was distarcted and wasnt paying attention at what he was doing . By using shape manipulaion , Aoi transformed that chidori into a long shaped blade which would extend 10 meters . The blade was aimed at clone's chest and by stabbing him , Aoi had killed the clone .

Adv

1 - It can take down several enemies (Danzo and Karin is a good example)
2 - You can control it with your hand , so if the enemy tires to go to escape you can manipulated again chakra to follow him with the blade
3 - It can reach up to 10 m

Disadv

1 - Needs Chidori
2 - Since its connected to your chakra you cannot perform other techs
3 - N/A

For combos , it's especially used when your enemy is at his verge of death . To have a badass win use this to stab him through heart . xD Jk Uhm , the most obvious one is to use genjutsu . Well all lighting techs need genjutsu to have more chance to hit so why not on this too xP Since its pretty sharp , the death of the enemy is certain .
 

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"That's alright, Aoi. Here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. Using this technique, the user creates sixteen giant pillars by using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a multitude of pillars, which then form a giant cubic oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.




Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.



"First, manipulate your Lightning based chakra to form a whirling vortex of electricity around yourself. Then manipulate this vortex to take the form of a dragon's head, and attack forwards. If it doesn't connect with the opponent, the lightning can jump from the vortex towards the opponent. Use it against my clone!"

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Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.

"Now for the last one, form the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, then slam your hand onto the ground before you. Then, manipulate your Lightning based chakra to release a massive amount of Lightning chakra. This will then pool beneath the opponent before releasing itself in the form of gigantic column of Lightning that shocks anything above it. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.
 

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(Damn I'm such a retarted one , I just realized that it's "Lightning" and not Lighting ._.)

Aoi begins by manipulating his Lightning chakra and released it by giving it a form of a dragon head which is made of a vortex of lighting that whirls around his body . Then by manipulating chakra , Aoi makes the dragon vortex rush forward to the enemy . Then the light jumped out of the vortex and attacked the clone , shocking him .

Adv

1 - The whilring of the vortex can distract/confuse the enemy
2 - You have to chances to strike with this attack , either by attacking with the dragon head or make the lighting attack .
3 - Requires no handseals

Disadv

1 - The vortex may weaken your vision of your foe
2 - Kinda slow to perform , you need to create a vortex and then a dragon head .
3 - N/A

Then Aoi performed Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram handseals and manipulated his chakra , then slammed his hands on the ground . By this , he made possibile to channell a huge amount of Raiton chakra beneath the enemy , and while giving shape manipulation he formed a huge column of lighting which sent the clone flying .

Adv

1 - Can send your enemy in the air , leaving you a lot of chances to strike
2 - Can take down several enemies if they are close together
3 - It also kills the enemy if they are completely distracted

Disadv

1 - Needs handseals
2 - Cannot be perfomred when in water terrain
3 - N/A
 

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"Alright, here you go."


Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.




Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.



"Then, form the Snake hand seal, and manipulate your Lightning based chakra to form a spear of Lightning from your hand or mouth. This spear of Lightning can then be launched towards the opponent with great speed. One of my favorite techniques to use, try it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that acts as target practice.

"Next, perform a Lightning blade and then, manipulate your Lightning based chakra to split it into two. This would cover both your hands in Lightning, and then rush with this Lightning into your opponent, shocking him. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a Kakashi themed clone.
 

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Aoi performs the Sanke handseals and manipulates his lightning based chakra . Whilst releasing he forms a lighting spear from his right hand , and while getting a better hold of it , he notices the clone that was standing a few meters in front of him . Then Aoi takes a stance to throw the lighting spear in such great speed which would pierece through the clone's heart .

Adv

1 - Simple to use
2 - Can finish off an enemy
3 - The speed is very fast

Disadv

1 - Its a lightning projectile and cannot control it with chakra ..
2 - Can be countered by a S ranked Wind tech


Then Aoi performs a Lighting blade on his hand , and then split the chakra into two , which another lighting blade would show up on his other hand . Aoi smirked and began to dash towards the clone . When he got near him he first stabbed his right leg with his left arm , and then he pierced through his heart with right arm .

Adv

1 - Doesnt require handseals
2 - Could be fatal for anyone
3 - Can destroy any Doton obstacle

Disadv

1 - Needs to perform a lighting blade on one hand
2 - You need to be near to the enemy
3 - You cannot perform any tech while using this .

 

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"Nice, here you go."


Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.




Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.



"Now, after heating up the atmosphere with a Fire based jutsu, you would create thunderclouds. You will then use the Chidori to take control of pure Lightning, and have it strike your opponent in the blink of an eye. Basically impossible to dodge unless through S/T and you must first use a B rank Fire jutsu, then Chidori then post Kirin. You have to wait a turn for the clouds to form and then use Kirin. Use it on my clone."

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Dean creates an Itachi themed clone.

"Next on the list, manipulate your Lightning based chakra and form chidori in both your hands. Then, clap your hands together, and unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the opponent. Best used when you are higher than the opponent, and leaves a huge crater in it's wake. Powerful, don't use it in short range though >.>. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.
 

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Aoi molded his Fire chakra and shooted a fire blast aimed at the sky . The fire created thunderclouds due to its heat . Then Aoi molded raiton chakra to create chidori , which then he would create a dragon made of pure lighting which came out of the thunderclouds . Once Aoi lowered his hand , the dragon rampaged to the clone in an instant speed , creating a huge crater

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

Adv

1 - It's undodgeable
2 - Its speed makes it versatile , a lot .
3 - Powerful enough to destroy an entire battlefield

Disadv

1 - Needs chidori
2 - Needs prep time and Fire tech




Aoi forms a chidori on one of his hands then by manipulating more chakra he created in the another hand . He then dashed towards the enemy and slightly jumped , then he clapped his chidori hands together to create a powerful thunderbolt aimed at the enemy , which striked at him and killed him , leaving a big crater behind .

Adv

1 - Enough power to kill an enemy off
2 - Can take several enemies down

Disadv

1 - Needs Chidori in both hands
2 - Unusable in short range
 

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"Good, a bit more detail though. Here you go."


Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.




Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.



"Basically, form the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals, and create a more powerful version of the Chidori. Yep, the Raikiri, or Lightning Cutter, a more concentrated version of Chidori, and more powerful. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.

"Next, form the Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger hand seals, and manipulate your Lightning based chakra, and release it from your body. This is not a usual release of Lightning, but rather in the form of a blinding light. This works by constantly releasing the Lightning from your body, and can also be used as a guise for Genjutsu induction. When timed correctly, it can be quite effective. USe it against my clone in a combo."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.

"After that, channel a large amount of Lightning chakra into your hand, and cover it with a massive Chidori. Then point your palm forwards and release it towards the opponent in the form of a 120º blast, that spreads outwards and towards the enemy. Use it on my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Aoi.
 
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Aoi took a fighting stance and bent his knees a little , to have a better focus on his enemy's movements . He then performed Ox → Rabbit → Monkey handseals , and moulded Lightning chakra and concentrated it on his hands . It looked like a Chidori , but in fact is stronger and more deadly , and of course more a conentrated lightning . Aoi then took his normal stance the moment he began to run , dashing to the clone and piercing him with some effort , making the clone disappear .

Adv

1 - Raikiri is actually a very strong technique where the user can destroy any shield and can stab any person
2 - Is pretty simple to use if you have specialty on Raiton field , this is useful since it can work on short range perfectly .

Disadvantages

1 - It requires three handseals , not that it matters but the enemy will have time to react
2 - Short ranged only , you need to be near the enemy to stab him .




Aoi started to perform Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger handseals and focus his Raiton chakra through all his body , releasing a huge blinding light which can block the enemy's vision of you and of course blind him temporarly . Using this chance , Aoi forces his chakra inside the already blind enemy , casting a genjutsu on him where he sees purple flowers to confuse him . Using this chance , Aoi performs Raikiri as he had enough time to do it , dashing to the enemy and finishim him off .

( Genjutsu: Hanaoka ) - Illusion Technique: Flower Hill
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons up illusionary purple flowers from the ground in front of them, damaging enemies with a chance to paralyze them.
Note: Paralysis lasts one turn.

Adv

1 - It can blind your enemy which is very useful .
2 - Can be used for many combos , such as genjutsu use or any surprising attack

Disadvantages

1 - You need four handseals , which takes a little time and give the enemy enough to react
2 - I believe you already lose sight of the enemy when you use this , (correct me if I'm wrong) , and if he had been a clone you would get a surprise attack by him

Aoi began to focus massive lightning chakra into his hands , forming a chidori . He then opened his palm while stretching his hand forward and released the chidori in a form of a blast that spreads outwards and towards the clone , shocking him and harming his body , making him disappear .

The first advantage is that it can create a big explosion or a blast which can take down an enemy if used right . Since its a projetile , you can perform another techniques while the enemy deals with it . For disadvantages , hm it can be no longer controlled by your chakra once you release it . And you need to form chidori first .

 
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"Good, here you go."


Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.




Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns




Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.



"Now, for the last one. First, dash towards your opponent with a Chidori in hand, and then strike the opponent as you usually would. After that, manipulate the Chidori that is active to extend it, which impales and hurdles the opponent into the air. Then, increase the potency of the Lightning in the Chidori to make it explode at the end of the spear in the form of an electrical explosion. This sends the enemy back to the ground. Use it on my clone."

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For the final technique , Aoi started off forming a Chidori on his right hand . As he focused enough chakra into it , he saw Dean's clone with a confident look as he began to dash towards him . As he striked him with the chidori , Aoi used shape manipulation to extend the chidori and send the clone in the air , which impales him . Then by manipulating the extended chidori , Aoi made it explode so it could crash the enemy in the ground !

Adv

1 - The extended chidori can impale the enemy
2 - The explosion can damage him even more
3 - This is a good technique to give the enemy a hard time to counter the extended chidori , if they are striked with the first one

Disadv

1 - Needs to create a normal chidori first
2 - Needs to be near the enemy and strike him down first
3 - Cannot perform another tech while this active , since it's like a lightning stream .

 

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"Herp, here it is."


Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.



"Well, that's it for now. Until we see again. Enjoy your powers, and remember, you can only use those techniques requiring Shadow Clones when you have Shadow Clones ._."

Dean disappears into a Lightning bolt.
 

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Aoi sees Dean as he spouts out his final words for a while .

Indeed Dean . I will keep that in mind . Until we meet again !

Aoi disappears jumps on a tree and starts his journey to Sunagakure .
 
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