Life in Konoha after the War Continued

[Kuroi Honoo]

The main plot has surfaced in this chapter and I like it ^.^ You have an awesome imagination I believe there hasn't been any fighting as of yet but the way you unfold your story-I haven't exactly missed it even though I'm a big fan of battle scenes lol Looking forward to more about the mysterious Arashigakure as well as the antagonist

You added to your title continued instead of chapter 6 and it may pose a problem when readers attempt to search for it. I would advise before posting the following chapter, in the title bar you type the chapter number. The numbers really identify the chapters better I think but it is ultimately up to you

 

[tupsytoodle]

you welcome, ....well done!

 

[Vyarrhartenn]

Really liking these haha

 

[Zawar]

it is awesome
i'll read other chapters later

 

[Memoria]

Nice work, it was fun to read.

 

[whatsupdealer]

Very Nice! Enjoyed reading it!

 

[Gutsy]

Not bad... of course it could use some more explanation and maybe a little more fond and such making it look a little better

 

[basegirl]

awesome!!! <3

 

[Chojuro Kun]

good job work on the grammer thoguh

 

[tom94]

Good chapter, I like the way Raikage seems to be a bit more light hearted WRITE MORE CHAPTERS!

 

[ItachiG]

Great Chapter!!

Ok Ok!! things are getting pretty interesting xd

 

[Angel90]

well its funny writing reminds me of me haha. Did you thought about those? Overall its not bad i like the start of the conversation with Sakura and Unknown Ninja about talking tomorrow

edit- this is really interesting

 

[Yin]

well its funny writing reminds me of me haha. Did you thought about those? Overall its not bad i like the start of the conversation with Sakura and Unknown Ninja about talking tomorrow

edit- this is really interesting

Ion think anyone gon reply to this. It’s hella old big bro.

 

[Angel90]

Ion think anyone gon reply to this. It’s hella old big bro.

Then I saw it late