Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

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i am happy you enjoyed this chapter

well i have always thought Hinata deserves it over both Neji & Hanabi because she was first born into main family & she is kind and i think she can do alot when she puts her mind to it.
I apologize for the late reply-I'm usually slow at replying to FF posts lol

I completely agree as she is in the main branch. Besides, Neji has broken boundaries with his keen learning skills and promotions. Its time that Hinata receives the spotlight sort of speak xd Although, my only disappointment is that seemingly Konoha 11 (obviously excluding Naruto) will never get to the level of Naruto/Sasuke. Kishi should not have downplayed Konoha 11 such as he has. I just hope that before this manga ends, each former team member attain some sort of power-up that boosts them near Naru/Sasu's level lol
 

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I apologize for the late reply-I'm usually slow at replying to FF posts lol

I completely agree as she is in the main branch. Besides, Neji has broken boundaries with his keen learning skills and promotions. Its time that Hinata receives the spotlight sort of speak xd Although, my only disappointment is that seemingly Konoha 11 (obviously excluding Naruto) will never get to the level of Naruto/Sasuke. Kishi should not have downplayed Konoha 11 such as he has. I just hope that before this manga ends, each former team member attain some sort of power-up that boosts them near Naru/Sasu's level lol
i am glad you agree and yeah they are all strong but they are not as powerful as Naruto & Sasuke but i will say this Sakura may not be completely there but she would not be far off since they where all trained by the sanins & we don't know everything sakura was taught buy Tsunade but Sasuke & Naruto have recieved more training since then i guess so she would be falling behind a bit.
 

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i am glad you agree and yeah they are all strong but they are not as powerful as Naruto & Sasuke but i will say this Sakura may not be completely there but she would not be far off since they where all trained by the sanins & we don't know everything sakura was taught buy Tsunade but Sasuke & Naruto have recieved more training since then i guess so she would be falling behind a bit.
Nice point, I didn't even consider Sakura's training with Tsunade. Its true that that could potentially become fairly close to those two is she trains even more with Godaime. Hinata should also become even more formidable if she trains with her father even more but hopefully Kishi does something to that effect soon :)
 

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Phew, just got done reading all nine back-to-back, and it was an awesome read indeed. Despite grammar issues, the story-telling is brilliant. I loved the speech Naruto gave at the beginning of the story. It wasn't some poorly done dialogue written only to try and make the chapter longer. I can tell you put lots of thought into that speech...or maybe not, could be that you're just that good. Anyway, it was very much alike a speech Naruto would have given. The way he talked about Jiraiya, Chiyo, and his parents was just epic. Very well done. U__U


I also like the actual flow of the story, reading it all, I feel like I'm watching an exciting filler. xD I thought that it could have been more action, but that probably would have just ruined the flow.


Another epic scene was when Konohamaru was training Itachi, Inori, and Minato. That was amazingly brilliant, absolutely love how you implemented the bell training in there. It would have been cool if you did a flasback with Konohamaru getting bell training by Naruto, along with some random shinobi, and Nauro tells him of the time Kakashi did it with team 7. xD


Something else I liked about it was how Gaara recieved a note from Naruto, and Naruto also mentions his becoming Hokage. Loved this scene as well. U__U Gaara getting a little nostalgic would have have made an awesome scene, perfect. :D

In all honesty, I loved all the scenes where the kages received the message. All of the characters dialogue fitted them very well. Not only that, but they behaved just like their manga counterparts. And the plot is great, love the suspense, makes you want to know what's going on, so excellent job on that. If you look pass the grammar mistakes, all of this results in a jaw-dropping ff.

Well done. :D
 
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Phew, just got done reading all nine back-to-back, and it was an awesome read indeed. Despite grammar issues, the story-telling is brilliant. I loved the speech Naruto gave at the beginning of the story. It wasn't some poorly done dialogue written only to try and make the chapter longer. I can tell you put lots of thought into that speech...or maybe not, could be that you're just that good. Anyway, it was very much alike a speech Naruto would have given. The way he talked about Jiraiya, Chiyo, and his parents was just epic. Very well done. U__U


I also like the actual flow of the story, reading it all, I feel like I'm watching an exciting filler. xD I thought that it could have been more action, but that probably would have just ruined the flow.


Another epic scene was when Konohamaru was training Itachi, Inori, and Minato. That was amazingly brilliant, absolutely love how you implemented the bell training in there. It would have been cool if you did a flasback with Konohamaru getting bell training by Naruto, along with some random shinobi, and Nauro tells him of the time Kakashi did it with team 7. xD


Something else I liked about it was how Gaara recieved a note from Naruto, and Naruto also mentions his becoming Hokage. Loved this scene as well. U__U Gaara getting a little nostalgic would have have made an awesome scene, perfect. :D

In all honesty, I loved all the scenes where the kages received the message. All of the characters dialogue fitted them very well. Not only that, but they behaved just like their manga counterparts. And the plot is great, love the suspense, makes you want to know what's going on, so excellent job on that. If you look pass the grammar mistakes, all of this results in a jaw-dropping ff.

Well done. :D
Thank you I am very happy you enjoyed my first 9 chapters so far there is 4 more out now :)

quality time at the ramen house! nothing less for the hokage and his lady! nice!
Thank you :)
 
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