[CJ] Lessons with Edward-Sensei

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Analyze this for me!


12) (Genjutsu: Kokkaku chūshutsu) - Illusionary Arts: Skeletal Extraction
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (mental stress)
Description: The user will perform the Ram hand seal, sending chakra onto the opponent's chakra parthways in order to disrupt it and induce an illusion upon the enemy. The illusion is quite complex. It begins when the enemy feels that their bones/skeletal system are hastily moving out of place inside their body as it eventually breaches through the layer of skin, and are now outside their body. However, the illusion continues with the bones extending and wrapping itself with great force around the opponent while tightening and tightening, with every passing second. For instance, the rib cage would wrap around the enemy's torso, and then tighten, restricting the opponent from movement completely. Of course, with the total loss of the skeletal system, compounded with the skelton's grasp upon their body, the target would have no ability to move. Now, without the skeletal system as a support for the body, the effects of gravity on the targeted body would be heightened, thus making it harder to breath. If the target does not break out of the illusion within two turns, they will pass out from the lack of oxygen available (suffocation) in the illusion as well as the compression resulting from the skeleton's grasp.
Notes & Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle; No A-rank Genjutsu in the same, or next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Edward
 

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It is a technique which makes the user believe that the bones inside his body are slowly coming outside, and rolling themselves around that particular place, limiting his movements and normal organ function of said specific part. For example, it will make the humerus of the user, puncture out of the arm and roll around it, or more particularly, the ribs, which will roll around the torso. Another amazing usage, would be the nose bones, jaw or skull, which will induce pressure to the head, causing immense feelings of pain as well. It is a nice technique^^.
 

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Heheheh okay next one.

(Futon: Hakai-tekina ōbu) - Wind Release: Orb Destruction
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Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will materialize an orb of wind, accompanied by a light humming sound and a bright blue hue, in an area within mid-range. The orb of wind proceeds to collapse upon itself, creating a vacuum like effect that generates the wind from its 5 meter radius. This flings the enemy inward onto the original location of the orb, forcefully moving the target to the opposite side of the orb. The distance the target travels is directly proportionate to their original position in respects to the orb of wind. For example, if you are four meters away from the left side of the orb, when the technique is performed, you should be flung to the right side of the orb, four meters away, equating to 8 meters. Alternatively, the user can perform this on a nearby location, providing a quick method of evasion.
Notes and Restrictions:
Note: Can only be used 4x; no consecutive uses
Note: Can only be taught by EdwardSama

I think I made this cus i hated defending techniques head on lol.
Analyze it pls
 

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Noice technique, it is an orb of wind which you can materialize in mid range, and it will rapidly, collapse, pulling objects from one location on the sides of the orbs, in a path going through the center of the circle, so in the sense, through the diameter. The distance which you have been from the orb, will also be equal to the distance you will be from the orb in the other side. The orb max size is 5 m, and it will move things proportionate to the location inside the orb.

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(Raiton: Shōnetsu no kuzure) - Lightning Release: Fiery Crumbling
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will place their palms upon a surface and create a ring of lightning chakra, with its circumference lit up with bright blue. Using their chakra, the user will cause the ring of visible lightning to encroach in the center, disintegrating everything within the ring as the lightning chakra moves towards the center. The disintegrating ability of this technique must abide the elemental strengths and weaknesses. To manifest the initial lightning ring into a physical entity/object instead of the ground, the user can place their palms on the ground and send their chakra through the ground and into the surface of the targeted object/entity (as long as it is in contact with the ground. In essence, the ring must either be created into the ground, channeled through the ground and into the target, or start from the ground and rise upwards (if the user wants to create a ring that isn't materialized into a surface, but rather, the environment). Fiery Crumbling is not an exclusively offensive technique. This can be used for supplementary purposes, like disintegrating the ground below you or even the opponent for an escape or a combination.
Notes & Restrictions:
- Can only be taught by EdwardSama
- Cannot be used to disintegrate living beings
- Can only be used 3x, with a 3 turn cooldown between each usage

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Nice custom. It creates a lightning ring around an entity or object, and encroaches slowly towards the center, disintegrating everything which is stuck inside. It can be created around objects in your vicinity if they are in contact with the ground, as you can send the lightning chakra through the ground when you smash your hands on the ground. Useful custom, very useful.
 
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