[CJ] Lesson with Shinta
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*Arrives at training grounds, tossing Akasha a scroll as he comes into range.*
So, give it a read and tell me how you think it works, as well as performing it. I'll critique when you're done. ^^
(Katon: Moesashi no Ame) Fire Release: Rain of Embers
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user expels a very large cloud of flame in to the air, however this is merely a distraction, the fire does not disperse but rather condenses into countless tiny embers which very slowly fall to the ground in the target area. When the user performs the Tiger hand seal these embers burst in to flame again, the result is covering the target area an explosion that covers short range from the epicentre of the explosion. This technique also causes large black clouds to form, mimicking the clouds used for Kirin however no lightning is present.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can at most cause three areas of embers to explode although the ember rain covers the entire field,
- The embers do no significant harm until they are detonated,
- Can be used four times per battle,
- The embers can continue raining for up to two turns, after which they become useless. On the turn of detonation, this jutsu must be posted again. The repost does not count as one of the four uses but still counts towards one of the three jutsu for that turn,
- The large black clouds remain on the field for four turns but again serve no purpose for kirin.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user expels a very large cloud of flame in to the air, however this is merely a distraction, the fire does not disperse but rather condenses into countless tiny embers which very slowly fall to the ground in the target area. When the user performs the Tiger hand seal these embers burst in to flame again, the result is covering the target area an explosion that covers short range from the epicentre of the explosion. This technique also causes large black clouds to form, mimicking the clouds used for Kirin however no lightning is present.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can at most cause three areas of embers to explode although the ember rain covers the entire field,
- The embers do no significant harm until they are detonated,
- Can be used four times per battle,
- The embers can continue raining for up to two turns, after which they become useless. On the turn of detonation, this jutsu must be posted again. The repost does not count as one of the four uses but still counts towards one of the three jutsu for that turn,
- The large black clouds remain on the field for four turns but again serve no purpose for kirin.
So, give it a read and tell me how you think it works, as well as performing it. I'll critique when you're done. ^^
Akasha
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Just 3 months later.... ._......
Well upon focusing katon chakra within their upper body user will release it whilst using nature manipulation as to generate fire and shape manipulation as to form a cloud of sorts. Now once this cloud reaches its peak in the sky (welp upon user wishes I suppose?) user will manipulate it as to condense it into small particples of fire aka embers that will descend towards the area user so wishes in the period of two turns. However user will be able with performance of a single seal to make these embers burst into flames. The jutsu would also bring changes to the sky brining dark clouds as to cover it, albeit they wouldn't have purpose for kirin. However there are some jutsus that could take this to advantage as to make them more unpredictable.
*Gathering katon chakra within my upper body I'd release it whilst using and shape manipulation as to form a cloud of flames. Once these flames reach their peak, I'd manipulate them once again as to condense them into small particples of fire which will descend towards the ground around your clone. Upon surrounding your clone however, I'd perform a single seal before causing them to detonate. *
Well upon focusing katon chakra within their upper body user will release it whilst using nature manipulation as to generate fire and shape manipulation as to form a cloud of sorts. Now once this cloud reaches its peak in the sky (welp upon user wishes I suppose?) user will manipulate it as to condense it into small particples of fire aka embers that will descend towards the area user so wishes in the period of two turns. However user will be able with performance of a single seal to make these embers burst into flames. The jutsu would also bring changes to the sky brining dark clouds as to cover it, albeit they wouldn't have purpose for kirin. However there are some jutsus that could take this to advantage as to make them more unpredictable.
*Gathering katon chakra within my upper body I'd release it whilst using and shape manipulation as to form a cloud of flames. Once these flames reach their peak, I'd manipulate them once again as to condense them into small particples of fire which will descend towards the ground around your clone. Upon surrounding your clone however, I'd perform a single seal before causing them to detonate. *