[CJ] Lesson with Lili

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( Katon/Suiton: Ojika Enten no Keiteki ) Fire/Water Style: The Antlers of the Blazing Stag
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After 4 handseals, the user spits out a large structure of fire in the shape of a flaming stag, which can be sent towards the opponent at great speed. The stag will have the consciousness of a normal clone, but will not have any ability to make jutsus, just to move like an above average stag in terms of power, strength, speed and size. With 1 handseal though, the user can apply water into the fire, which will create a coat of vapor across it, honing it to make it thicker and more tangible. The usage of water and chakra enhances and heavily induces a phenomenon called the Leidenfrost effect, where the water vapor coating the fire will force every and all liquid, water especially, to hover over it, allowing the stag to dive into water and water jutsus, piercing through them without them actually touching the fire, while just overall increasing the tangibility of the fire.
*The stag remains in play for 2 turns before the fire consumes itself*
*This jutsu can only be used once every 3 turns*
*The user is unable to preform Fire or Water jutsus higher than S rank in the next turn*
*Can only be used thrice per battle*
*The user can apply the water effect to a different fire jutsu by the cost of 30 chakra, increasing the damage of the fire jutsu +10 and making it impervious to water jutsus of the same rank. It counts as a jutsu towards the jutsu count and can only be used 4 times per battle*
*A strong enough water can push through the vapor coat, streams or masses of water of the same rank as fire being coated by the vapor, or a pressurized stream of water of a rank bellow will block the protection*

I quite love this technique to be honest, especially because of the water part when it comes to it. The ''main'' use of the technique has two stages whereas the first one is with performance of four hand seals user would release chakra whilst applying process of nature and shape manipulation as to form quite large of a stag counstructed out of flames (although it says big, how big exactly? I assume up to the size of a human?). The stag would be sentient, similar to the clones however witout ability to actually perform jutsus. It would be able to assist user in battle due it's size, speed as well as strength.

Now the next step of the technique is what got me to actually want it. By performance of a single hand seal user would be able to apply water chakra to the stag which would cause outer layer of fire to vapor changing properties of it and making it thicker as well as more tangible and adding a protective trait to the technique which would compel each water like substance to just passes through without affecting it. Basically grinding the capabilities of fire and allowing for effect similar to the one which appears when someone spils oil in a heated pan. This kind of affect would cause the stag to just pass through any water like substance as if it wasn't even there however keeping in mind elemental weaknesses and strengths. The stag can stay on the battlefield in duration of two turnes before dispersing due to fire consuming itself.

One great plus when it comes to this technique is ability to bestow second ''phase'' of this technique which is applying water chakra on fire chakra on any and all fire techniques. However I assume that those fire techniques have to be more solid rather then intangible? Despite that, the drawback of this is chakra cost when it comes to application of this jutsu to others, user would be drained 30 chakra points for each time he applies this technique to another one The application of such can be done four times per each battle. Although such can be ignored due to benefit it gives out, a increase in 10 damage points to a fire jutsu as well as ability to sustain water techniques of same rank.
 

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Alright so, the stag mimics reality, though he is slightly bigger and stronger. A red deer stag can reach heights of around 2,50m, so it would be all right to say the fire stag can be around 3 meters, or around the size of two small human adults.

Alright, as you pointed out, there are basically 2 Techniques, 2 Phases, in this one technique.

1 - A rank - Fire Stag
2 - A rank - Leidenfrost Water Effect

Combining the two, you can create the full fledged blazing stag, S rank in strength. This is one jutsu. You can, though, use just the second technique, making another jutsu, which has it's own cost, 30, and adapted to be used with any fire technique. It's easier to think of them as separate techniques, because it allows you to apply the stag effect (lol) to any other fire, adding +10 damage to it.
 
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