[CJ] Lesson with -L-

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*Pops out of nowhere*

Yo, perform this. Also, an advantage and disadvantage.

(Katon: Kasai To Chi) Fire Style: Fire and Blood
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range : Mid
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description:
-The user performs the Dog -> Rat -> Ox
handseals and greatly manipulates his Katon chakra.The user uses shape manipulation to form multiple (6) "swords" made of Fire that hovers above the user. With a simple hand gesture,the user can send and control these swords to move towards the enemy and impale them.Due to their heat,as they are practically pure fire that is greatly concentrated to a sword
form,they would easily burn through the
opponent with ease.By performing the Snake handseal,the user is able to make these "swords" explode by easing the concentration of the swords and allowing the to become just fire without form, creating a small explosion where the sword was impaled.

Note:The user can make up to 6 of these fire swords,and less,depending on the situation.
Note:No A rank Fire techniques for the next turn
Note:Can only be taught by -L-
Note: Usable 3 times and they last only a
moment if they aren't used to attack
 

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I gather and mold katon chakra within my body as I preform 3 hand seals. Once finished with performance of hand seals I start to release chakra as I use nature and shape manipulation creating 6 fire blades.

>Can attack from multiply sides.
>No fire A rank techniques in next turn.

1. Whilst swords are active can I preform other fire techniques?
2. Ugh,I wanted to ask something then I forgot what that is.
3. With performance of snake hand seal can I choose which sword is gonna explode or I make all of them explode?
 

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Hello there O^O

( Suiton: Dāku• u~ōtāzu ) | Water Release: The Dark Waters
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short – Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user starts by forming three hand seals, and then manipulating Water within reach (short to mid range). The user will then insert his chakra into the water source, and cause this Water to turn into a dark, black flammable oil. This happens quite fast, and can easily be set ablaze with any fire based jutsu. This technique can be used to change the properties of Water, within reason, basically only allowing the user to change a water source of small size into the dark flammable oil. When used in a large water source, only a small patch will be changed.

-Can only be taught by -L-
-Can only be used twice a fight
-Requires mastery of Water to be used

Perform it, advantages and disadvantages.
 

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I mold chakra within my body before releasing it towards the water source nearby. Once I finished with doing so I mold my chakra with the water source, making flamable oil by usage of nature manipulation.

You are capable of changing properties of water into flamable oil, this is especially good to use against opponent if he were to release stream of water on you. If water source is too big you won't be capable of changing properties from all of it.
 

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(Katon: Makuro kasō) - Fire Release: Macropyre

Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User of the technique will release katon chakra in radius of up to 7 meters around opponent heating up the ground to the points of melting (depending on the terrain that is in question) whilst emitting heat waves with a redish hue to them. Just touching the heated ground would make damage to the opponent. The heat waves would give a mirages so to say, similar to the wavy lines that could be seen whilst looking at longer distances in deserts. The katon chakra around opponent would be capable of staying there up to two turns before dispersing and thus loosing its effects. Interesting to the technique is that in the case of either opponent or user using technique based upon wind, the heatwave would burst into flames because of oxygen feeding fire.

Note: Lasts for two turn or until an explosion occurs
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

Usses in battle? Questions?
 

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(Katon: Kulhu no shutsugen) - Fire Release: Emergence of Kulhu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Emergence of Kulhu is a technique where user would release katon chakra around their opponent. Now this chakra would emerge from the ground in shape of numerous small participles of fire that when collected into a single structure take form of tentacles. User will be capable of forming up to four tentacles which main purpose would be as to harm opponent by making all different kinds of lashing movements however if user so wishes he can control these tentacles. Their size can be up to five meters in lengt. User will also be capable by performance of a single seal make the small fire particples from which they are formed actually explode forming a maelstorm in which center opponent will be standing.

Note: Can not be used in consequent turns.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha.

Analyse? Questions? Blah blah. The usual..
 

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(Katon: Kulhu no shutsugen) - Fire Release: Emergence of Kulhu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Emergence of Kulhu is a technique where user would release katon chakra around their opponent. Now this chakra would emerge from the ground in shape of numerous small participles of fire that when collected into a single structure take form of tentacles. User will be capable of forming up to four tentacles which main purpose would be as to harm opponent by making all different kinds of lashing movements however if user so wishes he can control these tentacles. Their size can be up to five meters in lengt. User will also be capable by performance of a single seal make the small fire particples from which they are formed actually explode forming a maelstorm in which center opponent will be standing.

Note: Can not be used in consequent turns.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha.

Analyse? Questions? Blah blah. The usual..
Hm, it's quite an easy technique, so I don't have any questions in particular. Its basically just creating tentacles from particles of Fire, and then using said tentacles to lash at the opponent, which will obviously burn the opponent. Alternatively, with a single hand seal, the particles of Fire will be triggered to explode.

Now, your turn:

(Genjutsu: Kuishinbō oni) | Illusionary Arts: Gluttonous Demon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 from abdominal pain)
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals, placing the opponent under an illusion. Within the illusion, the opponent will start to feel the effects of Poly****ia, an increase in appetite, but to a greater extent than usual. The opponent will become so hungry that he would turn to start feeding on himself as a result of a hunger that can not be satisfied. The effects of the illusion are quite subtle as the hunger starts off quite simple and subtle, only causing a slight discomfort once the illusion has been cast. After a single turn, the hunger would be so extreme that the opponent would eat any organic material in order to satisfy the hunger that plagues him. This organic material can range from himself, to any tangible material, like wood from trees, and even the very soil or earth the opponent stands upon. Due to the severe hunger, this illusion forces the opponent to focus on subduing this extreme hunger and the opponent would go to any length to subdue it. Based on the materials eaten during this feeding frenzy, the opponent will suffer severe abdominal pain, and cause internal damage.

Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Lasts for two turns.
-Takes one turn to be activated, the next turn the effects will be felt.
-Can only be taught by Detective L

Analyse yo.
 

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A genjutsu indicated with performance of 3 hand seals where the one under it would start feeling so hugry that he would end up eating himself out. Although in the first turn the hunger would not have that much effect as soon as the second one comes that would change. Either eating himself or any kind of a organic material in their vicinity. And well depending on what they'll eat they will go through different consequences.


(Doton/Katon: Gibil to Girra no adobento) - Earth/Fire Release: Advent of Gibil and Girra
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Advent of Gibil and Girra is a technique where user will firstly release doton chakra within their vicinity as to take a shape of two skulls with an opening at the lowest point of it. These two skulls would be approximetely the size of human heads and their properties would actually be the one of adhesive mud. As soon as the skulls have been formed, user will release katon chakra where they are placed, making it arise from the ground taking shape of two spirits, with two hands, levitating through the battlefield and filling in the previously made skulls. These spirits would be formed of solid fire chakra, being capable of withstanding the weight of mud that would act as a protector from other techniques, however at all times they will have intangible layer of fire flowing through them. Both Gibil and Girra are capable of going to mid range from the user before dispersing however they can only be made in vicinity to the user, aka short range. Each turn they are active, user will only be capable of performing techniques of fire release and his chakra would be drained by ten points. They can stay on the battlefield up to three turns and can be made only twice per battle, however never in consequent turns. Now both Gibil and Girra have their specific traits. Gibil, is mostly known for his solidity. He is capable of extending different parts of his body as to form different solid form of fire that will aid him in battle and that he is capable of relasing which will upon impact form explosion, albeit they can only reach short range. It could be swords, shields and similar. Their size can vary as well as the rank, going up to B rank. However in the case where the extension has been destroyed, the rank from which it was will also effect the rank of the spirit itself. The main attack of Gibil however is to actually condense itself into the mud skull which represents its base after which it will propel towards the target. Because of the highly condensed fire within the mud, upon impact with a solid object it will explode forming a maelstorm which would be of A rank. Gibil would actually prematurely detonate in case where wind based attack is coming his way which would actually just add onto fire because of oxygen feading the flames, making it envelop it before descending towards them (the person who used wind attack). Girra on the other hand, is different from Gibil. Its main property is the one of light. Because of the brightness of its fire, upon its forming, it will blind opponent for few moments as he needs to get used to to its illumination. It is less solid than Gibil, and its main use is to actually send projectiles of fire towards the target. Projectiles size at its peak can be 3 meters in diameter and their shape varies depending on Girra's feeling which are reflected upon them. Projectiles can be of either C or D rank, and it can only release up to 4 projectiles of C rank before dispersing completely. Both Gibil and Girra can in case of danger actually condense themselfs into skulls which represent the base of them as to defend from attacks coming their way. Their reforming however would drain user of the technique by ten chakra points.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No technique of S rank or higher of fire release in the turn they are made.
Note: They can not be made in consequent turns.
Note: They can be on the battlefield up to three turns before dispersing.
Note: When it comes to elemental techniques, user can only use element of fire whilst they are active.
Note: User would be drained proportioned amount of chakra to the rank of the ability that the spirit uses. (e.g. if spirit uses a projectile of C rank, user would be drained by 15 chakra point and similar)
Note: Each ability they use will also count towards the three jutsus limit.
Note: The ability of condensing themself into the skull will cost 10 chakra points as well as reforming back to their original shape.
Note: The jutsu would take two slots of possible three upon its activation.
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

Analyze as well as do ask if you have any questions.
 

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This tech too long tbh ~_~

Make two skulls (Gibil and Girra) of adhesive mud properties with Earth chakra. Then use Fire chakra to fill these skulls, almost making them "spirits" of Fire with hands. Can go up to mid range, and are formed in short range. They can stay on the battlefield for up to three turns but it restricts the opponent to using Fire based chakra, Each skull has specific traits:

Gibil:

Gibil, is mostly known for his solidity. He is capable of extending different parts of his body as to form different solid form of fire that will aid him in battle and that he is capable of relasing which will upon impact form explosion, albeit they can only reach short range. It could be swords, shields and similar. Their size can vary as well as the rank, going up to B rank. However in the case where the extension has been destroyed, the rank from which it was will also effect the rank of the spirit itself. The main attack of Gibil however is to actually condense itself into the mud skull which represents its base after which it will propel towards the target. Because of the highly condensed fire within the mud, upon impact with a solid object it will explode forming a maelstorm which would be of A rank. Gibil would actually prematurely detonate in case where wind based attack is coming his way which would actually just add onto fire because of oxygen feading the flames, making it envelop it before descending towards them (the person who used wind attack).
Pretty self explanatory tbh.

Girra:

Girra on the other hand, is different from Gibil. Its main property is the one of light. Because of the brightness of its fire, upon its forming, it will blind opponent for few moments as he needs to get used to to its illumination. It is less solid than Gibil, and its main use is to actually send projectiles of fire towards the target. Projectiles size at its peak can be 3 meters in diameter and their shape varies depending on Girra's feeling which are reflected upon them. Projectiles can be of either C or D rank, and it can only release up to 4 projectiles of C rank before dispersing completely.
Same as above, both were explained quite well. I don't think I have any questions about the technique. It's extremely well done, probably one of your best Fire techniques xD

Go! Go!

(Genjutsu: Namekuji o taberu! ) | Illusionary Technique: Eat slugs!
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.

Notes:

-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.

I made it for comedic effect, but it is actually useful tbh. Analyse it.
 

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Sorry <_<" <3 Thanks! Although I prefer Macropyre :D

Oh this would especially be good if you have slug contract. Basically with performance of two hand seals one would indicate a genjutsu. Person under it would feel as if vast amount of slugs are within their throat, tryi to climb up towards their mouth. As the slugs are moving a gag reflex would be activated causing for your target to try and throw up. What would be released from their mouth however as they make the throwing up motion would not be vomit but rather slugs which would continuesly generate if the genjutsu has not beem broken.
 

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ANALYZE!

(Suiton: Euryubiā no Chronosphere) - Water Release: Eurybia's Chronosphere
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Eurybia's Chronosphere is a technique of water release whereas user manipulates water molecules around their surrounding reaching up to mid range radius. With application of processes of both nature and shape manipulation they would cause water molecules to change their properties to a sticky, adhesive like nature. However such process wouldn't quite be visible by a normal eye nor would it deal any damage. The water molecules would stay around both the user and opponent in a four turns span and user won't be able to use them as to directly attack their target however everything that enters radius of the water molecules would have its speed decreased until it completely loses its momentum and collapses. The decrease in speed wouldn't affect the user themselves due to users chakra being infused within the molecules. Same would apply to jutsus user uses. The molecules would immediately converge onto entities which are in motion and which speed is above the one of the user's when this technique was activated. Additionally, the molecules in the surrounding will be able as to be mentally maneuvered by user's will in addition with hand gestures however never as to form shapes and constructs and never to be used offensively. When they attach themselves onto an entity of sorts within their range, user would be able to via mental command control movement of the said entity and even push it towards the one who initially sent it, however following elemental weaknesses and strengths. Additionally this could only be used once during duration of the technique and such would have effects on the technique itself, making it wear off quicker (duration decreases by one turn).. Within the Chronosphere, the speed of an entity moving would be decreased up to four times compared to their original speed. This would apply only to solid entities. The closer they are to the one who performed this technique the greater is reduction of speed due to the more and more molecules attaching themselves onto an entity. Although the movement of user wouldn't be affected within the Chronosphere, movement of those whose chakra signature is differing would (This would also apply to allies of the one who performed the technique due to the difference in chakra signature). Despite not being able as to use the molecules of adhesive liquid as to offend opponent directly, if they attach onto the body of them, their movement capabilities would gradually decrease. However this happens over time, as more and more molecules attach to ones body. Furthermore, user would be able as to use the molecules as to completely stop specific part of the body (joints, hand, leg etc.) they are enveloping by mentally moving molecules once during duration of this technique. This wouldn't make damage to the one within the Chronosphere, however it wouldn't allow them to perform specific movements. Keeping in mind that it would only work on people who are in motion and who's speed is greater than that of the user when this technique was first activated.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
 

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I thought I did this lol

By using your Water based chakra, you will create small molecules of water which you then form into a sticky adhesive property. These molecules aren't visible, and linger around for up to four turns. These molecules act to slow down faster opponents completely, by converging upon them once they enter the range. Can also be used against techniques, following the strength and weaknesses of Water, allowing the user to send the technique back. An entity's speed can be decreased up to four times, and certain parts of the body can also be disabled, by causing the molecules to converge a certain part.

Pretty bad ass tbh.
 
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