Legend Long Forgotten

[Marin]

Legend Lost Launched

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Yo, NB!

Here I'll present to you a comic I made myself. Original story, original characters, original setting and original everything. (Ok exagaration but I've been working on this for a long time so let me be u.u) I've already made an introduction thread with a different account before I made this one (don't ask why) but anyway, this is the one that counts!

So, Legend Lost is an action fantasy webcomic with a slightly mysterious tone. It is my first original work and my entrance to the world of self-publishing comics via the magic of the internet. (Specifically Tapastic, but I'll get to that >_<)

Anyway, the details:

Synopsis​

The story is focused on a girl Wynn and her uncle Gritto who, while travelling North, get thrown on a trecherous path from wich there is no return. Embark on a journey of chaos and destruction but also of honour and pride. In a cruel world a kind soul can only last so long. Will it shatter before it even starts?

Characters​

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The Launch​

So, the point of this thread is for me to share with you my pride and joy, my sweat and blood, the first chapter. This is by far the most complex comic I've ever made, so I hope you'll like it. The comic is officially uploaded on Tapastic, but instead of advertising the shit out of it, I'm just gonna drop it down below, so please read it or atleast throw a glance or two and tell me what you think.

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It's lengthy (28 pages in total), so it really took me some time to make it. All comments, advice, criticism and opinions are appreciated!

(I'm gonna go rest now, worked my ass off. xD)

External Links (for those interested in the comic)​

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Tapastic page (online platform where everyone can upload their comics and share them with the world)

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[Υαmí]

Liken it my man!

 

[Bimbonium]

I like it, it feel like I'm playing/reading a RPG.

 

[Scooby Doo]

Wow it was great o_o

 

[The Amazing Spider Man]

Hmmm.... Well the story is okay not really catching my attention much, not finding any of the characters interesting (cant remember their names by the end) and believe me I was trying to read it instead of looking at the art, which for the most part, is just ridiculous. I mean from the house panel to the shapes of each characters disproportioned body its cringing man so try to take some art classes or practice a LOT more in that area. Also you're going to need more of a story to tell than just having an OP main appear because that one peep aint gonna carry the series. That lightning looks cool tho.


"That looks cool" - iNoto, 2016

 

[Marin]

Hmmm.... Well the story is okay not really catching my attention much, not finding any of the characters interesting (cant remember their names by the end) and believe me I was trying to read it instead of looking at the art, which for the most part, is just ridiculous. I mean from the house panel to the shapes of each characters disproportioned body its cringing man so try to take some art classes or practice a LOT more in that area. Also you're going to need more of a story to tell than just having an OP main appear because that one peep aint gonna carry the series. That lightning looks cool tho.


"That looks cool" - iNoto, 2016

I appreciate the time you took to check this thing out.

You'll need to be a bit more specific tho. Whats wrong with body proportions? (I get that sometimes they look off) but I dont see a global problem. :/

The perspective I am aware of. Drawing exterior buildings isnt my forte and I tend to rush thru it. Still dont see whay was off with the house shot? I thought it looks pretty decent.

Mind pointing out stuff with refferences? Like this its not really much help.

 

[Deadlift]

So many Darkseids xd I just read first character and liked Facebook page, keep it up my man

 

[Marin]

So many Darkseids xd I just read first character and liked Facebook page, keep it up my man

Just for the record, I totally didn't base them on neither Marvel nor DC properties. u.u

Tx4 liking, new chapter should be up sometime soon.