[Suiton] Learning how to Not-Wet myself
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wanderingcactus
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*rows a small boat to the training ground and leaps out with 6 other cloaked guys who didn't help at all >.>*
So, before we begin let's go through the basics. Tell me all you know about water release. Include its uses, forms, elemental strengths and weaknesses, and possible results when mixed with other elements.
So, before we begin let's go through the basics. Tell me all you know about water release. Include its uses, forms, elemental strengths and weaknesses, and possible results when mixed with other elements.
Jack Skellington
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As the Wind Blows trough Konohamaru's hair.
he Notices The man Rowing Towards him.
"Howdy!You must be here to teach me!"
After listening about what he has to do.
Konohamaru starts Talking.
Water...
Also Known as Suiton is one of the basic elemental nature transformation techniques that allow the user to manipulate pre-existing water, or create their own, by turning their chakra into water. It takes much more ability to create the water outside the body than to manipulate what is already available or expel it from their mouths,It can Be used in both Offensive and Defensive ways.
Capable of Sending a Water Dragon Towards your Foe or a large Wall of Water to Protect you from Attacks.
Water is Liquid,So its Easily usable.
Once water release Is Combined with Wind,it Turns colder,And Thus Turning into the elemental KKG,Ice Release.
Its also part of the KKG: Wood Release, Storm Release, and Boil Release.
Water is Strong against fire as it removes the Oxygen,Thus Removing the fire completely.
Water is capable to be Mixed with Wind to Increase its Speed and Cutting ability.
Lightning is a Great to be combined with Suiton.
You Send a Water tsunami and then you can shock your Enemy,And even a group of enemies.
Water is weak against earth because earth structures can dissipate the force of water rendering the technique ineffective.
As konohamaru Answers,He Sits Down on the Dirt.
Awaiting for his Senpai's Reaction.
That's correct but there are more ways water interacts with other elements. When fire heats water to a high temperature it evaporates creating steam which is another KG. Also earth saturated with enough water creates mud. Now that you have enough info we can move on to jutsu. Feel free to ask any questions you have.
Since you've never molded suiton chakra before try acquiring a strong mental image of the nature of water (a description of water's characteristics) and mold a portion of your chakra to mimic that nature. Then channel suiton chakra into a water source and manipulate it with your chakra to create a small wave. After that, try raising water in the form of a small wall and then shooting a small water blast from the water source. That's the basic suiton jutsu. It could also be done without a water source by converting suiton chakra into water released from your mouth, hands, etc. When you're done with the first three try it without a water source.
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
Since you've never molded suiton chakra before try acquiring a strong mental image of the nature of water (a description of water's characteristics) and mold a portion of your chakra to mimic that nature. Then channel suiton chakra into a water source and manipulate it with your chakra to create a small wave. After that, try raising water in the form of a small wall and then shooting a small water blast from the water source. That's the basic suiton jutsu. It could also be done without a water source by converting suiton chakra into water released from your mouth, hands, etc. When you're done with the first three try it without a water source.
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
Jack Skellington
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Konohamaru Listens Carefully once again.
As some clouds appears and It starts to Slightly Rain.
Konohamaru then Walks towards the river.
There he Stands still.
He Starts molding his chakra.
Focusing on the Tought of Water.
In his Mind he Feels Calm.
He Starts Raising his Right hand.
slowly Moving the water.
As he loses Control,He tries it again.
he Thinks about nothing,And Empty Mind,He then Tries to make another wave of Chakra.
It succeeds.
He Then Raises his Left hand as well.
As he Raises Both of his hands,Water starts to Rise.
In the Form of a Small Wall.
As Sweat Starts to Drip From his Left Cheek to the ground.
Out of the Water wall,A Water Shot is Fired Off.
it goes on about 11 Meters,Until Crashing down.
"*Huff*I Think-*Huff* i think i did it..."
Konohamaru Stands Still.
He Raises his left Arm.
He Molds his Chakra into it.
as he Aims his palm towards a Tree,He Releases the molded Suiton Chakra,Sending a water blast.
Konohamaru Then Raises his Right hand.
As he Molds a Larger amount of Chakra this time.
Instead of Releasing it at his palm,He Releases it around his arm.
As it Falls,He reconstructs into a Water wall.
Afterwards he Descends his hands,As the Water wall Turns into a small Wave of Water.
As More swear Drips from Konohamaru's head,He Smiles
"I think i did it!"
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Jack Skellington
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Question: How Big would you Consider the water wall or wave to be?
As Konohamaru(im going to call him Kono now) tries it again.
He Stands still at the Water source.
As He Molds his Chakra Into His hands.
he Puts the Chakra into the Water.
As He Raises his Right hand,A Small Wave Of water appears.
He Does it again.
But this time he raises both of his hands.
As He Raises them,he Adds More chakra into the Water.
Creating a small Wall of Water.
As the Wall Continues to Grow,Kono adds more Chakra.
When The Wall Turns stable,Kono Molds Another load of Chakra into it.
Creating A Small Water Burst,Shooting out of the Wall.
He Then molds another Amount of Chakra.
As He Thinks about Water.
his Chakra starts to Turn into small Water particles.
As the Particles Are on his Skin,Kono manipulates it And turns it into a small Wall.
As he Starts Growing it with More chakra/Water Particles,It becomes Stable.
He Then once again Adds Chakra/Water Particles,As they get together in the middle of the Water wall,It Burtst Out as a Small Shot.Kono then Molds a small amount of Chakra.
As he Uses it To Make the wall Fall down and Change into a Wave.
As Konohamaru(im going to call him Kono now) tries it again.
He Stands still at the Water source.
As He Molds his Chakra Into His hands.
he Puts the Chakra into the Water.
As He Raises his Right hand,A Small Wave Of water appears.
He Does it again.
But this time he raises both of his hands.
As He Raises them,he Adds More chakra into the Water.
Creating a small Wall of Water.
As the Wall Continues to Grow,Kono adds more Chakra.
When The Wall Turns stable,Kono Molds Another load of Chakra into it.
Creating A Small Water Burst,Shooting out of the Wall.
He Then molds another Amount of Chakra.
As He Thinks about Water.
his Chakra starts to Turn into small Water particles.
As the Particles Are on his Skin,Kono manipulates it And turns it into a small Wall.
As he Starts Growing it with More chakra/Water Particles,It becomes Stable.
He Then once again Adds Chakra/Water Particles,As they get together in the middle of the Water wall,It Burtst Out as a Small Shot.Kono then Molds a small amount of Chakra.
As he Uses it To Make the wall Fall down and Change into a Wave.
Just big enough to defend you or attack a single person.
Nicely done. Here's one a bit different than the last. First, send suiton chakra into any source of water and raise some into the air while separating the water particles. This would allow them to hang in the air as a thick mist covering an area used to conceal your position. Try it out. By focusing suiton chakra in your lungs and converting it to water you could also expel the same mist from your mouth.
(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
Nicely done. Here's one a bit different than the last. First, send suiton chakra into any source of water and raise some into the air while separating the water particles. This would allow them to hang in the air as a thick mist covering an area used to conceal your position. Try it out. By focusing suiton chakra in your lungs and converting it to water you could also expel the same mist from your mouth.
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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
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As Konohamaru Listens to his senpai.
he Walks Towards a water source.
He Starts Molding Chakra.
Towards his Skin.
As He molds the Chakra into Having a Suiton Affinity.
He Directs it towards the water source.
As I Raise The Water into the air.
I Start Spreading it into Little Water Particles.
As It turns into thick Mist.
I Then Release the Mist and as the particles fall to the ground.
This time,I Mold Chakra again.
I Mold the chakra Towards my throat.
As i Give it a Suiton affinity.
I start Dividing the Suiton Chakra into Water Chakra Particles.
As The Water particles turn into mist in my Throat.
I release it and Send a Cloud of Thick Mist around me.
Great. Now i want you to gather suiton chakra in your hand and produce water condensed to form a solid sword you can use just like a normal sword. There's your target.
*points out a lone training dummy oddly resembling me*
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
Next, hold out your arm and release suiton chakra in front of you. Convert it into water that forms a circular shield of water dense enough to block incoming projectiles and taijutsu attacks. Protect yourself.
*throws three kunai at you and runs in with a flying kick*
( Suiton: Junsai no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Shield Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
*points out a lone training dummy oddly resembling me*
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Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
Next, hold out your arm and release suiton chakra in front of you. Convert it into water that forms a circular shield of water dense enough to block incoming projectiles and taijutsu attacks. Protect yourself.
*throws three kunai at you and runs in with a flying kick*
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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their water chakra and releasing it from their arm which is held outwards infront of them and they then create a shield of water that can aide in defence against projectile weapons and close combat techniques.
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As I Stand in a Focused Position.
I start Molding Chakra Towards my Right Arm.
I Start Emptying my Mind.
As The Molded Chakra In my Arm,Start to turn into small Water particles.
As I Slowly but Aimfully build the Particles Up.
The particles Slowly Come out of my hand.
As The Water is Still Not Condensed enough.
I Add a Little More Water Particles to it.
As I Make it Into a Quite Strong Blade.
I dash Forwards towards the dummy.
As I Do Multiple Verticle and Horizontal Slashes.
I make the Sword Collapse.
As The Kunai come Nearby.
Mark Knows he has to Do it fast.
As he Molds his Chakra he Starts Focusing it Towards his Dominant(right) arm.
As The Chakra is there,he Starts Molding it into Water Particles.
As he Releases them.
he Combines them in a Large Mirror Like Formation.
As the Kunai get blocked by it.
as your Clone Tries to Kick it,His Leg Can't Go trough it.
Question Time:
If I Where to use the water shield jutsu.
and the Enemy Where to Do a Same ranked taijutsu move.
Such as :
(Gangeki) - Rock Attack
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest
What would win?
Answer: Neither. The taijutsu attack is stopped and the shield disperses.
Well done. Now perform the Rat, Dog, and Ox handseals. Like the previous technique, produce water in your hand and apply shape manipulation to form a long cord of water used to lash your target like a whip or bind them by wrapping their limbs. An appropriate lightning technique may be channeled through the cord to deliver a shock to the enemy like the Lightning Release technique. Catch that guy! T^T
*points out a Pein running away with my Doritos*
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
This jutsu is already explained well so read the description and try it out. Stop these guys.
*three Peins run at you with blades sticking out their sleeves*
(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
For this jutsu, perform the Tiger handseal and transform pre-existing water into a clone of yourself to fight for you and even perform water jutsu. The downside is the clone cannot be further than short range from you without reverting back into water. The same happens when it takes enough damage. Try it out and have your clone perform a jutsu.
(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Release: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Well done. Now perform the Rat, Dog, and Ox handseals. Like the previous technique, produce water in your hand and apply shape manipulation to form a long cord of water used to lash your target like a whip or bind them by wrapping their limbs. An appropriate lightning technique may be channeled through the cord to deliver a shock to the enemy like the Lightning Release technique. Catch that guy! T^T
*points out a Pein running away with my Doritos*
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Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
This jutsu is already explained well so read the description and try it out. Stop these guys.
*three Peins run at you with blades sticking out their sleeves*
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Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.
For this jutsu, perform the Tiger handseal and transform pre-existing water into a clone of yourself to fight for you and even perform water jutsu. The downside is the clone cannot be further than short range from you without reverting back into water. The same happens when it takes enough damage. Try it out and have your clone perform a jutsu.
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Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques and requires a water source.
Jack Skellington
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Mark Stands still,He Starts Forming the handseals while he is Molding Chakra.
As He Molds it He Directs it Towards his Right Hand.
As he Slowly Changes the chakra into Suiton Particles.
He releases the Suiton Particles From his Right hand.
As it forms into a Whip.
As he Runs towards the Pein With his Doritos.
He Snatches the Doritos out of the pein's Hands.
Afterwards he Does another Whip Slash,Against the pein's Foot.
As the Pein Falls Down.
Mark Forms the Ram and Tiger Handseal,Afterwards Molding his Chakra towards his Stomach.
As He Turns the Chakra into Suiton Particles.
He Starts Mixing it into a Sticky syrup in his stomach.
As he Directs it Towards his Mouth.
he adds the Finishing touches to Make it Complete.
As he Spits it out towards the Enemies,They all Get Hit By the Syrup.
As they Lose Mobility.
Mark Forms the Tiger Seal.
While doing that he Molds his Chakra,Grabbing 1/10th of his chakra
He Walks towards a Nearby Water source.
He turns the Chakra into Suiton particles
There he Infuses the Suiton/Chakra Particles into it
As the Water Starts to Rise,A Form Comes out of the water.
As it Turns into a Clone,Perfectly Mirrored of myself.
I Afterwards run towards a Pein in Sync with my clone.
as We Both Mold our Chakra.
As We turn it into Suiton Particles.
We Release it into Our right hands.
At the same time We Hit the pein with the Water Whip.
(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.
Well done. Now focus suiton chakra in a nearby water source and manipulate the water, compressing it into multiple pointed streams directed at your target. The spinning motion and density of the streams make this technique more lethal than most water jutsu. If your enemy is standing on water you could even attack from any angle you wish. There's your target.
*points out a Pein floating blissfully on the water's surface*
(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Release: Water Fang Bullet
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Next, after using the Hidden Mist jutsu, manipulate every water molecule to change their shape and reflect the natural light entering it in a way that the light spreads throughout the mist, making it blinding white within. Remember that your target must be in the mist for this technique to blind him and the effect lasts only as long as you fuel the technique. Try it out.
(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
This jutsu's pretty self-explanatory. Look, i've even included a video. Punish these guys.
*points out a few Peins running out of a forest they've set ablaze somehow*
1:50-2:20
(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
*points out a Pein floating blissfully on the water's surface*
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Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A technique that deals physical damage to the enemy with a liquid mass brought forth from underwater. Its power to kill and maim is augmented by adding a spinning motion to the compactly pressured water. During fights on water, taking advantage of its characteristic ability to attack from anywhere in a 360 degrees radius, in conjunction with other techniques for distraction, confusion and so forth, this technique has an extensive array of applications.
Note: Requires a water source.
Next, after using the Hidden Mist jutsu, manipulate every water molecule to change their shape and reflect the natural light entering it in a way that the light spreads throughout the mist, making it blinding white within. Remember that your target must be in the mist for this technique to blind him and the effect lasts only as long as you fuel the technique. Try it out.
(Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu
This jutsu's pretty self-explanatory. Look, i've even included a video. Punish these guys.
*points out a few Peins running out of a forest they've set ablaze somehow*
1:50-2:20
[video=youtube;y2TmFnDahfI]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2TmFnDahfI[/video]
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
Jack Skellington
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Mark Starts Molding Chakra
as He Focuses on his Opponent.
Floating in the water.
Mark Starts Turning his Chakra Into Water Affinity particles.
As He Slowly Release the Water/Chakra Particles in the Water that the Pein is Floating in.
I Then Create a 4 Streams from His Surrounding Water.
As they direct to him,he gets hit by the jutsu.
mark Molds his Chakra.
he Turns it into Suiton particles.
as he Releases it into the air.
An Amount of Mist is Created.
He Afterwards Starts Changing the Chakra That is in the Mist.
As He Changes its Shape,It Allows light to be seen Trough it.
As the pein that is Within it Starts getting Blinded.
Mark uses the opportunity to Throw Kunai While Out of the mist.
Mark Stands still.
he Starts Molding his Chakra.
Turning it into Small Water Chakra Particles.
as He Claps His Hands
A Massive Wave of Water is unleashed around his.
Blasting the pein away.
Question:
Am i already able to use the B-rank Version of This?
Jack Skellington
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Mark Molds his Chakra.
He Turns its Affinity into Water particles.
As i Continue Molding the Right Amount of Chakra.
I Release the Chakra.
As from Underwater 4 Water pillars Appear.
As They All Combine in a massive Water Tornado.
As i Unleash it at the pein From Underwater.
I Continue Moving My Chakra,As the Water Begins to Spiral Into a Swift Movement.
Mark Stands Still.
he Empties his Mind.
As he Molds His Chakra to his Skin.
He turns its Affinity into Water Particles.
As Water Around Mark Starts to Raise.
More Chakra Gets Put into it.
As It all Expands into One large Vortex.
As The Vortex Starts To Move Towards mark's Desired Target.
As The Vortex Comes near the peins,They all Get hit.
You went way off track with the first jutsu. It's main feature is being sharp and dense enough to pierce the target. Also they shouldn't be big streams, that just defeats the purpose of the jutsu. Try again.