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In the city of ruins, where buildings were torn apart, houses were broken down by nuclear missiles, and dead bodies were scattered across earth due to Civil War. It was soon the end of the Civil War, but this was just the beginning. Due the Civil War An anonymous infectious gas have spread and killed thousands of people on earth, death was provocative at this moment of time, as there were no first aid supplies in need for a person’s survival. A teenager named Keith survived the disease, but his parent’s had a tragic outcome from the explosion of the nuclear missile and weren’t able to live on. His shirt and trousers were torn to his bare knees, he was covered in soggy dust particles from the aftermath of the war, the ferocious decaying bodies around him smelled horrible, he couldn’t stand the distinctive smell, he hold his breath and walked along the main street. Trees were branched off, roads were cracked wide open, and most of the houses were crumbled into pieces. It felt almost like a dream, a world full of havoc could not be seen through a person’s eye until he accepts the reality it is now. Keith never accepted reality he only thought of it as a dream, a dream never to wake up from. Part of his mind stumbled across nausea, he had a very high fever, he instantly thought he was going to die at this moment and crashed to floor. He woke up, the skies were dark and gloomy, he coughed simultaneously, he felt as if he was being stepped on right on his chest, he couldn’t breathe, he was in a position where trees could of fell on him, but he was lucky, he had no mindset on what to do or how to do it and that he had only one word in his mind: “Survive”.
In the city of ruins, where buildings were torn apart, houses were broken down by nuclear missiles, and dead bodies were scattered across earth due to Civil War. It was soon the end of the Civil War, but this was just the beginning. Due the Civil War An anonymous infectious gas have spread and killed thousands of people on earth, death was provocative at this moment of time, as there were no first aid supplies in need for a person’s survival. A teenager named Keith survived the disease, but his parent’s had a tragic outcome from the explosion of the nuclear missile and weren’t able to live on. His shirt and trousers were torn to his bare knees, he was covered in soggy dust particles from the aftermath of the war, the ferocious decaying bodies around him smelled horrible, he couldn’t stand the distinctive smell, he hold his breath and walked along the main street. Trees were branched off, roads were cracked wide open, and most of the houses were crumbled into pieces. It felt almost like a dream, a world full of havoc could not be seen through a person’s eye until he accepts the reality it is now. Keith never accepted reality he only thought of it as a dream, a dream never to wake up from. Part of his mind stumbled across nausea, he had a very high fever, he instantly thought he was going to die at this moment and crashed to floor. He woke up, the skies were dark and gloomy, he coughed simultaneously, he felt as if he was being stepped on right on his chest, he couldn’t breathe, he was in a position where trees could of fell on him, but he was lucky, he had no mindset on what to do or how to do it and that he had only one word in his mind: “Survive”.
