Language of Love

NarutAwesome

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Check this out guys, I recently wrote this for a girl that I met recently, it happened just like this, jk, but I met her when I was playing ball in front of my house....she seemed sad and I asked her why and we started talking ever since
check it out

planning on singing it on guitar to her :D


It was an ordinary day
I was playing ball and shooting hoops
when this pretty girl passed my way
like an angel out of the blue
and I stopped and I waved
she smiled back and said hey
and as she walked away my mouth opened to say

“Hey Girl,
Do you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
and we can stop the time and pain
to listen to the words our hearts can sing”

yeah

so she turned back to me
and, I saw tears roll down her cheek
and she asked me
about the pain- in her heart that I could see

and I walked up to her
and said, it’s what my heart felt first
and that I could tell
deep inside she was hurt

“Hey Girl,
Do you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
and we can stop the time and pain
to listen to the words our hearts can sing”

And that was when she told me
her heart was broke cause of infidelity
and I said
I’ll put it back together piece by piece


“Cause Girl
you know the language the love
it’s when
two hearts speak and can rise above
from the sadness and the pain
and everything else in this world

Yeah,
and I know the language the love
cause
our hearts spoke and can rose above
and we can stop the time and pain
to listen to the words our hearts can sing”
 

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How long have you known this girl? Cause the word "love" is in there quite a lot. You dont wanna come off too strong if it hasnt been that long. But anyway, best of luck to you. Hope it works out
 

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AAAAWWWWWWEEEEE i touched my heart! that girl has a great guy waiting for her! *mutters* wish i could find a guy like that >.<
 

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I think you should take out every mention of "love" because I honestly think it would creep her out. Then say at the very end after the song, "I like you."
That's my only worry broski, I don't want to mention love but then again it's a key part to the song....and I kinda talked to her friend and they said she likes me a lot......i might take it out.......don't know yet
 
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