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(Genjutsu: Karada-ka) | Illusionary Arts: Somatization
Well I can see this Genjutsu being used to counter weapon wielders and Taijutsu users. By taking away the feeling of a limb, you can cause them to drop a sword, miss a kick or even hurt themselves. And not only that, but even the mere act of hand seals or a defensive maneuver like blocking can be hampered, and leave them open even for a split second- which in some cases is all you do.
Draw back though is that no A ranked Gen next turn, well if all goes right with this move you won't need Gen next turn, just a finisher. But that's still a drawback in my book.
(Genjutsu: Karada-ka) | Illusionary Arts: Somatization
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms two hand seals, and induces a Genjutsu on the opponent. By the user's choice, the Genjutsu affects the opponent by causing a loss in physical function of one specific limb, albeit, with more precision after choosing a specific limb to affect. The Genjutsu lends from the concept of Somatization, where the victim loses function in a specific area of his body with no apparent organic basis. For example, the user of this Genjutsu can choose to cause the loss of motor movement of the opponent's hand, thus causing the opponent to feel as if he has no hand, although it is unharmed. This would cause the opponent to drop a weapon he might be holding in his hand at that time. However, this Genjutsu is severely limited to only being able to affect a single limb, at a time (counts the same for precision of said limb).
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L.
-Can only be used three times per fight.
-No Genjutsu above A rank in the same turn or the next.
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user forms two hand seals, and induces a Genjutsu on the opponent. By the user's choice, the Genjutsu affects the opponent by causing a loss in physical function of one specific limb, albeit, with more precision after choosing a specific limb to affect. The Genjutsu lends from the concept of Somatization, where the victim loses function in a specific area of his body with no apparent organic basis. For example, the user of this Genjutsu can choose to cause the loss of motor movement of the opponent's hand, thus causing the opponent to feel as if he has no hand, although it is unharmed. This would cause the opponent to drop a weapon he might be holding in his hand at that time. However, this Genjutsu is severely limited to only being able to affect a single limb, at a time (counts the same for precision of said limb).
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L.
-Can only be used three times per fight.
-No Genjutsu above A rank in the same turn or the next.
Well I can see this Genjutsu being used to counter weapon wielders and Taijutsu users. By taking away the feeling of a limb, you can cause them to drop a sword, miss a kick or even hurt themselves. And not only that, but even the mere act of hand seals or a defensive maneuver like blocking can be hampered, and leave them open even for a split second- which in some cases is all you do.
Draw back though is that no A ranked Gen next turn, well if all goes right with this move you won't need Gen next turn, just a finisher. But that's still a drawback in my book.
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Great job, its pretty awesome.
(Fūton: Iongēto)- Wind Release: Aeon Gate
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user initiates this technique by first holding the Snake hand seal, this will allow him to focus his Fūton chakra in and around his body, the chakra will emanate from him starting at short range and then grow to mid ranged using the air as a medium. Following this the chakra will then compress the air that is present within short ranged of the user to form a flattened, circular, 2-D disk of having only a height and diameter of 2x2m. It can be formed either in front, behind, above, below, or beside the user, given it has the necessary space to do so and appears to be a small barrier of the sort complete with elaborate green glowing patterns, all formed by shaping the air to produce these cosmetic effects. Once the disk is formed the user will then place an object into the 'gate' and watch as his chakra that had spread to mid ranged prior form an identical gate of the same 2-D dimensions (2x2m) open up on the battlefield, however, when using it to attack/affect an enemy the user can only form this second gate five meters from the opponent in any direction (above, beside, below, etc) given it has the space to do so. This second gate will reproduce exactly the same object that was placed into the previous gate in the form of B ranked, compressed wind shaped by Fūton with added speed on exit, similar to a firing mechanism. This means, if the user placed a kunai in the first gate the second gate will open and release a pure Fūton replica of the kunai. The technique is very specific and only relies on the exact instructions given to the first gate, if the user only places half a kunai inside gate #1 gate #2 will only release half a kunai and similarly, if the user inserts a full kunai the second gate will emit a full kunai. Objects placed in the first gate remain unaffected whatsoever as they aren't physically altered in any way, instead the object will just pass through the gate to end up on the other side like shining light through a glass. This means even body parts can be placed in the gate to create pure Fūton replicas elsewhere up to mid ranged. Once the second gate releases its Fūton replica it then closes as it can only replicate one object each time it is used, after this one object is replicated the first gate will also close as its job is now done. However, only physical objects can be sent through this gate, energy based objects and attacks such as fire, lightning, or even raw chakra will simply disrupt the delicate balance of chakra that composes it. Only the first gate is capable of copying objects and the second is the only one capable of replicating said objects. The Fūton replica that would be created by the second gate is green in hue with a slight visibility, it is perfectly shaped wind that houses tangibility and can interact with solid objects as well as intangible attacks such as Raiton and Katon.
Note(s):
- Can only be used three times per battle
- Only one object can replicated at at time and only once per use
- Requires a 2 turn cool down
Fairly simple and straightforward, you create a small pocket of Wind, which is linked to another (one near you, and the other at the opponent). You can then place objects through it, which creates a replica of Wind and releases it at the other end. Only physical objects though. This is an evil technique for Minato/Tobirama users z,z Imagine the possibilities fam.
(Fūton: Iongēto)- Wind Release: Aeon Gate
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user initiates this technique by first holding the Snake hand seal, this will allow him to focus his Fūton chakra in and around his body, the chakra will emanate from him starting at short range and then grow to mid ranged using the air as a medium. Following this the chakra will then compress the air that is present within short ranged of the user to form a flattened, circular, 2-D disk of having only a height and diameter of 2x2m. It can be formed either in front, behind, above, below, or beside the user, given it has the necessary space to do so and appears to be a small barrier of the sort complete with elaborate green glowing patterns, all formed by shaping the air to produce these cosmetic effects. Once the disk is formed the user will then place an object into the 'gate' and watch as his chakra that had spread to mid ranged prior form an identical gate of the same 2-D dimensions (2x2m) open up on the battlefield, however, when using it to attack/affect an enemy the user can only form this second gate five meters from the opponent in any direction (above, beside, below, etc) given it has the space to do so. This second gate will reproduce exactly the same object that was placed into the previous gate in the form of B ranked, compressed wind shaped by Fūton with added speed on exit, similar to a firing mechanism. This means, if the user placed a kunai in the first gate the second gate will open and release a pure Fūton replica of the kunai. The technique is very specific and only relies on the exact instructions given to the first gate, if the user only places half a kunai inside gate #1 gate #2 will only release half a kunai and similarly, if the user inserts a full kunai the second gate will emit a full kunai. Objects placed in the first gate remain unaffected whatsoever as they aren't physically altered in any way, instead the object will just pass through the gate to end up on the other side like shining light through a glass. This means even body parts can be placed in the gate to create pure Fūton replicas elsewhere up to mid ranged. Once the second gate releases its Fūton replica it then closes as it can only replicate one object each time it is used, after this one object is replicated the first gate will also close as its job is now done. However, only physical objects can be sent through this gate, energy based objects and attacks such as fire, lightning, or even raw chakra will simply disrupt the delicate balance of chakra that composes it. Only the first gate is capable of copying objects and the second is the only one capable of replicating said objects. The Fūton replica that would be created by the second gate is green in hue with a slight visibility, it is perfectly shaped wind that houses tangibility and can interact with solid objects as well as intangible attacks such as Raiton and Katon.
Note(s):
- Can only be used three times per battle
- Only one object can replicated at at time and only once per use
- Requires a 2 turn cool down
Fairly simple and straightforward, you create a small pocket of Wind, which is linked to another (one near you, and the other at the opponent). You can then place objects through it, which creates a replica of Wind and releases it at the other end. Only physical objects though. This is an evil technique for Minato/Tobirama users z,z Imagine the possibilities fam.
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Well how're you liking Aeon Gate so far? Time to learn the final step, Type 0.
But first, your Genjutsu; Gluttonous Demons, is a masterpiece.
(Genjutsu: Kuishinbō oni) | Illusionary Arts: Gluttonous Demon
This is a creeper type illusion, with its true intentions coming to light over time rather than immediately. And that I can work with. The urge to eat anything can be used to my advantage, I'd personally let my opponent eat an explosive and/or poisonous device, and with my venomous weaponry this can be quite the tool. The only draw back I see is the pain from eating said materials could break the opponent free from the illusion.
But first, your Genjutsu; Gluttonous Demons, is a masterpiece.
(Genjutsu: Kuishinbō oni) | Illusionary Arts: Gluttonous Demon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 from abdominal pain)
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals, placing the opponent under an illusion. Within the illusion, the opponent will start to feel the effects of Poly****ia, an increase in appetite, but to a greater extent than usual. The opponent will become so hungry that he would turn to start feeding on himself as a result of a hunger that can not be satisfied. The effects of the illusion are quite subtle as the hunger starts off quite simple and subtle, only causing a slight discomfort once the illusion has been cast. After a single turn, the hunger would be so extreme that the opponent would eat any organic material in order to satisfy the hunger that plagues him. This organic material can range from himself, to any tangible material, like wood from trees, and even the very soil or earth the opponent stands upon. Due to the severe hunger, this illusion forces the opponent to focus on subduing this extreme hunger and the opponent would go to any length to subdue it. Based on the materials eaten during this feeding frenzy, the opponent will suffer severe abdominal pain, and cause internal damage.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Lasts for two turns.
-Takes one turn to be activated, the next turn the effects will be felt.
-Can only be taught by Detective L
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 from abdominal pain)
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals, placing the opponent under an illusion. Within the illusion, the opponent will start to feel the effects of Poly****ia, an increase in appetite, but to a greater extent than usual. The opponent will become so hungry that he would turn to start feeding on himself as a result of a hunger that can not be satisfied. The effects of the illusion are quite subtle as the hunger starts off quite simple and subtle, only causing a slight discomfort once the illusion has been cast. After a single turn, the hunger would be so extreme that the opponent would eat any organic material in order to satisfy the hunger that plagues him. This organic material can range from himself, to any tangible material, like wood from trees, and even the very soil or earth the opponent stands upon. Due to the severe hunger, this illusion forces the opponent to focus on subduing this extreme hunger and the opponent would go to any length to subdue it. Based on the materials eaten during this feeding frenzy, the opponent will suffer severe abdominal pain, and cause internal damage.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Lasts for two turns.
-Takes one turn to be activated, the next turn the effects will be felt.
-Can only be taught by Detective L
This is a creeper type illusion, with its true intentions coming to light over time rather than immediately. And that I can work with. The urge to eat anything can be used to my advantage, I'd personally let my opponent eat an explosive and/or poisonous device, and with my venomous weaponry this can be quite the tool. The only draw back I see is the pain from eating said materials could break the opponent free from the illusion.
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Awesome. Enjoy it ^^
Your technique is quite simple, based around the concepts of the first technique. You will condense a large amount of Wind chaakra, hold your hands out, and release the Wind in an omnidirectional manner. You can then open the gate anywhere up to long range, and once you release something through it, its released up to hundreds of times over the opponent (one can choose the placement too). It then keeps firing for two whole turns. This is, however, met with drastic circumstances. Best to use this when you know the opponent is cornered.
Pretty damn powerful, and I think its my first F rank lmao e.e
Your technique is quite simple, based around the concepts of the first technique. You will condense a large amount of Wind chaakra, hold your hands out, and release the Wind in an omnidirectional manner. You can then open the gate anywhere up to long range, and once you release something through it, its released up to hundreds of times over the opponent (one can choose the placement too). It then keeps firing for two whole turns. This is, however, met with drastic circumstances. Best to use this when you know the opponent is cornered.
Pretty damn powerful, and I think its my first F rank lmao e.e
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(Genjutsu: Rengoku misuto) | Illusionary Arts: Purgatory Mist
Analyze please o-o
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if successful)
Description: The technique starts off with forming a single hand seal, which places a Genjutsu on the opponent, however, one of a dormant nature. The Genjutsu stays dormant within the opponent until he uses a technique that forms smoke or any smoke that might occur on the battlefield, like a summoning technique (includes summoning animals, clones, and even weapons) or from an explosion, to the burning of papers. This sets the Genjutsu in motion, where the pearly white smoke of the technique quickly forms into a darker more sinister version which engulfs the opponent. As it takes over the opponent, it enters his eyes, nose, mouth and even ears, causing massive amounts of pain and discomfort as the smoke becomes sharper as it enters the openings. The rest of the smoke would constrict the opponent's body, holding him in place as it enters him. Once inside the body, the smoke expands, and would cause the explosion of inner organs or parts, up to the users creativity. The smoke can be manipulated to be very sharp, or simply be smooth. All of this occurs within the illusion, and has could cause mental stress on the opponent's mind after a single turn if not countered.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-No S rank Genjutsu for the next turn
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if successful)
Description: The technique starts off with forming a single hand seal, which places a Genjutsu on the opponent, however, one of a dormant nature. The Genjutsu stays dormant within the opponent until he uses a technique that forms smoke or any smoke that might occur on the battlefield, like a summoning technique (includes summoning animals, clones, and even weapons) or from an explosion, to the burning of papers. This sets the Genjutsu in motion, where the pearly white smoke of the technique quickly forms into a darker more sinister version which engulfs the opponent. As it takes over the opponent, it enters his eyes, nose, mouth and even ears, causing massive amounts of pain and discomfort as the smoke becomes sharper as it enters the openings. The rest of the smoke would constrict the opponent's body, holding him in place as it enters him. Once inside the body, the smoke expands, and would cause the explosion of inner organs or parts, up to the users creativity. The smoke can be manipulated to be very sharp, or simply be smooth. All of this occurs within the illusion, and has could cause mental stress on the opponent's mind after a single turn if not countered.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-No S rank Genjutsu for the next turn
Analyze please o-o
So its primarily a dormant type Genjutsu. Using the fog of war against the opppnents, very neat against pesky summoners and clone tards. Forgive me but this would be my first dormant type Genjutsu to use so I have some questions.
1: If I placed this on an individual and they somehow performed an S ranked surge (without metagaming) would they flush out the chakra from their bodies or will it stay there simply under the premise of dormancy?
2: What if I layered this with another Genjutsu that just so happens to create smoke? Would it take effect then?
1: If I placed this on an individual and they somehow performed an S ranked surge (without metagaming) would they flush out the chakra from their bodies or will it stay there simply under the premise of dormancy?
2: What if I layered this with another Genjutsu that just so happens to create smoke? Would it take effect then?
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Well, as its dormant, it doesn't activate until the trigger is initiated. It's a good question, but I don't believe it will be flushed out unless its already been activated. Secondly, no, the smoke must be from the opponent's technique. I made it like this so it's easier for the smoke to take effect, and hold down the opponent. For example, if the made a clone right next to them, that smoke would activate the technique etc etc.
Ah I see, I'll keep that in mind then
(Genjutsu: Midare)- Illusionary Technique: Disturbia
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will and cast an illusion on the opponent's mind that sees a single figure appearing on the terrain- this figure can be anyone and anywhere the user chooses but it can't be made within 5 meters of the opponent. This figure will have a distant look at everything, as if looking through you and won't appear to be concerned with the world around them. They can't move, can't talk, not even think- they are essentially living statues. If left ignored by the opponent after one turn this figure multiplies into two figures with the second one being set anywhere the user pleases, even beside the opponent which is unlike the first figure. After the second turn these two multiply into 8 figures, and after the third turn 16 and so on until the entire field is completely filled and the opponent has nowhere to move. In reality, these multiplying statues are actually explosive kunai that the user throws at strategic locations- of course the opponent wouldn't actually see when the user throws these kunai. The more turns that pass the user throws more around the field until it is riddled with explosives. Then, with a single hand seal the user will detonate all the tags he had set. The aim is to get as many as close to the opponent as possible to ensure death before the illusion is broken.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown
A Genjutsu fanatic like you surely won't have any quedtions..
(Genjutsu: Midare)- Illusionary Technique: Disturbia
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will and cast an illusion on the opponent's mind that sees a single figure appearing on the terrain- this figure can be anyone and anywhere the user chooses but it can't be made within 5 meters of the opponent. This figure will have a distant look at everything, as if looking through you and won't appear to be concerned with the world around them. They can't move, can't talk, not even think- they are essentially living statues. If left ignored by the opponent after one turn this figure multiplies into two figures with the second one being set anywhere the user pleases, even beside the opponent which is unlike the first figure. After the second turn these two multiply into 8 figures, and after the third turn 16 and so on until the entire field is completely filled and the opponent has nowhere to move. In reality, these multiplying statues are actually explosive kunai that the user throws at strategic locations- of course the opponent wouldn't actually see when the user throws these kunai. The more turns that pass the user throws more around the field until it is riddled with explosives. Then, with a single hand seal the user will detonate all the tags he had set. The aim is to get as many as close to the opponent as possible to ensure death before the illusion is broken.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cooldown
A Genjutsu fanatic like you surely won't have any quedtions..
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I actually have, though they are more trivial xD
Can the statue/figure be like I want it to be, in terms of appearance, color, etc? And how big would you say they are?
Can the statue/figure be like I want it to be, in terms of appearance, color, etc? And how big would you say they are?
They're the height of human beings. In fact, that was the idea when I was writing it, human figures standing on the terrain. Any color, any look you want. As in the description; "can be anyone and anywhere".
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(Genjutsu: Namekuji o taberu! ) | Illusionary Technique: Eat slugs!
(Genjutsu: Karipuso no noroi) | Illusionary Arts: The Curse of Calypso
I don't have too many questions about either of these. The real questions are have are somewhat 'deconstructing' z.z I'll ask them on Skype maybe at a later date.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.
Notes:
-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A Genjutsu used mainly to mock or distract the opponent. With two hand seals, the user will induce the opponent in a Genjutsu, where the opponent would start to feel as though a large amount of slugs are situated in his throat, and they are moving towards his mouth, with gooey slime. Due to the human gag reflex, the opponent would feel the need to get rid of these slimy slugs by throwing up, and this allows the user to attack within this time window. The slugs keep on generating as one is released, making it extremely disgusting for the opponent. In reality, the opponent is standing still, as he tries to release himself from the Genjutsu.
Notes:
-Can only be used three times per battle.
-No S rank and above Genjutsu in the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Detective L.
Type: Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if successful, stress on the mind)
Description: A Genjutsu induced through the formation of three hand seals. The technique starts off by the sound of a woman screaming and wailing, as she rises from the ground, bound by a large amounts of ropes all around her body. Her face, one of a beautiful woman, but her body, grotesque and bleeding. Once emerged (happens fast), the ropes tighten and squeeze her body causing it to suddenly bursts into several small demonic crabs which explode towards the opponent. These crabs are quite fast (same speed level as the opponent one is facing) and also have extremely sharp pincers and exo-skeletons. As they get closer, become even smaller and smaller, decreasing in size, but increasing in number. The crabs would easily flood the opponent, biting into their skin (or rather pinching with pincers) and creeping underneath their skin. Move into any openings like the eyes, ears, mouth, nose etc. All this causes extreme stress on the opponent's mind, however, does not hinder the opponent's movement in reality. After a single turn (if not countered), the opponent would feel the damage on his mind, and pass out.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used twice per fight
-No S rank Genjustu in the same turn or one turn afterwards
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (60 if successful, stress on the mind)
Description: A Genjutsu induced through the formation of three hand seals. The technique starts off by the sound of a woman screaming and wailing, as she rises from the ground, bound by a large amounts of ropes all around her body. Her face, one of a beautiful woman, but her body, grotesque and bleeding. Once emerged (happens fast), the ropes tighten and squeeze her body causing it to suddenly bursts into several small demonic crabs which explode towards the opponent. These crabs are quite fast (same speed level as the opponent one is facing) and also have extremely sharp pincers and exo-skeletons. As they get closer, become even smaller and smaller, decreasing in size, but increasing in number. The crabs would easily flood the opponent, biting into their skin (or rather pinching with pincers) and creeping underneath their skin. Move into any openings like the eyes, ears, mouth, nose etc. All this causes extreme stress on the opponent's mind, however, does not hinder the opponent's movement in reality. After a single turn (if not countered), the opponent would feel the damage on his mind, and pass out.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Detective L
-Can only be used twice per fight
-No S rank Genjustu in the same turn or one turn afterwards
I don't have too many questions about either of these. The real questions are have are somewhat 'deconstructing' z.z I'll ask them on Skype maybe at a later date.
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Alright.
I have to give you props for making this, a great technique. Two in one Genjutsu, one part of it makes the user and his techniques look weak and measly to the opponent whilst the other makes the user look strong, as well as his techniques. A great visual based Genjutsu. No questions on it, its pretty straightforward.
I have to give you props for making this, a great technique. Two in one Genjutsu, one part of it makes the user and his techniques look weak and measly to the opponent whilst the other makes the user look strong, as well as his techniques. A great visual based Genjutsu. No questions on it, its pretty straightforward.
