Koutetsu Akumu Bio

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Basic Info.

Name: Koutetsu Akumu
Nickname: Silver Lightning
Gender: Male
Age: 20
Clan: Akumu Clan

Appearance: Appearance:

Koutetsu is of average height and weight. He has silver, shoulder-length hair with a natural perm. He has black eyes. He wears a long silver kimono that reaches to his knees. Under his kimono is a black undershirt with crimson lining. Unlike most Kumogakure ninja, he doesn't wear a headband. He wears black flip-flops that have pieces of wood on the bottom, making them look similar to Jiraiya's sandals.

He's also very muscular, which he hides under his loose kimono. When traveling, he is usually seen wearing an interesting hat.


Personality

Koutetsu has two distinctive personalities. One he usually hides, until he is alone or around someone he trust. His 'persona' as he calls it is his public personality. This personality is a very carefree, happy-go-lucky guy. He's easily amused and distracted. He's incredibly lazy, never wanting to do chores. Even though he wants to become Raikage, he would rather just sit around and daydream. He is compared to Kakashi in terms of personality, as he is always late, very lazy and carefree. He has lived through much pain in his life, causing him to keep it hidden, which does more harm than good. People like Shinsaku Takasugi can easily see when he is hurting.

His true personality, something he never shows to others, is a cruel, emotionless man who deems others as insignificant beings. His hatred that he usually hides comes to the surface, causing Koutetsu to act sadistic, and very cruel. He is easy to anger. He is calculative, easily thinking up strategies in a moments notice. When angered, he tends to smash things, or cause it to rain in Amegakure.

When in battle, he is calm, cool, and collective, shedding his carefree and happy-go-lucky nature. While battling, he can quickly analyze an opponents strengths and weaknesses. During battle, he's often seen giving his opponents back-handed compliments. If he begins to win by a huge margin, he will begin to get cocky. When he gets cocky, he'll go as far as taunt his opponents. His most prominent ability is his speed, which has given him a name as the fastest shinobi in Kumogakure.



Village Info:

Village of Birth: ???
Village of Alliance: Amegakure

Rank//Chakra Info:

Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: ???
Elements: Lightning
Ninjutsu: Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

History:

Koutetsu entered the Ninja Academy when he was 5 years old. He graduated in the same year. When he was 7, he was promoted to Chunin after he passed the semiannual Chunin Exams in Amegakure. This is about the time Koutetsu met Shinsaku Takasugi, his partner and close friend, who was also a Chunin at the time. After that, Koutetsu was promoted to Jonin at age 9. Shinsaku soon followed at age 10. After graduating to Jonin, Koutetsu wanted to learn how to summon a creature, so he tried to summon a toad, having seen Shinsaku perform it. He was instantly teleported to Mount Kamereon, the land of the Chameleons. There he met the Great Chameleon, who made him sign the contract that allowed him to summon Chameleons when necessary.

Two years later, Koutetsu was sent on a mission to Kirigakure, having been signs of a rogue Kumogakure shinobi. When he got there, it was revealed that he was sent to Kirigakure so the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist could kill him, something the Raikage had asked the Mizukage to order. He easily defeated the Swordsmen, and teleported back to Kumogakure.

When he arrived in Kumogakure, he was taken to the Raikage, who told him that he was banished from Kumogakure and if he stepped foot in it again, he would be killed by the Raikage personally. Koutetsu fled, leaving his family.

Later, as he was wandering, he spotted his long-time friend, Shinsaku Takasugi. They then began to wander the world together. As they wandered, Koutetsu started to wonder why he was a 'good guy'. Later, he attacked Shinsaku on a path, which resulted in a stalemate. Even though Koutetsu was strong, Shinsaku easily matched him. Knowing he wouldn't be able to wander with Shinsaku without fighting, Koutetsu decided to leave him.

Eventually, he traveled to Amegakure. Having traveled far too long, he decided to stay there. When he arrived, he was met by the Village Leader, Kataki Gori. They fought, with Koutetsu ultimately killing Kataki. He announced he had taken Amegakure over, which most Amegakure ninja did not care to listen to.

Backround Music: Bodies- Drowning Pool

Battles:

Won: [000]
Lost: [000]
 
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take out everything about his Chakra because thats dumb and won't get accepted

and stay with the basic layout below

Basic Information
Name:
Nickname:
Gender:
Age:
Clan:

Looks:

Personality:

Village Info.
Village of Birth:
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:
Specialty:
Elements:
Your ninjutsu:


Background Info.
History:

Other

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Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won:
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add these jutsu, you get them by default...
Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

and like it says above, stick with the layout, if you dont stick with the layout, it wont get acceoted.

get rid of the ninja statistics, the height, weight, birthday, and blood type is unneccesary, get rid of it. follow the layout, other wise, your idea is pretty good.
 
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Follow the template completely, don't remove anything from it nor change its order.

A bio that doesn't follow the template has no chance to be approved ever.
 
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