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A wild Tsundere appears!
Asuna appeared before the man with her usual getup. Her golden hair blew gently in the breeze as she gave a stern look at the stranger. Though quite intimidating, there was a softness in her face. A kind smile soon appeared and spoke quite lovingly and charming.
"Welcome young warrior. My name is Asuna. Before we begin, tell me a little about yourself."
While the stranger formulated an answer, Asuna bravely shared hers.
"I come from the Land of Iron where all the samurai of legend have hailed from. Though not a legend myself, I have disciplined myself to the ways of the sword. I have had many hardships along the way for my choices but they have nonetheless helped me appreciate the small things in life. I choose the sword because unlike any other methods, it requires a lot more from so little other than yourself and a ornamented piece of metal. Though it doesn't make me better, it does make me understand things in a different way than if I were to use say ninjutsu or other more complex powers."
Asuna appeared before the man with her usual getup. Her golden hair blew gently in the breeze as she gave a stern look at the stranger. Though quite intimidating, there was a softness in her face. A kind smile soon appeared and spoke quite lovingly and charming.
"Welcome young warrior. My name is Asuna. Before we begin, tell me a little about yourself."
While the stranger formulated an answer, Asuna bravely shared hers.
"I come from the Land of Iron where all the samurai of legend have hailed from. Though not a legend myself, I have disciplined myself to the ways of the sword. I have had many hardships along the way for my choices but they have nonetheless helped me appreciate the small things in life. I choose the sword because unlike any other methods, it requires a lot more from so little other than yourself and a ornamented piece of metal. Though it doesn't make me better, it does make me understand things in a different way than if I were to use say ninjutsu or other more complex powers."
Nice to meet you Asuna. I am Jack Mandalore, but my friends call me Raiden. I hail from Konoha, the village hidden in the leaves. As I am a but a lowly Jonin who spends his time perfecting the craft of combat. It is a an endless journey as there is always room for improvement. I enjoy the ninja arts of Raiton and Genjutsu as well as Taijutsu and Kenjutsu like yourself. Now days I work hard so that I may become a renowned specialist in the areas. As you can see by my armor, I am more technologically advanced than most ninja and samurai alike. This technology is the trademarked creation of my clan, The Mandalores, who I also take great pride in being apart of. They even gave me this fancy high frequency sword. Raiden starts to swiftly swing it before slashing his own cheek. He then sheathes it. Ahem... Well then that was embarrassing.
Asuna read deep into Raiden's movement's and gestures. It was a habit for her to always be alert and aware of her surroundings. She felt quite drawn to Raiden as he continued his story. As he finished, she looked up at the sky. The cool breeze gently brushed against them and she spoke quite wisely and sternly.
"That is some story, Raiden. I cannot begin to imagine your suffering and what you cannot tell me for I fear there is more. As long as you stay positive and look to the future with hope, there is nothing you can't overcome."
She smiled gently and then pulled out a long scroll. She passed it to Raiden and then spoke as she hoped he would take a gander at it.
"Take a look through which one's you would like to learn, then in your own words, explain to me as best you can how you would use this effectively. If you have any comments on it like how you like it or not or how you would make it better, feel free to share. Then perform it for me against this wooden dummy I use for practice. Please take this seriously otherwise you will forfeit your chance to learn the technique."
"That is some story, Raiden. I cannot begin to imagine your suffering and what you cannot tell me for I fear there is more. As long as you stay positive and look to the future with hope, there is nothing you can't overcome."
She smiled gently and then pulled out a long scroll. She passed it to Raiden and then spoke as she hoped he would take a gander at it.
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"Take a look through which one's you would like to learn, then in your own words, explain to me as best you can how you would use this effectively. If you have any comments on it like how you like it or not or how you would make it better, feel free to share. Then perform it for me against this wooden dummy I use for practice. Please take this seriously otherwise you will forfeit your chance to learn the technique."
Yes. My suffering was great, but it was due to the circumstances and so that my village may prosper. It was a burden I did not have the luxury of ignoring and till this day I still fight for those who cannot fight for themselves.
As Raiden finished talking he accepted the scroll from the swordsman containing his own original techniques. After listening to the instructions that followed after, Raiden opened the scroll in search of jutsu that he thought would aid him in his journey to protect the weak.
If it is okay with you I would like to learn the jutsus: Cross Slash, Sword God's Deception, and Swallow Leap Forward. In general I like all of your techniques the way they are and cant foresee any improvements.
Raiden looks over at the dummy and goes to pick the wooden sword leaning on it because if he used his own sword it would destroy and vandalize the dummy. He then walks 5m away from the dummy while facing towards it. His right foot is forward, his left foot is pivoted back, and he is grasping his sword with both of his hands with them somewhat extended. Remembering what was described in the scroll, Raiden ran toward the dummy. Once he was in CQC range, he channeled chakra into his wooden sword while turning his wrist so that the would-be blade of the sword was turned upward and swiftly brought the sword up in a slashing motion. Then he turned his sword downward as he slashed in a down motion. Next raiden brought his sword to the right of the dummy and slashed horizontally to the left and did the same on the left of the dummy but to the left.
Raiden then jumped backwards 3m from the dummy preparing to perform the Sword God's Deception technique. Raiden sheathed his sword while still channeling chakra into it. The wooden sword was coated in crimson red chakra. He then unsheathes his sword and points it toward the the dummy. Raiden then runs toward the dummy as if he is going to strike the stomach of the dummy. Instead he intentionally misses and goes past the dummy. Once behind the dummy, Raiden brings his sword backwards and embeds the would-be blade of the wooded sword into the dummy's back. Then Raiden lifts the dummy up and slams them face down on the ground further embedding his sword into the dummy.
I must say, that is a brutal technique.
Raiden then takes his sword out the dummy, sheathes it, and stands the dummy upright again. He then walks 6m away from the dummy before running toward it. Once 3m away he jumps into a frontward flip above the dummy while unsheathing his sword. He then slashed his sword in the same motion and embedded it into the dummy back, once again picking it up and flipping it onto its back. Raiden then lands on the chest of dummy. Had the dummy been a real person, Raidens weight and momentum would have certainly crushed the ribs and sternum while doing some damage to the organs beneath.
Once again a powerful technique. Raiden bows while maintaining eye contact. Domo arigato Asuna-san. However I cannot leave here, learning your techniques, while leaving you empty handed. I myself have only created two techniques. In addition to that, I cam currently working on more and a fighting style. That I will reserve for you once finished.
(Kyōgiri) - Cross Slash
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user unsheathes his sword from his scabbard, channels a strong yet precise amount of crimson-like chakra throughout his blade, and performs a series of slashes in the form of a cross. He first begins upwards vertically, downwards vertically, to the left horizontally, to the right horizontally, and then proceeds to re-sheath his sword back to his scabbard in a quick, clean motion cancelling the chakra and ending the technique.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Futsunushi no giman) - Sword God's Deception
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to their blade while gripping the handle and while still in the scabbard. The user then quickly unsheathes his sword which is imbued with a red-like glow. He then points forward with it and dashes towards his opponent's stomach area. The user intentionally misses his mark and instead, as his sword passes behind his opponent, he slashes back and releases the chakra from the sword, causing a powerful slash to the back. While the sword is still embedded into the enemies back, the user lifts the opponent up and off the floor, then slams them back on the floor again, face down. This is all done in a quick, clean motion and with his sword. The user then steps on the opponent's back and swings his sword rapidly and returns his sword back to his scabbard, ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
(Suwarō Bonnaban) - Swallow Leap Forward
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a frontal flip and while in midair above the opponent, skewers him with his sword. Using the momentum from his leap and sword skewering, the user continues his flip, in turn flipping the target, causing him to be thrown onto his back. As the user completes his flip, he lands on the target's chest forcibly, causing a near fatal kick.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
As Raiden finished talking he accepted the scroll from the swordsman containing his own original techniques. After listening to the instructions that followed after, Raiden opened the scroll in search of jutsu that he thought would aid him in his journey to protect the weak.
If it is okay with you I would like to learn the jutsus: Cross Slash, Sword God's Deception, and Swallow Leap Forward. In general I like all of your techniques the way they are and cant foresee any improvements.
Raiden looks over at the dummy and goes to pick the wooden sword leaning on it because if he used his own sword it would destroy and vandalize the dummy. He then walks 5m away from the dummy while facing towards it. His right foot is forward, his left foot is pivoted back, and he is grasping his sword with both of his hands with them somewhat extended. Remembering what was described in the scroll, Raiden ran toward the dummy. Once he was in CQC range, he channeled chakra into his wooden sword while turning his wrist so that the would-be blade of the sword was turned upward and swiftly brought the sword up in a slashing motion. Then he turned his sword downward as he slashed in a down motion. Next raiden brought his sword to the right of the dummy and slashed horizontally to the left and did the same on the left of the dummy but to the left.
Raiden then jumped backwards 3m from the dummy preparing to perform the Sword God's Deception technique. Raiden sheathed his sword while still channeling chakra into it. The wooden sword was coated in crimson red chakra. He then unsheathes his sword and points it toward the the dummy. Raiden then runs toward the dummy as if he is going to strike the stomach of the dummy. Instead he intentionally misses and goes past the dummy. Once behind the dummy, Raiden brings his sword backwards and embeds the would-be blade of the wooded sword into the dummy's back. Then Raiden lifts the dummy up and slams them face down on the ground further embedding his sword into the dummy.
I must say, that is a brutal technique.
Raiden then takes his sword out the dummy, sheathes it, and stands the dummy upright again. He then walks 6m away from the dummy before running toward it. Once 3m away he jumps into a frontward flip above the dummy while unsheathing his sword. He then slashed his sword in the same motion and embedded it into the dummy back, once again picking it up and flipping it onto its back. Raiden then lands on the chest of dummy. Had the dummy been a real person, Raidens weight and momentum would have certainly crushed the ribs and sternum while doing some damage to the organs beneath.
Once again a powerful technique. Raiden bows while maintaining eye contact. Domo arigato Asuna-san. However I cannot leave here, learning your techniques, while leaving you empty handed. I myself have only created two techniques. In addition to that, I cam currently working on more and a fighting style. That I will reserve for you once finished.
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(Kyōgiri) - Cross Slash
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user unsheathes his sword from his scabbard, channels a strong yet precise amount of crimson-like chakra throughout his blade, and performs a series of slashes in the form of a cross. He first begins upwards vertically, downwards vertically, to the left horizontally, to the right horizontally, and then proceeds to re-sheath his sword back to his scabbard in a quick, clean motion cancelling the chakra and ending the technique.
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Futsunushi no giman) - Sword God's Deception
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of chakra to their blade while gripping the handle and while still in the scabbard. The user then quickly unsheathes his sword which is imbued with a red-like glow. He then points forward with it and dashes towards his opponent's stomach area. The user intentionally misses his mark and instead, as his sword passes behind his opponent, he slashes back and releases the chakra from the sword, causing a powerful slash to the back. While the sword is still embedded into the enemies back, the user lifts the opponent up and off the floor, then slams them back on the floor again, face down. This is all done in a quick, clean motion and with his sword. The user then steps on the opponent's back and swings his sword rapidly and returns his sword back to his scabbard, ending the technique.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
(Suwarō Bonnaban) - Swallow Leap Forward
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a frontal flip and while in midair above the opponent, skewers him with his sword. Using the momentum from his leap and sword skewering, the user continues his flip, in turn flipping the target, causing him to be thrown onto his back. As the user completes his flip, he lands on the target's chest forcibly, causing a near fatal kick.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Deviation
Asuna felt quite relieved to meet another well-trained swordsman. And handsome too she felt.
"Very well done. I remember hearing about you particularly from my senpai. I think you have a lot of potential if you apply yourself more. Not bad. You've learned my techniques and quite spledidly well. Be sure to do them justice when you decide to brandish your blade in battle.
Now you said you had something for me?"
Asuna smiled and waited for his reply.
"Very well done. I remember hearing about you particularly from my senpai. I think you have a lot of potential if you apply yourself more. Not bad. You've learned my techniques and quite spledidly well. Be sure to do them justice when you decide to brandish your blade in battle.
Now you said you had something for me?"
Asuna smiled and waited for his reply.
Yes that is correct. Tosses you a
Analyze and perform it on my clone if you will. Makes a clone that tries to attack you with a basic downward sword strike.
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. In this scroll is my Blazing Fireflies jutsu.Analyze and perform it on my clone if you will. Makes a clone that tries to attack you with a basic downward sword strike.