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Naruto shippuden~New Age
This is My first one and my first chapter if u like it leave a massage and wait for chapter two.
Konoha's nb chapter 1: As the world revolutionized, shinobi were killed off the face of the earth because ordinary men believed they were evil and war broke out ( science vs martial arts).
Shinobi's knew that this is a fight the could never win so the fled their infants and stood their ground and fought until they were defeated and almost completely wiped out.
Uzumaki !,you knuckle head where are you ,
here uchiha it's 8 am in the morning what gives
, uzumaki am going to get some stuffs from the mall and i need you to come with me, i hate going out alone
Okay okay so i get to go out with the coolest girl in this orphanage, is kinda a date right said uzumaki?
What ever u dum dum but we have to do it fast before it is 12 pm or the ophanage managements will be mad at us said uchiha.
ok let me get ma clothes.
So the boy(uzumaki) and girl(uchiha) left for the mall,the had to took a short cut to reach the mall in time but the lane was a very empty and deserted one.
This place gives me the creeps said uzumaki,
Ya no kidding says uchiha.
The were about half way of the lane when the met an old peasant begging for aid ,
uchiha told him they were orphans and they don't have enough to give out .
Wait! I think i have something for him said uzumaki,he brought out some money and gave him but the aged man didn't say anything, he just gazed at them and finally he said i want all your money,
no way! said uzumaki But was immediately punched to the face by the old man which sent uzumaki crashing on trashcans.
then uchiha said to the old man we don't wish u any harm please let us go all else i won't go easy on you.
That's always the way of the uchiha clan always cocky murmured the old man, do you worse he says
then uchiha said to him your gonna be sorry and she takes a deep breathe and from her mouth she spilled a couple of small fire ball at the old man which burnt his clothes.
oh! My God, are you a witch! Screamed Uzumaki getting back on his knees..,
shut up, is my little secret and am getting our ass saved you dumb head said uchiha
but to their greatest horror,the old man wasn't surprise and said so you can concentrate your chakra to produce fire from your mouth well not surprised ,the uchiha's are known by their rapid growth and lust for power.
so the old man took a couple of steps back and started making signs with his hands but uzumaki and uchiha were pretty confused,they were like what a heck is he doing ,after had done with his hand signs, he whispered fire style:fire ball jutsu,spilling a huge ball of fire at the two from his mouth.
beautiful! a ball made out of fire said uzumaki gazing at the fire ball but was pushed away from the fire by uchiha and said to him,
well it maybe beautiful but its still fire you knukcle head,
almost forgot replied uzumaki.
so the fire's blast gave them the chance to run for their lives.
Hey uchiha notice we have been here already like five times now, like we are just running round and round the same lane said uzumaki,
ya just like a dream replied uchiha and they both ran to a dead end and the old man was behind them.
were doomed ,help! Screamed uzumaki but the old man said scream all you want, your in my world now i control everything, is called genjutsu.
The old man quickly released them from the genjutstu and they saw that they haven't moved from the spot that they dodge the fire, it was all illusion.
The man quickly did again some hand signs and said wood style: wood prison, this time wood came out of the ground and caged the both of them.
I want my mummy screamed uzumaki,
What do you want from us shouted uchiha.
The old man replied grimly, to tell you what you two needs to know.
End of chpt 1
This is My first one and my first chapter if u like it leave a massage and wait for chapter two.
Konoha's nb chapter 1: As the world revolutionized, shinobi were killed off the face of the earth because ordinary men believed they were evil and war broke out ( science vs martial arts).
Shinobi's knew that this is a fight the could never win so the fled their infants and stood their ground and fought until they were defeated and almost completely wiped out.
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Uzumaki !,you knuckle head where are you ,
here uchiha it's 8 am in the morning what gives
, uzumaki am going to get some stuffs from the mall and i need you to come with me, i hate going out alone
Okay okay so i get to go out with the coolest girl in this orphanage, is kinda a date right said uzumaki?
What ever u dum dum but we have to do it fast before it is 12 pm or the ophanage managements will be mad at us said uchiha.
ok let me get ma clothes.
So the boy(uzumaki) and girl(uchiha) left for the mall,the had to took a short cut to reach the mall in time but the lane was a very empty and deserted one.
This place gives me the creeps said uzumaki,
Ya no kidding says uchiha.
The were about half way of the lane when the met an old peasant begging for aid ,
uchiha told him they were orphans and they don't have enough to give out .
Wait! I think i have something for him said uzumaki,he brought out some money and gave him but the aged man didn't say anything, he just gazed at them and finally he said i want all your money,
no way! said uzumaki But was immediately punched to the face by the old man which sent uzumaki crashing on trashcans.
then uchiha said to the old man we don't wish u any harm please let us go all else i won't go easy on you.
That's always the way of the uchiha clan always cocky murmured the old man, do you worse he says
then uchiha said to him your gonna be sorry and she takes a deep breathe and from her mouth she spilled a couple of small fire ball at the old man which burnt his clothes.
oh! My God, are you a witch! Screamed Uzumaki getting back on his knees..,
shut up, is my little secret and am getting our ass saved you dumb head said uchiha
but to their greatest horror,the old man wasn't surprise and said so you can concentrate your chakra to produce fire from your mouth well not surprised ,the uchiha's are known by their rapid growth and lust for power.
so the old man took a couple of steps back and started making signs with his hands but uzumaki and uchiha were pretty confused,they were like what a heck is he doing ,after had done with his hand signs, he whispered fire style:fire ball jutsu,spilling a huge ball of fire at the two from his mouth.
beautiful! a ball made out of fire said uzumaki gazing at the fire ball but was pushed away from the fire by uchiha and said to him,
well it maybe beautiful but its still fire you knukcle head,
almost forgot replied uzumaki.
so the fire's blast gave them the chance to run for their lives.
Hey uchiha notice we have been here already like five times now, like we are just running round and round the same lane said uzumaki,
ya just like a dream replied uchiha and they both ran to a dead end and the old man was behind them.
were doomed ,help! Screamed uzumaki but the old man said scream all you want, your in my world now i control everything, is called genjutsu.
The old man quickly released them from the genjutstu and they saw that they haven't moved from the spot that they dodge the fire, it was all illusion.
The man quickly did again some hand signs and said wood style: wood prison, this time wood came out of the ground and caged the both of them.
I want my mummy screamed uzumaki,
What do you want from us shouted uchiha.
The old man replied grimly, to tell you what you two needs to know.
End of chpt 1
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Nice start Alex. Just work on the things I told you in VM. 