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AlexUchina

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sure ryun -stands there- you can tell me
 

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The story starts with a young man, this man just got married and is drinking at a bar, the man is soon aproched by a beautiful waitress...the married man knowingly seduces the young waitress and they make love, after a week they are dating, another week engaged...but as the the man and waitress are at the church about to get married the man laughs and explains to the waitress that he was married and loved his wife...the waitress was heartbroken and left. What the man didnt know is that the waitress was a witch and that later that night she put a curse on him, the curse was that he wouldnt die untill he felt as much pain and sorrow as she did. Do you follow alex?
 

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yea...I follow and i am a lil worried that i am not liking that -looks at ryun- ....
 

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It gets worse........the man later goes to the waitress' house to find her sitting in a chair: eyes gauged out writs and neck slit. The man broke down in tears...he saw a note and read it, the note explained why she did what she did and explained how he was cursed....the man couldnt have this be on his hands.....the man called the cops and hid the note, after the man was investigated he left home and thought about the note. He laughed and took out a revolver and put it to his head and fired. The man was fine, after a week of kulling himself for fun the man thought he should kill others, so he did.....after doing that the man started to think and remembered he had a wife. The man had returned home only to find out his pregnet wife who had twins died, the man just laughed and left...the man was twisted and broken, no longer the man no longer was the same. The man started to kill himself not for fun, just to die......do you still follow?
 

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yes ryun i do still follow -slowly sits down listening-
 

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Twenty years pass by, the man changed his ways but still looking as he did twenty years before....the man is a priest at a church, and one day the man met a young woman...and after fifteen years they got married. The man thought his troubles were over and they newlyweds tried for a baby, but had a miscarradge, this procces repeated itself seven times....they didnt know why this happend, but then the man told him of his secret, she felt bad for him, so they tried one last time, out of spite of the witch and finaly succeded. So tell me alex how do you think the story ends?
 

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well from listening to that my opinion would have to be. No secrets throughout the relationship cause even if it is one that one secret can change your whole life. So im either thinking he went back to his old ways or he finally changed his ways and is moving on with his wife and child -looks at ryun- how did it end
 

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the man was finaly and stayed happy for thirteen and raised his child and loved his wife.....it was the boys thirteenth birthday and when he blew out his candles his wish was for his parents to stay with him forever. His dad and mom smiled and they opened presents. Before the boy went to bed his dad told him that he had something to show him. They proceded to his fathers study. Thd man told his son of his journey and said that he couldnt die, -starts to choke up- the son didnt believe him....so the dad put the revolver to his mouth,smiled and shot. This time......he died. The son was devistated, and when he approched the body, he found a note addresed to ryun, so he opened it and found it was the suicide note that the waitress wrote. He read it but saw it continued on the back, -startst crying-guess what it said? -smiles as tears run down-
 

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what did it say -tries not to cry and wipes your tears-
 

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-looks at u- what the? -wipes eyes- ok
 

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-takes out the note- what i didnt realise then is the sense of humor she had
 

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-looks at the note and eyes widen- dont tell me....ur the kid
 

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-looks at u speechless-....-shakes head- sry im sry about ur father....I rlly am
 

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yea....-looks at the window and looks down-.......
 
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