konoha: second generation of shinobi part four of ten part 1

[Makoto Yuki]

*as they arive at the shrine they see the extraction of kyuubi and yin's brother**scene: midday,windy*

yin:....look!!!.there he is
orito: DAD!!!!!!!!!!
???:hmm.......hehehahahhaha.....your to late......*as he finishes the extraction*......its over....in a matter of minutes naruto will die..
sakura: YOU MONSTER!!!!!!!!!.*as she punches at the man*
yin: DEIMOS!!!!!!.......why???
deimos: well brother...there is no need to hide it any more.
yin:hehehahahahaha...your right brother.....my name isint yin...its phobos.
sakura/orito:what!!!!!!!!
Orito: y-you mean the two most dangerous shinobi of your time???
phobos:....you got it kid..

orito:heheh-
*part four...to be continued*

 

[Sharingdork]

part two better come out soon, that's too much of a cliffhanger!