Kohana's red Spark

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name:Crade keimyou

age:16

home:konoha

father: Dante Keimyou
mother:Michiko Keimyou

physical traits: Brown hair, Grey eyes, 5'11. Scar on the neck and stomach

Element:lightning, water

Crade was born in Konoha. The scars on his neck and stomach were due to a breathing problem and received them after surgery. Very low chakra due to this problem. Not a very loud person but was a very witty child.

Embarrassed about his scar he ussually wore a high collared shirt to cover his neck (headband worn around the neck after he graduated) . Medium length brown hair bangs touching his eyebrows. Black shirt with white pants and the usual blue sandals.

Enrolled in the academy at age 7 and noticed he was the shortest child. And noticed that he didnt have alot of chakra like his fellow class mates did. Due to this he trained with his father after school to attain more chakra.

Due to his training he graduated the academy with flying colors at age 11. Chosen to be the student of the hokage Konohamru Sarutobi along with two others. Crade trained in taijutsu mainly with the hokage. Learning his nature affinty for lightning the hokage asked the raikage Darui to train with Crade.

Crade traveled to the Village hidden in the clouds and met the raikage Darui and learned about his unusal trait for the black lightning. Crade knew that Darui was the right teacher for him.

Training with Darui a couple years had passed, and while training discoverd that his parents had been killed. Not knowing who killed them or how Crade broke down in sadness and rage. While enraged Crade discoverd his own traint of the red lightning. The red lightning is alot hotter, the molecules in the lightning travel alot faster giving the lightning a different sound and more of a sting.

Crade left the village hidden in the clouds to be only be stopped by an unknown man holding a book and wearing a mask. The man told Crade about a story of a ninja who left the land hidden in the leaves only to find revenge on his brother for killing his clan. Only to end up in misery.

Crade took the man's advice and stopped his plans for revenge and went back to the village hidden in the clouds. On his way back he then realized who the man was, but the man shall remain nameless.

Three years had passed when Crade went back to his home village. Telling the hokage and his sensi about the training. Konohamaru mentioned he has learned alot more than he anticipated. And making the land hidden in the clouds and the land hidden in the leaves allies.

Learning about his second element. water, he learned to combine the two elements effectively. Learning to heal himself in battle or using the water to conduct electricity.

With Crade's new skills, he was able to track down the ninja planning to steal the Nara's shadow imitation technique. Crade ambushed the ninja successively. Showing his new technique's and his new trait the red lightning.

Crade gaining a reputation as a skilled ninja, he then sought after a group of ninja trying to resurrect the akautski. Being a one man cell, Crade strategized his moves carefully. Crade then singled out each ninja, ambushing each ninja. Using his water to cover thier mouths so they wont say a word, then using his lightning as an assassination tool.

The hokage learned about this and learned that the ninja resurrecting the akautski were S rank criminals. For Crade to defeat them in only days gained Crade the tilte Konoha's red spark.

Crade's dream is not only to become the hokage, but to make every nation allies and bring peace to the ninja world.


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srry dude, you gotta have atleast 50 posts before you make a bio...
and when you do, make sure you read the bio template
 

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It's annoying, but you need 50. Here's the link to the template Papaya was talking about:



And here's a sample:

 

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im not sure but i dont think you can have more than one element even when you become a genin
 

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omg i am so sorry, thank you guys im new to this thing so im gonna screw up a few things, but thank you guys for your help and patcients
 

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omg i am so sorry, thank you guys im new to this thing so im gonna screw up a few things, but thank you guys for your help and patcients

Don't worry! Even though it says I've been for 3 years I'm new to it also! Before I only used this to watch the anime and read the manga. I've just recently started writing a fanfic, and commenting on threads. =)
 

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haha thats cool! :) im happy this site has the anime im tired of watching it on youtube. But besides my 50 posts whatd yall think? im open to all suggestions and i need advice
 

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Btw its spelled Konoha if thats what you meant. I like the Red Spark nickname, but make sure you include it in your bio when your finally a genin. The history sounds awesome to.
 
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oh wow i didnt even notice that, thank you
 

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Love it! With better grammar, you could be a fanfic writer! =)
 

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haha great! :) yea i have horrendous grammer and i need to work on it, thank you for your support :) im gonna work on my 50 posts
 

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Gaara pretty much covered the basics:
here are some links you need to read up on:
Example bio template:
Limits to bios made:
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