What genre of music were you aiming for this? Electro? it sure does sound like that if you were shooting for that, sorry if you weren't. Pretty good. Are you also thinking of adding lyrics? Keep working at it

You've got potential.
Bit of critic if you want ^-^" Dont have to read it:
-Needs a bit more of a diversity.
-Lots of bee noises (not sure if this is a good or bad thing, if you wanted a lot of bee noises that you've pretty much accomplished that

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-Needs a bass drop bro >