[Approved] Kiyoshi Gōbboku Bio take 2

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Basic Information
Name: Kiyoshi Gōbboku
Nickname: The Keeper
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Clan: none
Looks:Kiyoshi is a tall slim, paranoid recluse. He has long Green Hair, And still wears his Tribes Warrior attire. It is adorned in colored Feathers, And claws from various animals. He Has a Jaguar Tail that wraps around his neck like a necklace, and carries a large family spear with Him. It is crafted with the bones of animals. And Covered in special symbols.

Personality: kiyoshi prefers to be by himself, He has trouble trusting outsiders and is a freelance mercenary for Hire, He travels the ninja world, looking for work, not staying in one place for long, He usually comes to the aid of those in need but expects pay afterwords. His goal is to find the ninja that killed his parents and hates any ninja from Kirigakure for they are the ones who attacked his village. He is a man of nature and is at peace when he is surrounded by trees.


Village Info.
Village of Birth: unknown
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Elements: Water (needs training)
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.


History: Kiyoshi was born in the small Village in a vast Jungle. They kept mostly to themselves, Its elders where rouge ninjas from previous wars who had enough of the ninja life. They traded with other villages in the jungle and had little contact with the outside world. They were a tribe of druids and sages who communed with nature and the earth around them, The elders had attained a great understanding of nature chakra and trained the hunters that had the ability to control chakra, only what they needed to survive, subsitutions, transformations. They had a good relationship with the Animal spirits in the Jungle. It was full of spirits evil and good and most of the hunters allied themselfs with the Feline tribes and many of their young hunters sighed contracts with them. When Kiyoshi was 12 he had to embark on this right of passage into adulthood. He would have to venture into the jungle and hunt a Boar. After 2 days hunting Kiyoshi slayed his first boar and brought the carcass to the Tiger tribe that lived in the great Tree. The Boar was the largest they had seen.
4 years later Kiyoshi was an adventurous hunter always willing to explore new places, he was warned by his elders not to venture outside the jungle but his curiosity had gotten the better of him. He ventured to the outskirts of the jungle and observed the curious clan of people that lived in tall wooden houses. A beautiful voice caught his attention. He followed the song and Found a young girl picking flowers in a clearing. He was entranced by her voice and almost didn't notice the rushing crazed boar that was charging out of the woods at her. He Broke his clans rules and rushed to her aid but did a transformation jutsu into a large White Tiger. After Battling with the giant Boar The Young girl was saved. She knew he wasn't a tiger because it would have eaten her. She asked his name and Kiyoshi transformed back into himself, and talked to her. They quickly became Friends and Her name was Aika, she picked flowers for him whenever he came to visit and soon he became a friend to the village outside the jungle. One of his fellow hunters from the village saw this and reported him to their elders, He explained that the people outside the village were not bad and had good intentions. They explained that being secluded has kept their village alive and out of conflict and that everything they needed was around them He was forsaken to leave the Village by himself.

A couple more years have past and Aika leads an expedition into the jungle to find Kiyoshi's Village. Her Younger Brother Is Deathly I'll and Kiyoshi told them that his elders were skilled in healing and curing sickness, They made a tea from special leaves in their forest that cured illness's of many kinds. A group of hunters from another tribe in the Jungle come across her group and Began to slaughter them. Kiyoshi hear's their screams and his group rushes to their aid. His friends tell him not to interfere but he rejects that idea saying it breaks the laws of their village that all lives are sacred even those outside the village. He kills the hunters from the other clan and Saves Akia and what is left of their Group. They Take them To the village and Kiyoshi explains the situation. Some of the Elders agree with his decision but others are still fixed on the belief that their clan is Superior to others. They tell him that he may have started a war with the other tribes but that they will still offer their medicine to Aika village, In return they ask that they never return. Aika agrees and say's her goodbyes to Kiyoshi.
The elders were right and soon they are at battle with the surrounding tribes. But being Superior to them the other tribes seek outside help. They Hire rouge shinobi's and their small village is no match for skilled ninja. Only a few of their warriors had the ability to manipulate chakra but did not have the training to defend against them. One day Kiyoshi and a few others return from a long hunt to find their village in shambles. Every One is dead, The elders, the children, They Showed no mercy. Kiyoshi Runs to his home and Holds his Dieing father in his arms. A dead ninja Lies next to him with his dads spirit spear in his chest. kiyoshi see's the headband from kirigakure. His Father Grabs Kiyoshi and With his last bit of Strength Takes the spear from him and tells Kiyoshi that he will always be with him. The other remaining hunters go their separate ways and Kiyoshi grabs the headband and heads towards Akia's village. She can tell right away their is something wrong with him and she tries to comfort him. He simply ask's what direction kirigakure is and she shrugs. He tells her he must avenge his village and that he has to become a great ninja so he can protect the weak. He begins his long journey to find power.
present Time in Naruto pre war- He has been molded into a better warrior but now is still on his quest to become a greater ninja. He has encountered many obstacles on his journey but knows he must ally himself with a village in order to gain greater power. He finds himself most at home in Konohagakure. His current level is Chunin and people give him stares because of his attire. They think he is very primitive and a savage and many are to afraid to approach him. He has tried several times to apply for a teacher but no one has responded to his requests, Lady Tsunade had asked his help only once in tracking down a few rouge ninjas who had kidnapped a Hyuga child. He found them quickly and returned the girl unharmed. He has gained the trust of the village now and decides that he will stay for a while.


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Kiyoshi's Transformation saving Akia.

Theme Song and Background Music: Down with the Sickness
Battles: none

Won: /
Lost: /

~Approved~ removed specialty, removed tree climbing and water walking and removed summoning contract.
 
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You can't have 2 elements yet so take one off and you can't summon yet either...you are still a genin.
Edit: Here you also get these Jutsus when you make your bio.
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 
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