Kiritsugu finishes my lightning :)

[Adachi]

Perfect!

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(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explotion.

Know any Earth or Fire jutsu?

 

[Rayder]

I have just finished C-rank Earth but I haven't started Fire at all.

 

[Adachi]

I see.
Alright.
Now begin first by creating a chidori. Once you have done that, then send chakra through it once more to manipulate it into a blade. See if you can make the blade up to 10 meters long at least.
What might this be used for?

 

[Rayder]

I focus my Raiton chakra into my right hand. I charge it and it becomes a bright, crackling ball of energy and I hear the sound of chirping all around me. I then use shape manipulation to lengthen and stretching the Chidori and curve it slightly to form the shape of a blade. I then add more of my chakra into the blade lengthening it even further until it reaches 10 meters from me. I move my hand to test out if I still have control of the blade and it feels like an extension of my arm.

This is a really useful Raiton jutsu since:
It would be useful as it would be an extension of a blade, in a way.
Could stab anyone up to mid-range.
It would surprise the opponent if it was used in close-range and it will be almost impossible to dodge.
It extends really fast so again harder to dodge.
Still has Chidori's piercing qualities.
Less risk to the user.

 

[Adachi]

Good. It was used against Danzo during the Sasuke VS Danzo battles. Don't forget the speed of it.

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(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

So do you know Wind yet?

 

[Rayder]

I am on the last jutsu of D-rank.

 

[Adachi]

Good enough.
Begin by gather the wind around you and spin it around you...as you do so, also add lightning to this combo. Once the speed is great enough, release your vortex of wind from around yourself towards the trees before it in the form of a dragon. Proceed to destroy that entire section of forest.

 

[Rayder]

I gather wind around you and spin it around my body like a cyclone. I proceed to then add my Raiton chakra into the wind and manage to infuse it successfully. Once its spinning fast enough I release the vortex of lightning infused-wind from around me and send it straight towards the trees. It forms a dragon and destroys the entire section of forest.

 

[Adachi]

Good.

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(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Now, proceed to rush at my clone and deliver some kicks and punches to him, having the momentum drive you into the air.
Then, finish off with a Chidori by using the Ox handseal!

 

[Rayder]

I run at your clone and punch its chest, as this will drive it back, and continue to punch and kick him as he tries to step back. I then aim a punch at the bottom of his chin and push my fist up as it connects with him, sending him flying up. I then appear behind him and quickly form the Ox handseal and I hear the chirping sound all around me as the lightning starts to form and I quickly drive it into the clones back.

 

[Adachi]

Okay, that is poor Taijutsu.
You fail to explain which leg you used to punch kick him and how my clone is killed (where did you aim the chidori?).
Read my own Taijutsu quote:

Because you created your clone at mid range, I am allowed a running start. I dash to your clone, making sure to place down my dominant foot upon the ground before I strike you with my left fist in a 90 degree angle directly beneath your chin, immediately following up with my right fist onto the base of your sternum, to knock you into the air.
Due to the impact of the move, you are suspended momentarily in the air as I overtake you by charging chakra into my feet to jump higher than your current position. My eyes are focused upon your groin (actually, that is what is shown in the video), slamming you down onto the ground with my left fist.
I withdraw four large shurikens and pin your body down at all four corners, then I allow the wind and my chakra to rotate me in a 360 manner, slamming into you as I complete the move, causing you to react to centripetal force and take heavy damage as you spin away from me.

Now try again. >.>

 

[Rayder]

I shall do better.

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I run straight ahead at your clone, while keep my right fist tucked next to my thigh, and when I am within reaching distance I send it straight into your clones chest in order to push it back. I then, in a wide arc, swing my left fist around and the momentum increases its speed and impact as it hits your clones head driving it even further back. I then kick your clone with my left leg, while being careful not to hit to hard so it doesn't go flying, and aim for his lower abdomen. I then use my right fist and uppercut your clones chin, keeping my fist on the chin and actually driving it upwards so the clone goes into the air. I then charge chakra into my feet to allow me to get behind you and I form the Ox handseal and hear the chirping sound all around me as the concentrated lightning forms. Not having much time, as you start to fall back down, I quickly slam the Chidori into your clones back while its still not complete.

 

[Adachi]

Much better! Now you've got a good start on it now...ah, yes, that was quite the good read. xD

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(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Now, proceed to draw your sword once more and then strike my clone with it (preferably the flat side of it so he isn't cut in half), sending him into the air.
As he begins to fall back down due to gravity, jump up past him and drive him down into the ground with a Chidori.

 

[Rayder]

Thanks sensei. ^_^
It means a lot.
Sorry it took me so long to reply.

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I get out my sword and start running towards the clone with my sword outstretched to my right, when within distance I twist the blade so the flat side hits the clone's shoulder sending it backwards without cutting it which was my intention. I very quickly follow this up my sword by switching the sword to my left hand and turning it around to confuse the clone and make it believe that the next attack is coming from my right, with my left hand I hit the clone with the hilt of my sword right in its stomach knocking the breath out of it and then spin the sword around hitting the clone into the air with the flat side of my blade. I charge chakra into my feet and jump into the air as the clone begins to fall back down and concentrate my Raiton chakra into my hand, leaving it uncomplete and smash in down into the clone driving it into the ground.

 

[Adachi]

Excellent. Straightforward. Your detail will serve you well in future fights. xD

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(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Now, once again, start the same way as you did last time, striking the opponent into the air.
Proceed to punch and kick them painfully, then dropping back down to the ground before your opponent hits it, holding up a hand and charging a Chidori into it.
Have that falling body fall straight into that Chidori.

 

[Rayder]

I unsheathe my sword and run at your clone, turning my sword around so as the hilt smashes into its skull leaving it dazed and disorientated, I then hold my sword under my hip and bring it up violently into your clones chin, using force to send the clone into the air. I concentrate chakra into my feet and quickly follow the clone and when I am directly under him, I push my foot upwards hitting his backside and sending him further up. I continue to punch and kick his back to make him go even higher into the air until I'm sure that he won't be able to take any more hits. This is all a ply so I would have more time to position myself under him before gravity brings him back down. I drop down and position myself directly under him while focusing on my Raiton chakra and manipulating it into my hand and I hold it into the air as the clone falls back down, landing on the chidori.

 

[Adachi]

Well done. Should be dead. xD

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(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Okay, now proceed to run up to my clone and punch him, then jump back and form a Chidori within your hands. Split it into two, and charge back at my clone, hitting him with one hand, sending them into the air, and then continuing with the momentum into the air, in a zig-zag manner.
Finally, at the highest point, use your other hand and smash him back into the ground.

 

[Rayder]

I run at your clone and stop just a few feet away from him; just enough so that I'm able to punch him and leave him dazed. I quickly jump back and charge a chidori into both my hands, maintaining the power electricity and then slowly spreading it through each hand as I start to pull my hands away from each other so the chidori is split perfectly into two. I then rush at your clone and keep my right hand down, I hit his shoulder with my right hand sending him into the air and charge chakra into the bottom of my feet and jump into the air and continue to hit him back and forwards in a zig-zag pattern until he is high into the air. I use the chakra to get behind him and use my left hand to smash him back into the ground.

 

[Adachi]

Like this:

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(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

Begin by forming a Chidori and then jump into the air - and as you do this release all of the bound Lightning Chakra to create a giant thunder bolt...which you then gather up and throw it at my clone. Remember to aim.

 

[Rayder]

I concentrate my Raiton chakra into my hand and compact the chakra as I slowly add more to it and sharpen it intensely until I once again hear the sound of the birds chirping all around me and the ball of crackling forms in my hand. I then jump into the air through the means of storing chakra in my feet and complete the Chidori which I then gather up and release aiming at your clone carefully sending the chidori at him like a lance.