Keotsu teaches Pain.. Kenjutsu

[KeotsuEclipse]

*By holding my sword like a normal looking position with the sword in front of me which is facing the dummy and is extremely straight but also, kinda near i quickly make one step ahead with my left leg while i quickly pull my right hand towards the dummy i again pull my hand back to give the stab more force and strenght but i also, pull my right arm i then, stretch my arm in front of me making the stab longer and stabbing the dummy which on a real body the stab would pass through the body*

I fixed the position only everything else was copied from my last response.

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Overall i'm holding the sword straight like this and almost looking like this but not exactly, this is just an idea.

I would have you rather rewrite everything, as when you copied it, you still copied quite a few of the errors; like, you don't pull a sword towards your opponent, you push it. Other than that, that was better. However, you can't rely on pictures to describe your moves. I don't want you posting anymore pictures in the thread.

But, we'll move on...

Since we covered the difference between one-handed and two-handed attacks earlier, I'd like you to start be describing a two-handed horizontal strike in detail. Remember to change your description to accommodate for the addition of two hands, and think about how the motion of two hands on a blade is going to change your movements.

 

[Pain..]

I would have you rather rewrite everything, as when you copied it, you still copied quite a few of the errors; like, you don't pull a sword towards your opponent, you push it. Other than that, that was better. However, you can't rely on pictures to describe your moves. I don't want you posting anymore pictures in the thread.

But, we'll move on...

Since we covered the difference between one-handed and two-handed attacks earlier, I'd like you to start be describing a two-handed horizontal strike in detail. Remember to change your description to accommodate for the addition of two hands, and think about how the motion of two hands on a blade is going to change your movements.

*I grab my sword with my left hand and on top of my left hand i have my right hand afterwards, i lift it up near my shoulder, as soon as i finish that i aim the tip of the sword towards the dummy i then, take on small step ahead with my left leg and wave the sword ahead and speed my bust, the sword is first on my right hand and then on my left hand. I then, aim at the dummy chest and only stretch my right arm fully and my right arms reminds the same which is curved, this would make an amazing powerful wound on a real opponent chest.*

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

*I grab my sword with my left hand and on top of my left hand i have my right hand afterwards, i lift it up near my shoulder, as soon as i finish that i aim the tip of the sword towards the dummy i then, take on small step ahead with my left leg and wave the sword ahead and speed my bust, the sword is first on my right hand and then on my left hand. I then, aim at the dummy chest and only stretch my right arm fully and my right arms reminds the same which is curved, this would make an amazing powerful wound on a real opponent chest.*

Your description is confusing and poorly written - the bolded part, for example, makes no sense.

Watch, for example, as I preform it, and then try again.

*Taking a hold of my bokken with both hands, the right above the left, I bring the bokken to the left side of my body, held parallel to the ground. I then swing the blade from my left, to my right, across my chest, while keeping the blade parallel to the ground.*