[Photoshop] Kenshin manga colouring

[Shinta]

Hey all who see this,

I took these from the re-vamp version of the Rurouni Kenshin manga and I was going to make it into an avatar. I'd like some C&C about how I'm going and anything else I could do to make it better please.

Here it is:

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I've never made an avatar before so I'm not sure of what else to do...

EDIT: Here is one that I'm trying to make it look like it's raining...

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[Thoth]

That's nice.

 

[Shinta]

That's nice.

Thanks...