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Sorry o__o" I have no excuse tbh..
I start out with gathering chakra and at the same time I perform, Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger hand seals. When finished with gathering and molding chakra into katon chakra I Finnish with doing hand seals as well. After doing so I start channeling chakra from my lungs to my mouth and at the same time I heat it up Now with heated up chakra in my mouth I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and then shape manipulation to convert it into six fireballs that I release towards your clone. Swiftly after I release the fire balls, I I take six shuriken from my pockets; three of them with my left hand, and three of them with my right hand. I swing with both of my hands and at the same time and I throw all six shuriken but very carefully and precisely to accomplish throwing all of them exactly in the 6 fire balls. Fist fireball is directed towards the clone's head, second one towards his right arm, thrid one is towards his left arm, fourth one is towards his chest, fifth one is towards his left leg and sixth towards his right leg. As fireballs are sent flying towards your clone, he makes one hand seal and then creates and orb of water from which 5 sharp water wipes emerge. Because they are movable he directs wipes towards my fireballs making evaporation.This also stops the shuriken in my fire balls because there are many more whips the shuriken and because the whips are very sharp.

-Your counter is going to work,water will make evaporation and also whiles are sharp,making them stop shurikens.

-Medium speed - Still hand seals,adding shurikens to fireball,and using basic nature and shape manipulation.

-You can attack only up to short range
-Adding shurikens to fireballs makes this technique lethal.
-It is not just shurikens that makes it lethal but possibility of making surprise attack behind this one
 

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Sorry o__o" I have no excuse tbh..
I start out with gathering chakra and at the same time I perform, Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger hand seals. When finished with gathering and molding chakra into katon chakra I Finnish with doing hand seals as well. After doing so I start channeling chakra from my lungs to my mouth and at the same time I heat it up Now with heated up chakra in my mouth I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and then shape manipulation to convert it into six fireballs that I release towards your clone. Swiftly after I release the fire balls, I I take six shuriken from my pockets; three of them with my left hand, and three of them with my right hand. I swing with both of my hands and at the same time and I throw all six shuriken but very carefully and precisely to accomplish throwing all of them exactly in the 6 fire balls. Fist fireball is directed towards the clone's head, second one towards his right arm, thrid one is towards his left arm, fourth one is towards his chest, fifth one is towards his left leg and sixth towards his right leg. As fireballs are sent flying towards your clone, he makes one hand seal and then creates and orb of water from which 5 sharp water wipes emerge. Because they are movable he directs wipes towards my fireballs making evaporation.This also stops the shuriken in my fire balls because there are many more whips the shuriken and because the whips are very sharp.

-Your counter is going to work,water will make evaporation and also whiles are sharp,making them stop shurikens.

-Medium speed - Still hand seals,adding shurikens to fireball,and using basic nature and shape manipulation.

-You can attack only up to short range
-Adding shurikens to fireballs makes this technique lethal.
-It is not just shurikens that makes it lethal but possibility of making surprise attack behind this one
No excuses!!! :dafq:

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( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

Focus your chakra, and superheat it within your lungs. Then release a long flame that will wrap around the body of my clone, burning him severely. If performed correctly, he should disperse.

-Creates clone-

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( Suiton: Shizuka Yari ) - Water Release: Droplet Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: Using their skills with water release, the user creates an orb of water in their hand which they can then release in the form of multiple spearing streams, that they can use to attack their enemy from multiple directions or in spirals.
 

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Sorry :shy:

I start out by gathering chakra in my stomach and then converting it into katon chakra. When I finish with gathering and molding chakra I start channeling it towards my mouth. In the period of channeling and going trough lungs I super heat it up. When chakra comes to my mouth,just before releasing heated up chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and shape manipulation to create a flame of fire that is directed towards your clone. As fire flame is directed towards your clone,he creates a water orb in his hands and starts releasing multiply water streams from it cooling down fire flame.

-Counter is going to work,user can control and make multiply streams cooling down fire chakra.

-Fast technique to be performed,no hand seals needed.

-Can be used up to mid range,and it is a fast technique to be performed.
-It can be easily stopped by water technique
-Combining with a wind technique can make it lethal.
-It can be wrapped around opponents body.
 

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Sorry :shy:

I start out by gathering chakra in my stomach and then converting it into katon chakra. When I finish with gathering and molding chakra I start channeling it towards my mouth. In the period of channeling and going trough lungs I super heat it up. When chakra comes to my mouth,just before releasing heated up chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire and shape manipulation to create a flame of fire that is directed towards your clone. As fire flame is directed towards your clone,he creates a water orb in his hands and starts releasing multiply water streams from it cooling down fire flame.

-Counter is going to work,user can control and make multiply streams cooling down fire chakra.

-Fast technique to be performed,no hand seals needed.

-Can be used up to mid range,and it is a fast technique to be performed.
-It can be easily stopped by water technique
-Combining with a wind technique can make it lethal.
-It can be wrapped around opponents body.
Bad thing is that no one will allow the fire to wrap around them in the first place, so it's basically a generic, forward released technique.

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( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

Jump into the air, and focus your fire chakra. Then release the fire from your mouth, in the form of "bullets" of fire. Aim them downwards towards my clone in order to disperse him.

-Creates clone-

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(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
 

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I start gathering chakra and converting it into katon chakra in my stomach. When I Finnish with molding I channel it towards my mouthd heat it up. At the same time of channeling I jump into the air. In the time of jumping just before releasing I use nature manipulation to convert chakra into fire as well as shape manipulation to create a multiply bullet like looking fires that I direct towards your clone. As bullets are flying in the air,your clone slams his hands on the ground and summons waters 10 meters from the position where I am in the air as well as one meter in front of him cooling down bullets that waere directed towards your clone.

-Counter is going to work,cooling down fire bullet is able.

-I would rate it medium speed,you need to jump into the air to preform it,giving your opponent time to think of counter.

-It doesn't require any hand seals but requires jumping into the air.
-You are creating multiply bullets making it harder to dodgr
 

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I start gathering chakra and converting it into katon chakra in my stomach. When I Finnish with molding I channel it towards my mouthd heat it up. At the same time of channeling I jump into the air. In the time of jumping just before releasing I use nature manipulation to convert chakra into fire as well as shape manipulation to create a multiply bullet like looking fires that I direct towards your clone. As bullets are flying in the air,your clone slams his hands on the ground and summons waters 10 meters from the position where I am in the air as well as one meter in front of him cooling down bullets that waere directed towards your clone.

-Counter is going to work,cooling down fire bullet is able.

-I would rate it medium speed,you need to jump into the air to preform it,giving your opponent time to think of counter.

-It doesn't require any hand seals but requires jumping into the air.
-You are creating multiply bullets making it harder to dodgr
Meh, more detail in all the categories please. :)
 

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I start out by gathering chakra in my stomach. After I gathered enough I start converting that chaka into katon chakra. As I finnish that I start channeling that molded chakra towards my mouth and at the same time I heat it up. In period of channeling and heating up chakra I jump high into the air. When I am 1 meter from the ground,the highest point of my jump o have focused chakra in my mouth. And just before releasing that chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire as well as shape manipulation to create bullet like shape out of chakra. I direct 7 fire bullets towards your clone. 2 are going in direction of his head,2 in direction of his left arm,1 in direction of his chest,1 just beneath sternum and last one in direction of his right arm. As fire bullets are flying towards your clone he swiftly slums his hands onto the ground and summons water massive amount of water 11 meters from the ground and 10 meters above me. Water source is summoned 1 meter from him unableing my fire bullets to hit him and cooling down fire bullets

-I think there are 2 possibilitys for this counter to work,first one I stated and the second one is to summon water when I jump into air making me fall down imidietly.

-You can create multiply fire bullets making it harder to dodge
-It can only be performed when you jump into the air,making you vulnerable to many attacks
-The power of bullets is not that great,it can be used in many ways but it is not lethal.
-You cant hide surprise attack from behind of small bullets

-Medium speed - you need to jump into the air to perform a jutsu but everything else is just nature and shape manipulation
 

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I start out by gathering chakra in my stomach. After I gathered enough I start converting that chaka into katon chakra. As I finnish that I start channeling that molded chakra towards my mouth and at the same time I heat it up. In period of channeling and heating up chakra I jump high into the air. When I am 1 meter from the ground,the highest point of my jump o have focused chakra in my mouth. And just before releasing that chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire as well as shape manipulation to create bullet like shape out of chakra. I direct 7 fire bullets towards your clone. 2 are going in direction of his head,2 in direction of his left arm,1 in direction of his chest,1 just beneath sternum and last one in direction of his right arm. As fire bullets are flying towards your clone he swiftly slums his hands onto the ground and summons water massive amount of water 11 meters from the ground and 10 meters above me. Water source is summoned 1 meter from him unableing my fire bullets to hit him and cooling down fire bullets

-I think there are 2 possibilitys for this counter to work,first one I stated and the second one is to summon water when I jump into air making me fall down imidietly.

-You can create multiply fire bullets making it harder to dodge
-It can only be performed when you jump into the air,making you vulnerable to many attacks
-The power of bullets is not that great,it can be used in many ways but it is not lethal.
-You cant hide surprise attack from behind of small bullets

-Medium speed - you need to jump into the air to perform a jutsu but everything else is just nature and shape manipulation
Much better. ^^

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

Focus your katon chakra into your mouth, and then release it forwards. Release a small ball of fire, capable of reaching all ranges. Knock my kunai out of the air with it.

-Throws kunai-


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(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.
 

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That avy is amazing o__o

Me and your clone are standing about 8 meters from each other. As I start gathering chakra in my stomach and molding it to become a katon chakra he trows a kunai at me.In the period of kunai flying towards me I start channeling gathered chakra towards my lungs.When chakra is in my lungs I heat it up,making it as hot as possible and then push it forward towards my mouth. Now with chakra in my mouth and kunai 3 meters from me,I push chakra just a little bit forward and use nature manipulation to create fire out of chakra and then shape manipulation to create a small hot and shiny fire ball that I release from my mouth towards you. First thing that came in contact with fireball is kunai which was knocked out as soon as it got into the flame,and fireball continued towards your clone. As your clone sees that kunai's trown out of the way,and he is the next to be hit,he spits thick globules of muds towards my fireball. As fireball and mud hit each other bought attacks are neutraliesed and mud is complitly turned into liquid like form.

-Counter is going to work,fire and earth are going to neutralise each other and create a liquid like substence.

-I would rate this as fast attack,you are just pushing chakra from your stomach to your mouth and then using shape and nature manipulaiton

-It can be used up to long range,but because of it's simplicity it is easy to dodge.
-The fireball isn't that big,and those unableing you to create a suprising attack behind it.
-It is a straight forward technique making it easy to dodge either by evading it or extinguishing with some water jutsu.
-You are pretty much creating only one small fireball and I think without a wind jutsu it's use is not that great.
-I think that other thing that is good to this tecnique is it shining power,if used on not that big of a range you can blind your opponent at least for a second or two.
 
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That avy is amazing o__o

Me and your clone are standing about 8 meters from each other. As I start gathering chakra in my stomach and molding it to become a katon chakra he trows a kunai at me.In the period of kunai flying towards me I start channeling gathered chakra towards my lungs.When chakra is in my lungs I heat it up,making it as hot as possible and then push it forward towards my mouth. Now with chakra in my mouth and kunai 3 meters from me,I push chakra just a little bit forward and use nature manipulation to create fire out of chakra and then shape manipulation to create a small hot and shiny fire ball that I release from my mouth towards you. First thing that came in contact with fireball is kunai which was knocked out as soon as it got into the flame,and fireball continued towards your clone. As your clone sees that kunai's trown out of the way,and he is the next to be hit,he spits thick globules of muds towards my fireball. As fireball and mud hit each other bought attacks are neutraliesed and mud is complitly turned into liquid like form.

-Counter is going to work,fire and earth are going to neutralise each other and create a liquid like substence.

-I would rate this as fast attack,you are just pushing chakra from your stomach to your mouth and then using shape and nature manipulaiton

-It can be used up to long range,but because of it's simplicity it is easy to dodge.
-The fireball isn't that big,and those unableing you to create a suprising attack behind it.
-It is a straight forward technique making it easy to dodge either by evading it or extinguishing with some water jutsu.
-You are pretty much creating only one small fireball and I think without a wind jutsu it's use is not that great.
-I think that other thing that is good to this tecnique is it shining power,if used on not that big of a range you can blind your opponent at least for a second or two.
Good job. Now, we are done with C-rank fire. It's time to perform a move! Act like this is the opening move in one of your battles and use fire techniques we have learned and a third technique of your choice. We stand mid range, go!
 

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As I see your clone standing about 8 meters from me I focus katon chakra into my mouth and then release a shiny,small fireball towards your clone making him blind for few seconds.

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

As he has been blinded for few seconds from the shine of small fireball that is now towards him,in moments of him not seeing I perform Tiger hand seal. After performing Tiger hand seal I release streams of fire from my mouth into the ground

(Katon: Hibashiri) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno.​

After creating rings of fire that travel on the ground I make Ram hand seal and after doing so I release small wind tornadoes.In touch with fire rings,huge tornado of flame is born,and sent towards your clone.

(Fūton: Kamikaze) - Wind Release: Divine Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 if used with a fire technique)
Description: The user releases a gust of wind after forming the Ram handseal, that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.
 

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As I see your clone standing about 8 meters from me I focus katon chakra into my mouth and then release a shiny,small fireball towards your clone making him blind for few seconds.

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

As he has been blinded for few seconds from the shine of small fireball that is now towards him,in moments of him not seeing I perform Tiger hand seal. After performing Tiger hand seal I release streams of fire from my mouth into the ground

(Katon: Hibashiri) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno.​

After creating rings of fire that travel on the ground I make Ram hand seal and after doing so I release small wind tornadoes.In touch with fire rings,huge tornado of flame is born,and sent towards your clone.

(Fūton: Kamikaze) - Wind Release: Divine Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 if used with a fire technique)
Description: The user releases a gust of wind after forming the Ram handseal, that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.
Uses generic forward released technique, countering your whole move. Boring. :)
 

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T_T.

Sorry for a late reply I kind of fallen asleep.

Your clone and me are standing 7 meters from each other.
As I see your clone standing 7 meters from me I preform 4 hand seals and start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth.In the same time of focusing chakra I take out 3 kunai's with my right hand,which are banded togheter by a wire,and send them flying towards your clone. 3 Kunai's are almost in the same direction of your clone. One is flying towards 1st right rib but just a little bit to the right,not hitting your clone,second is just a little bit beneth to the left towards sternum and the 3th kunai is flying towards left lub of lungs,but just a little bit to the left not actualy hitting your clone looking from my side.As they wrap around your clone I pull the wire which was all the time in my right hand and then release previously gathered fire chakra onto the wire that is connecting me and your clone.As I send fire onto the wire I let go of the wire. After letting go of wire I again start focusing heated up chakra into my mouth and then release a flame of fire that is going to wrap around your body,as flame is going into the air I preform 5 hand seals and summon four giant pillars that are surronding the enemy,as pillars are about to close your clone,fire ball hits him and lighting starts to show up from the the top of the pillars.At the same time As flames start to dissapear from fire hiting your clone,lighting starts to discharge from the pillars onto your clone.

(Katon: Hibashiri) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.
 

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T_T.

Sorry for a late reply I kind of fallen asleep.

Your clone and me are standing 7 meters from each other.
As I see your clone standing 7 meters from me I preform 4 hand seals and start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth.In the same time of focusing chakra I take out 3 kunai's with my right hand,which are banded togheter by a wire,and send them flying towards your clone. 3 Kunai's are almost in the same direction of your clone. One is flying towards 1st right rib but just a little bit to the right,not hitting your clone,second is just a little bit beneth to the left towards sternum and the 3th kunai is flying towards left lub of lungs,but just a little bit to the left not actualy hitting your clone looking from my side.As they wrap around your clone I pull the wire which was all the time in my right hand and then release previously gathered fire chakra onto the wire that is connecting me and your clone.As I send fire onto the wire I let go of the wire. After letting go of wire I again start focusing heated up chakra into my mouth and then release a flame of fire that is going to wrap around your body,as flame is going into the air I preform 5 hand seals and summon four giant pillars that are surronding the enemy,as pillars are about to close your clone,fire ball hits him and lighting starts to show up from the the top of the pillars.At the same time As flames start to dissapear from fire hiting your clone,lighting starts to discharge from the pillars onto your clone.

(Katon: Hibashiri) - Fire Release: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal by utilizing their fire chakra will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms (rings of fire that runs on the ground or a circle of fire flying through the air) before striking the target. It can also be used in combination with Wind Release: Divine Wind to create a tornado of flames, or with Wind Release: Godly Wind from the Mountains to release a massive inferno.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.
Think you might've posted the wrong first technique. Also, post your techniques in the order that you use them, so switch the 3rd and 2nd techniques. Finally, revising a move to make it easier to read is recommended.
 

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Think you might've posted the wrong first technique. Also, post your techniques in the order that you use them, so switch the 3rd and 2nd techniques. Finally, revising a move to make it easier to read is recommended.
Lol,yeah I posted the first move incorecctly.
so:
As I see your clone standing 7 meters from me I preform 4 hand seals and start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth. At the same time of focusing chakra I take out 3 kunai’s with my right hand.Kunai’s are banded together by a wire and send flying towards your clone. One kunai is sent flying just a little bit to the right from body of your clone,not actualy going to hit his body,the middle kunai is going in direction of clone’s sternum and the 3th kunai’s is sent flying to the left,few centimeters from where your clone body is.All kunai’s are on the same height from the ground,which means bouth first,and second are on the height of your clone’s sternum. As kunais wrap around your clone’s body with a wire which end part was all the time in my right hand I pull the wire,release fire fire onto it and then let it go. As I send fire onto the wire,I also let go of wire.

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Now I start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth and release a flame of fire that is flying into the air,and is going to wrap around your clone’s body.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

As flame is flying in the air I preform 5 hand seals and summon four giant pillars that surround your clone.Just before giant pillars are going to trap your clone from all sides,fire flame manages to get trough and wrap around clone’s body. As flame of fire starts disappearing, from top of the pillars lighting starts to discharge hitting your clone.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them
 
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Lol,yeah I posted the first move incorecctly.
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As I see your clone standing 7 meters from me I preform 4 hand seals and start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth. At the same time of focusing chakra I take out 3 kunai’s with my right hand.Kunai’s are banded together by a wire and send flying towards your clone. One kunai is sent flying just a little bit to the right from body of your clone,not actualy going to hit his body,the middle kunai is going in direction of clone’s sternum and the 3th kunai’s is sent flying to the left,few centimeters from where your clone body is.All kunai’s are on the same height from the ground,which means bouth first,and second are on the height of your clone’s sternum. As kunais wrap around your clone’s body with a wire which end part was all the time in my right hand I pull the wire,release fire fire onto it and then let it go. As I send fire onto the wire,I also let go of wire.

( Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will perform four handseals Snake → Dragon → Rabbit → Tiger , and breathe fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Now I start focusing heated up chakra in my mouth and release a flame of fire that is flying into the air,and is going to wrap around your clone’s body.

( Katon: Honoo no Saigai Hi Kagayaku no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Flame of Disaster Fire Shine Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a flame of fire chakra that converges on the opponent wrapping around them and burning them.

As flame is flying in the air I preform 5 hand seals and summon four giant pillars that surround your clone.Just before giant pillars are going to trap your clone from all sides,fire flame manages to get trough and wrap around clone’s body. As flame of fire starts disappearing, from top of the pillars lighting starts to discharge hitting your clone.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals they then summon Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them
Much better. ^^ Ready to move on? o-o
 

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Yeah :hyper:
Whoop whoop.

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Perform the required hand seals, and release flames which you shape into a real-looking dragon. Spread the fire dragon along the ground in front, to the left, and to the right side of my clone to surround him completely as it approaches.

-Creates clone-

I use..

(Suiton: Suikoundan) - Water Style: Water shark bomb
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A water projectile shaped like a shark that comes crashing down on the opponent.
Note: No water source required
 

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I start out by preforming Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger at the same time of preforming hand seals I gather and mold chakra into my stomach.As I finnish with molding and gathering chakra I start channeling it towards mouth.In the period of going towards mouth I heat up chakra to make it as hot as possible.As I focus chakra into my mouth I finnish with preforming hand seals. Just before releasing focused chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire as well as shape manipulation to create a stream that has a looks of a dragon,while doing so I am focusing on how dragon dragon looks. Firstly I release a stream that looks like a dragon towards your clone. As your clone sees that fire stream looking like a dragon is going towards him he creates a water procejtil that looks like a shark,but as fire stream is going to hit a water procejtil it spreads and on 3 sides. One part,part that was going towards clone's sternum actualy hits water projectile and the other 2 parts continue going towards clone.One part of released stream is going towards right side of your clone on the heigh of sternum and the second part is going from te right side making your clone dissapear


-Your counter is not going to work beacuse you are making only one water procojectill and I am sending fire flames from 3 sides.

-I would rate it as a medium speed just because of hand seals needed.


-One of good things about this tecnique is that you are attacking your opponent from 3 sides making it harder to doge.
-You are able to use it up to mid range and I think adding wind to it can be lethal.
-There are too many hand seals that needs to be made.
-One of things that is not so good about this technique is that you are creating a stream of fire which means that you are unable to do anything while the time this jutsu is preformed.
 

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I start out by preforming Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger at the same time of preforming hand seals I gather and mold chakra into my stomach.As I finnish with molding and gathering chakra I start channeling it towards mouth.In the period of going towards mouth I heat up chakra to make it as hot as possible.As I focus chakra into my mouth I finnish with preforming hand seals. Just before releasing focused chakra I use nature manipulation to convert it into fire as well as shape manipulation to create a stream that has a looks of a dragon,while doing so I am focusing on how dragon dragon looks. Firstly I release a stream that looks like a dragon towards your clone. As your clone sees that fire stream looking like a dragon is going towards him he creates a water procejtil that looks like a shark,but as fire stream is going to hit a water procejtil it spreads and on 3 sides. One part,part that was going towards clone's sternum actualy hits water projectile and the other 2 parts continue going towards clone.One part of released stream is going towards right side of your clone on the heigh of sternum and the second part is going from te right side making your clone dissapear


-Your counter is not going to work beacuse you are making only one water procojectill and I am sending fire flames from 3 sides.

-I would rate it as a medium speed just because of hand seals needed.


-One of good things about this tecnique is that you are attacking your opponent from 3 sides making it harder to doge.
-You are able to use it up to mid range and I think adding wind to it can be lethal.
-There are too many hand seals that needs to be made.
-One of things that is not so good about this technique is that you are creating a stream of fire which means that you are unable to do anything while the time this jutsu is preformed.
Nice work. ^^

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(Katon: Bakuhatsu Enhogan) – Fire Release: Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Concentrate your fire chakra to your hands, creating hot shots of fire. Then throw the shots from your hands in rapid succession at my clone. When they hit, they should explode on his skin, delivering serious burns.

-Creates clone-

I use..

(Doton: KageBunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a shadow clone made of mud of the user. Since its made of mud, it can continue to reform and mould itself back to its original shape. After reverting to mud, it can hold the opponent in place. The user can create upto three clones. They can also use up to C rank earth techniques.

.. to block the fire with its body.
 
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