[Action] Kakazus hard faught battle

[Mellow]

KA is restricted.

Assuming the battle starts with all hearts out, Fire and wind combined.

-Kakuzu counters any genjutsu, since the hearts has minds of its own and it responds whenever kakuzu is harmed,they can even move while kakazu is dead so one could just wake him up.

- Amaterasu is a problem, but kakuzu could just cut the burning hair off, Burning the hearts is useless, as they have no feelings and can just continue attacking, If kakazu tries to retrieve the heart out then he can buldge the burning hair out.

-Hearts is useless against susanoo via yata but kakuzu counters it by sending his arms underground, he can dodge totsuke because kakazu has shown to be fast aswell, prolly as fast as itachi

-Itachi has no large scale attacks like FRS to wipe kakuzu together with the hearts, If he spans yagatama he will die of exhaustion and kakuzu can counter via fire+wind masks.

In the end its up to one who can outlast eachother which goes to kakuzu,
I'm not saying itachi is weak though he's really powerful but i think kakuzu is a bad match up because he can outlast him and can give him a great fight too.

The end

 

[Trúth]

What is this shit ?
Edit: lol fanfic section i get it

 

[Gokuy]

Nice fanfic sir.

 

[GenKiDama]

some people don't get it huehuehue

 

[SusanooKyuubi]

I didn't think someone would go that far XD

 

[Zealotic]

Your forgot to add in Kakuzu's Rasenshuriken Mask and Jiton Masks

 

[Monkey King Enma]

LOL. Come on man. He's just a boy

 

[KGB Kakuzu]

I like the overall message; however, the screen play could use a little work. for example; the part where Kakuzu uses his tendrils to drill up from below has little to no shock value. We get no surprised reaction from Itachi or any thought process from either combatant. Yeah, I think just a bit more description of detail, and maybe some conversation/mental thinking would help this be a better read.

I'm not even going to start with the grammar U_U.


2/5. I don't mean to sound rude ;however, the fundamental lacking of some core writing elements and bad grammar don't help.