[Action] Juubi revival fanfiction part 7: the reason for Madara's plan.

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Naruto charged with his new Kurama cloak. His power is now greatly increased with the yin chakra added.

Previous part:

Kurama: NOW THAT YOU HAVE MY YIN CHAKRA, OUR LINK HAS NOW BEEN PERFECTED. THERE'S NOW NO TIME LIMIT TO BIJU MODE. TEAR MADARA APART!

Madara prepares to attack Naruto with a shockwave from the perfect susanoo, but Naruto overpowers it with his tailed beast shockwave, which knocks Madara back. Madara cut some of the 9 tails cloak in its torso, but then Naruto then made Kurama's fist larger and then made a devastating punch that sent the perfect susanoo flying backwards with a crack on its armor. The shockwave from such an attack nearly knocked away the alliance despite the distance they were from it. Madara then threw yasaka magatama at Naruto. Naruto effortlessly deflected them with a single tail. Naruto then fired rapid biju dama a Madara who deflected it with the blade shockwave of perfect susanoo.

Naruto(thought): MY BIJU DAMAS EXPLOSIONS WOULD BE POWERFUL ENOUGH TO OVERPOWER HIS SHOCKWAVE, BUT IT BLOWS THEM AWAY WITHOUT MAKING THEM EXPLODE! I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING ABOUT THAT SWORD.

Naruto then charges toward Madara and prepares to maul his head with an increased chakra hand. Madara gets all 4 susanoo arms to block it with all of his swords. Naruto then uses his tails to grab all arms and then fires a biju dama point blank and knocks Madara far away before making a massive explosion.

Madara's perfect susanoo was suffering severe damage from that attack and was almost destroyed. He regenerated it.

Madara(chuckles): YOU'RE A FUN ONE. YOU'RE AS STRONG AS HASHIRAMA, POSSIBLY STRONGER. YOU'RE MAKING THIS GAME INTERESTING.

Naruto: IS THAT ALL THIS IS TO YOU? A GAME!

Madara: OF COURSE! REALITY WILL SOON BE REPLACED. LIVES ARE NOW WORTHLESS! EVERYTHING IS GOING ACCORDING TO MY PLAN.

Naruto: WHY? WHY DID YOU MAKE THIS STUPID PLAN IN THE FIRST PLACE?!

Madara: YEARS AGO, OUR RESPECTIVE LINEAGES SLAUGHTERED ONE ANOTHER OVER A PETTY SQUABBLE AMONG BROTHERS. IT WAS A POINTLESS, STUPID BLOODSHED OF SOMETHING THAT NO LONGER MATTERED. HASHIRAMA AND I DISCUSSED HOW WE WOULD STOP THE CHAOS AS CHILDREN, BUT CIRCUMSTANCES PREVENTED THAT FROM HAPPENING. DESPITE HOW I PRETENDED TO ACT, I NEVER GAVE UP ON OUR DREAM, BUT NO ONE LISTENS TO ONE WITHOUT POWER. SO I TRAINED HARD. I BECAME THE STRONGEST IN OUR CLAN IN ORDER TO INFLUENCE THEM.

IT WORKED, BUT I COULD NOT RISK MY CLAN'S SECURITY ON HASHIRAMA'S WORD. I HAD TO CONTROL BOTH CLANS TO ENSURE PEACE ON BOTH SIDES. I COULDN'T RELY ON HASHIRAMA, ESPECIALLY AFTER MY BROTHER TOLD ME TO PROTECT THE CLAN WITH HIS DYING WORDS.

SEEING HASHIRAMA'S DETERMINATION GAVE ME HOPE, BUT IT DIDN'T LAST. DESPITE THE ALLIANCE, UCHIHA AND SENJU STILL RESENTED EACH OTHER FOR THE PAIN INFLICTED ON BOTH SIDES, AND I KNEW THAT IF TOBIRAMA BECAME THE 2ND HOKAGE, THE UCHIHA WOULD DIE.

I READ THE TABLET, AND IT HAD CODES THAT DESCRIBED THE SAGE'S LIFE. LIFE IN HIS TIME HAD THE SAME PROBLEMS AS MINE. HISTORY CONSTANTLY REPEATED ITSELF. THE TABLET STATED "IF 2 OPPOSING FORCES COOPERATED, TRUE PEACE WOULD BE ACQUIRED." IT IS THEN THAT I REALIZED THE TABLET'S TRUE MEANING. THE UCHIHA AND SENJU WOULD NEVER COOPERATE FULLY, SO TRUE PEACE WILL NEVER BE ACQUIRED!

Naruto: .......

Madara(creepy smile): THEREFORE, THE ONLY WAY TO ENSURE TRUE PEACE IS TO FORCE ALL TO COOPERATE TOGETHER VIA INFINITE TSUKYOMI! SINCE REALITY WILL BE ALTERED AND EVERYONE WILL BE RESTORED, I MIGHT AS WELL USE THIS REALITY AS MY ENTERTAINMENT IN THE MEANTIME! THIS IS MY SOLUTION! I'LL SUCCEED WHERE THE SAGE OF 6 PATHS FAILED! TELL ME THIS! WAS A WRONG ABOUT THE UCHIHA AND SENJU? DIDN'T ALL THAT I PREDICTED COME TO PASS?!

Naruto(angry expression): YOU WERE RIGHT, BUT YOU GAVE UP.

Madara: .......

Naruto: YOU KNEW EXACTLY WHAT WOULD HAPPEN, BUT YOU TURNED YOUR BACK ON EVERYONE! YOU COULD HAVE STOPPED IT FROM HAPPENING, BUT YOU GAVE UP! I WILL NEVER GIVE UP! I'M THE 6TH HOKAGE!

Madara: DON'T CLAIM TO UNDERSTAND BRAT! YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TRUE SUFFERING IS!

Naruto: I KNOW PLENTY!

Madara: ......

Naruto: NAGATO ATTACKED MY VILLAGE, KILLED 2 OF THE CLOSEST PEOPLE TO ME. I KNOW SUFFERING, BUT I NEVER GAVE UP! I WILL NOT FAIL!

Madara: THERE'S NOTHING LEFT TO DISCUSS. ONLY THE ONE WITH MORE POWER WILL DETERMINE THE FATE OF THIS WORLD. LET'S SEE WHO'S THE STRONGEST!

Naruto and Madara charge toward each other.


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Alright my opinion on this is its not good but its not bad either, it definetly has potential though. I do not like that the dialogue is in all caps I will say that. They're are a couple of grammer errors so please remember to proof read not just one time but multiple times. I too make this same mistake so this isn't a dig at you. My biggest issue with this is that it's not descriptive enough I can not visualize this fight in my head really so be more descriptive.

I do have something good to say about it and that is the story I do like the story you're building here and that's all that matters right? Meh some say yes some say no. I for one like to have the whole package, I know I'm not the greatest writer on here hell I think I suck but if you do improve on those things I mentioned you have a potential contest winner. That is my critique on your work. If you hate me for it go ahead I don't care. Remember everyone has an opinion down get upset when people don't like your work. Good luck and improve on those things send me a link to the next chapter and I'll try to find the them to critique that as well. I hope this helps.
 
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