Just Want To Be Free

[Shichi]

Alright so here's a song my friend wrote. She's a girl, that explains the lyrics. So yea this isn't really my lyrics. But she wanted me to upload it somewhere. So I thought I would share with you guys and girls. BTW She wrote this on a cell phone, so it has some errors.
Hope this in the right area.

So here goes nothing.

"Just Want To Be Free"

Help me
I need to b free
I don't care who knows
It can even just show
There isn't any1 out there
There isn't any1 right here
I don't know what to do
I don't know who to choose
Im going left and right
Im trying to put up a fight
Am I going crazy
I know my minds a li bit hazy
There's so much I gotta see
There's someone I gotta be
Im hiding myself inside
Behind this stupid foolish pride
All I really need is time
To figure out this life of mine
Im tryna find the words to say
Why I even feel this way

All I wanna do is cry
I don't even know why I try
Im just tired of being played
Like a stupid little game
I guess I shouldn't have obey
Those stupid rules were the same
I still don't know what to do
But I know who to choose
Hes been there from the start
Hes always been inside my heart

My whole life was just a test
I just need a little rest
Im really jus different inside
That's why I tried to hide
But no1 can see
Who I wanna be
No1 knows what I need
I just wanna be freed
Im getting stabbed in the back
I ain't getting no slack

All I wanna do is cry
I don't even know why I try
Im just tired of being played
Like im a stupid lil game
Ig I shouldn't have obeyed
These stupid rules were the same
I still don't know what to do
But I know who to choose
Hes been here from the start
hes alway been inside my heart

 

[Lyke]

Okay, so what do you want us to do now?

 

[Roby]

Okay, so what do you want us to do now?

Look at where this is posted. Instead of spamming leave something more constructive.

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OT. Well done! I don't do poems myself so I can't give you any tips though.

 

[darkprince]

Great job I like it.

 

[kiriahatake]

Dude your friend just wrote something i might have well done. I think she forgot the bridge though and then ending part of the song.

 

[Mangekyō1]

Not my style of writing but it is good! Thank you for sharing!