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If you have time, have a listen
i categorize myself as hip hop.
There is two tracks.
Feed back appreciated.
 

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isn't advertising yourself forbidden in this forum? =p
 

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Dope bro keep flowin. its abit on the mediocre side at times but i think thats good so it can have a mainstream audience. all in all i just wish to see the same simplicity but with a little more complexity at times. so the masses can have the pop-mainstream part of the verse and the hip hop fiends can have a complex flow to listen for
 
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Dope bro keep flowin. its abit on the mediocre side at times but i think thats good so it can have a mainstream audience. all in all i just wish to see the same simplicity but with a little more complexity at times. so the masses can have the pop-mainstream part of the verse and the hip hop fiends can have a complex flow to listen for

Appreciate it pimp, I'm just aimin to get better each time I write, You should hear my old stuff( Ultra Horrible)
But thanks for the feedback. I know I have a LONG ways to go.
 

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Its dope man....keep it up
 

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Thats sick, keep it up
 

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isn't advertising yourself forbidden in this forum? =p

No. Ive already asked the Mods.

OT- Good shit dawg. Actually its really good. The only feedback I can possibly give you is to experiment more and to switch up the flow. This is dope though, you sound a lot like B.O.B.
 
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Very good! ;)

Thanks I appreciate the feedback.

No. Ive already asked the Mods.

OT- Good shit dawg. Actually its really good. The only feedback I can possibly give you is to experiment more and to switch up the flow. This is dope though, you sound a lot like B.O.B.

Thats whats up. Good look, You from AZ right? did you go to c.r.a.s? I se you doin yo thang 2.
 
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