[Approved] Jordinio Bio

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Basic Information

Name: Jordinio
Nickname:
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Clan: /

Looks: Average height for a 12 year old boy. Jordinio has spiky black hair, he styled it and had red streaks put through it. Outfit of choice is, black boot/sandals. Black cargo pants, white wife beater tank top topped off with a black plain Future Trunks style jacket. Two equipment pouches. One situated near the end of his back on his silver belt and one strapped to his thigh.

Personality
Growing up estranged from his only family after his mothers death. Jordinio learned to take care of himself very young as an orphan and preferred to keep to himself. He has no friends of choice, and is rather cold towards others. The only thing that interests him is becoming the best ninja he can be and proving his ex-family wrong about him and to show them what they missed out on when they booted him from the family. Other than that, he has a hard time finding enjoyment, and is often very bored.

Village Info.

Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.

Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty:
Elements: Lightning - needs training
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.

History: Born out of wedlock, between his civilian mother and father. Jordinio was left an orphan when his father died on a mission and his mother died a few years later due to a terminal illness. The family would not accept a child that was not officially part of the family by marriage and so he was banished from ever claiming to be part of that fmily in name.

Jordinio grew up fast, if distant from his peers. But inside, he was angry at his family for casting him aside and longed for the day they realized what a crucial mistake they made in casting him out, and so strived to become the best Shinobi possible.

Learned of and began searching for a tutor in order to learn the forms of the Goken(Strong Fist) Taijutsu style during his tenure in the Academy, but has yet to receive any proper training in utilizing the limited knowledge he knows of the style, and so sticks mainly to the Academy Taijutsu style, and any moves he can make up on the fly.

Recently graduating at the top of his class, and obtaining Rookie Of The Year title under his belt, Jordinio prepared for the hard task ahead: Finding an instructor to begin his training. During one of his frequent trips to the local library, he stumbled on a book labeled Fuuinjutsu: The Art of Seals and Such. Although the book did not teach him anything, it did spark his interest in the subject. He knew one day that through training with an Fuuin tutor, he would become great and maybe develop his own techniques. He even thought about creating a seal that would increase the gravity around certain things once he did learn the art, which he planned to I engrave onto a set of training weights he planned to earn if he ever took up taijutsu. There were many possibilities awaiting him. All he needed now was an instructor to help him get his foot in the door.

Other: His favorite food is Curry. He having just entered puberty is rather fixated upon large breasts. His hobbies include studying up on the Ninja Arts, sleeping, training and basically ignoring or being a complete ass to anyone who bothers him.

Theme Song and Background Music: Me Against The World - by Rise Against/Theme song[video=youtube;7BUId4Z0hF8]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7BUId4Z0hF8[/video]

Background Music - Senya - Many Nights -

Battles

Won: No significant battles participated in to have won.
Lost: No significant battles participated in to have lost.

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1. You don't have a specialty yet so leave it blank.
2. You need to put this
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
ninjutsu under the ninjutsu bolded not just the names of the jutsu.
 

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1 ) No village of alliance yet... go to permission groups to request
2 ) Try and link theme song with the video button

Good job though for a first bio
If you need help VM me.
 

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1 ) No village of alliance yet... go to permission groups to request
2 ) Try and link theme song with the video button

Good job though for a first bio
If you need help VM me.
Village of Alliance can be any village. I'm not part of Akatsuki but my Zetsu bio is allied with the Akatsuki. You can literally put any village down there.
 

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Oh yeah being an orphan is not a clan nor can you just make one up. You have to be Sage rank I think to submit one let alone get it approved. He does not belong to a kg clan either so just leave it blank.
 

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Oh yeah being an orphan is not a clan nor can you just make one up. You have to be Sage rank I think to submit one let alone get it approved. He does not belong to a kg clan either so just leave it blank.
I actually plan to have him be of Uchiha descent later on. But I can't claim it just now because my posting is so low. So while he is from a clan, he has none of their abilities or characteristics to class him as such.

I figured leaving it for later on, would be an interesting development for my character.
 

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Couldn't post a second video in my first post, so here's my background theme - Senya - Many Nights - [video=youtube;xBXrRfcnP98]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xBXrRfcnP98[/video]
 

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I actually plan to have him be of Uchiha descent later on. But I can't claim it just now because my posting is so low. So while he is from a clan, he has none of their abilities or characteristics to class him as such.

I figured leaving it for later on, would be an interesting development for my character.
Either way you put it, it is still no. Clan is for official NB clans. Since you are not an Uchiha (due to lack of post count) you are in no way one or related to one. Otherwise anyone could just say they are from a made up clan. Just leave it blank and it will be fine.

Take out the part in your history involving strong fist and fuuinjutsu. You have no formal training in it and you can't claim you "studied" it. When you reach the post count for an uchiha and have satisfied the 1 month rule you can resubmit the character as an Uchiha and edit the history to your liking. For now just keep it simple till you get there. Don't add an extra training or "studying". You will earn things like that in time and with training. Just focus on getting it approved and get some training if you can till you can submit the Uchiha version later on.
 

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Studying was more of taking an interest in the practices. But had not received any training in them at all, so knew next to nothing other than general knowledge. Fixed it anyway though.

That about right?
 

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Studying was more of taking an interest in the practices. But had not received any training in them at all, so knew next to nothing other than general knowledge. Fixed it anyway though.

That about right?
Jordinio's interests branched out once again into Fuinjutsu, but so far has yet to even make progress on learning the basics of the art.Although he had to work on creating a seal that would increase the gravity around certain things once he did learn the art, which he planned to ingrave onto a set of training weights to help train his speed once he had received training in the Goken.
The way you worded it implies you have some training in it.

This would be better:

Recently graduating at the top of his class, and obtaining Rookie Of The Year title under his belt, Jordinio prepared for the hard task ahead: Finding an instructor to begin his training. During one of his frequent trips to the local library, he stumbled on a book labeled Fuuinjutsu: The Art of Seals and Such. Although the book did not teach him anything, it did spark his interest in the subject. He knew one day that through training with an Fuuin tutor, he would become great and maybe develop his own techniques. He even thought about creating a seal that would increase the gravity around certain things once he did learn the art, which he planned to I engrave onto a set of training weights he planned to earn if he ever took up taijutsu. There were many possibilities awaiting him. All he needed now was an instructor to help him get his foot in the door.
 

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...Err then where do I put new jutsu I've learned?
You don't really put all the jutsus you learned on your bio. Just up to the rank you have completed in training. You can update the ranks on your next bio update if you get it approved. Most people post the updated training in their profile as a way to keep everything in one place.
 

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Anybody have any idea when this may be approved?
Don't multi-post please. xD

Bios now take about a week or month depending on how many bios are out and the freetime caliburn has. He usually does this on the weekends if he is free. You just have to be patient. I had to wait a month for my Karin bio I think. It used to be within hours of posting but back then Cali had more help. Poor guy works to death. I admire his dedication.
 
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