Jiraiya meats Minato for the first time (part 2)

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The first test continues!

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Jiraiya: I Guess its about time i took these kids series (says with a grin on his face)
Minato: Come on guys its time for round 2!


Jiraiya bites his thumb and performs a series of seals that Minato didnt know.


Jiraiya: Summoning jutsu!



A toad appears the same size as Jiraiya underneath him with metal plates up his arm and 2 swords across
its back like its ready for combat.



Jiraiya: hey gama-chan, hows the boss?
Gama chan: The boss is busy so he sent me.
Jiraiya: Well i dont need the boss for this.
Gama chan: Why did you summon me? And who are these brats?
Jiraiya: These brats are my new students and my first squad, I summoned you for because im testing
them to see there skills.
Gama chan: So why do you need me? You having a little trouble with them?
Jiriaya: Its not that, i just want to test there skills. Your not afraid are you?
Gama chan: Huh your jokes never get old, should i take it easy on them?
Jiraiya: let them make the first move, dont be too rough, they are just gennin!
Gama chan: Ok, but dont blame me if these kids get hurt (with a grin on his face)

Minato: (thinkin) So they want us to make the first move, but ive never seen a summoning like this, its incredible!
Shin: What should we do Minato?
Shina: should we attack head on?
Minato: To get those bells off Jiraiya, we need to get past that toad first, but it wont be easy, shin use your shadow clones to distract that toad while me and shina try to catch Jiraiya off guard! Go!

Shin: Shadow clone jutsu!

As he produces 2 clones and spreads out ready to attack as shina jumps up above the Jiraiya using Fire ball jutsu.



Jiraiya: Wow that level of the fire ball jutsu at such a younge age, so this is the power of the uchiha clan!



Jiraiya jumps back out the way and slamming his hands down to the ground using his earth wall jutsu which raises a wall of rock in front of him to stop the fire.
Shina lands behind Gama out of breath.


Shina: (thinking) dam that was my best jutsu and he stopped in with a wall of rock, i dont think im going to get one of those bells.



Just as Shina lands, Shin runs at Gama in a triangle formation like before but when hes about to reach him, gama pulls out his sword ready but as he does, Shins clones land either side of him, both using earth binding jutsu as rock form in chains binding Gama in place so he cant move, then the real Shin runs head on a hits Gama with an uppercut to his chin sending him flying. Then shin lands on his hands and need worn out from the clone jutsu.




Minato: Nice work guys..... (thinking) now its my turn!
Jiraiya: Bring it on kid!


Minato Runs at Jiraiya head on, just as hes getting close, Minato jumps up in the air doing a summasult and swings his leg round to do an axe kick with extra force from the spinning motion.
Jiraiya blocks with both arms thinking (dam this kids good, he amplified the power of his kick by using a sumasault first)



Minato: hehe



Minato then flipped back wards landing in crouching possition thinking (i guess its time to test out the new jutsu ive been working on)

He then put his right hand out holding his wrist with his left hand. He then started to concerntrate his chakra into his right hand moving it in a circular motion, which after a few seconds forms a ball of chakra motion in his hand.


Minato: Lets see if you can handle my own special jutsu!
Jiraiya: what is this technique, ive never seen anything like it, especially not from a gennin!


Minato runs forward shouting "Rassengan!"
He extends his arm just as hes about to reach Jiraiya to hit him in the stomac, but just as he reached him Jiraiya jumped in the air and minato tripped and his exploded on the ground.

As the smoke clears minato is getting up looking rather beaten.



Minato: Its time to use THAT technique!
Jiraiya: whats with this kid that could of done some serious damage!



Then Minato pulls out a kunai with a secial tag wrapped around it, thinking (this is my last chance) then he throughs the kunai up at Jiraiya.



Jiraiya: (thinking) Crap im not going to be able to dodge it! But is that an exploding tag? No wait its something else!

Then Jiraiya looks down to see what minato was doing, the next thing he knows Minato appears in front of him, Jiraiya notices just in time to see Minato Taking the two bells with a big grin on his face...


Then in mid air Minato turns to face downwards to face Shin and Shina, thinking (I dont care if i have to go back to the academy, im not going to let my friends down!) Just as he thinks that he throws both the bells, one to Shina and one to Shin. The both catch them as Jiraiya and Minato land on the ground back to back.

Jiraiya: The test is over, gama you can return home. Right as for you guys, rest over by the tree for a minute then i will tell you how you did!

Minato, Shin and Shina walked over to the tree and sat down.


Shina: Minato why did you do that, your going to get sent back to the academy!
Shin: Ye dude, why did you, the team wont be the same without you!
Minato: I did it because i care about you guys and i didnt want to see you fail, I can always graduate again (grinning)


Just then Jiraiya walks over...

Minato: I guess i will see you guys when i graduate again hehe
Jiraiya: Guess again! (smiling)
Shin: what!
Shina: what!
Minato: what!
Jiraiya: Remember at the beggining of the test i said i want to test you teamwork, and youve all shown that today, most of all you minato!
Shina: What do you mean?
Jiraiya: You all passed, the whole test was to see if you could work as a team because thats what being a shanobi is about, being a part of a team, If you are on a mission you need to be with people who you trust and can work with and ive seen that you can do that :)
Shin: Really?
Jiraiya: Yes, you are all apart of team Jiraiya now :) Im impressed with the level of you skills, especially you Minato!
Minato: Wow thanks (he says grinning scratchin his head)
Jiraiya: what was that ressengan jutsu you used and how did you appear in front of me? Ive never seen such speed?

Minato: The Rassengan is a technique ive been working on to control my power and rotation of chakra in my hand to create a new jutsu!

Jiraiya: That level of chakra control is an A-rank Jutsu! But how did you appear in front of me so quick?

Minato: That i cant really explain, when i was younger, my father showed me a special seal and said i can transfer myself to that seal anytime, i can feel my chakra being drawn to the seal, that was what was on the peice of paper i rapped around the kunai i threw at you :D

Jiraiya: Wow thats some great technique, maybe even a kekkei genkai, well im very impressed you guys are way beyond gennin level, but thats enough for today, meet me back here tommorow at 10am for your first mission, lets go get some ramen :D



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Next chapter: Team Jiraiya's first mission
 
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that was good........it also makes sense...........really awesome man.............i want u to
continue........







and about the 1st few missions,,for a genin usually there will be some d ranks mission like catching the cats and dogs,helping elders something like that.......so u can add some d ranks mission......and the b rank mission may be like this.........
one day minato may hear that some one is invading konoha..........so you can develop a story usin that based on his reaction

or an a rank mission like this.............
the team was assigned an A-ranked mission- to escort an S-class criminal to a little village 20 kilometres away from Konoha. On the way, some baddies attacked the team and kidnapped one of his teamates. ...............u can develop like this...........based on his reaction........whether to act on his own or obey his sensei's order or something like that.............come on man u cant give up now..........i told that u will have my full support........so just ask me any help..........if i can clear then let me help...........i'm waiting for ur next fanfic...........
 
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guys i wrote about the formation of akatsuki ....... but i dont know whether it is good or not.......so pls comment it.....i want ur ideas............i took 2 days to write it....so pls tell whether i can continue...............just click here
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Good, good. I would say the techs were a little too early, but you made it work ^^

Just don't spoil the way THAT justu works, just to keep things interesting ^^

Nice work xd
 

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This chapter has a few things wrong with it too. I don't think Minato would have grasped the aspects of Chakra concentration to the point of a Rasengan at this point. Lastly as I said he probably wouldn't have used a kunai to teleport or to mark where he wants to teleport yet either, as he hasn't done any missions he wouldn't have any use in developing these sorts of things. The teleportation jutsu that is tought in the Academy is probably what he would have had at this time nothing refined.

Although you did half tie it in. I would have done something to the point of him failing a few times [without rasengan] and then thinking something along the lines of 'Maybe I can use this..' have him rummage through his bag and then wrap the paper around the kunai and throw it past Jiraiya, have Jiraiya say something and then poof Minato grabs the bells.

Although I don't think Jiraiya would have used this as a test to enter his squad. It was still a good way to introduce the characters and their powers.
 
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Dude this is wrong it took him 3 years to master rasegan and thats not until he is an adult (im almost sure) and he is the only one that can transport or whatever so his dad couldnt have sown him?!
 
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