Jimi Hendrix!!!!

NarutAwesome

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Check out my song called Hendrix. I tried to make a song about guitar so hopefully the lyrics capture that concept. Lemme Know whatcha think, I just want a listen thats all, worked pretty hard on this=D, any and all feedback is accepted, I wanna advance my art so lemme know whatcha think! Hope you guys like it

*lower volume before listening a little*
[video=youtube;wK8sog-Bjk8]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wK8sog-Bjk8&feature=youtu.be[/video]
 
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I like it but it needs a little something...I'm not really sure what though.
 

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This goes man, that hook is raw !!
 

NarutAwesome

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I like it but it needs a little something...I'm not really sure what though.

Maybe an edge to it, I'm tryna move more toward creativity and flow but I think I know what you mean, thanks for the listen!
 

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Its good man work on the flow a bit more ;)
 
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