JetZula Chapter 2

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Chapter 2
Freedom Fighters



The Fire Nation's select group has nearly arrived to Ba Seng Se.....




Ty Lee: "There it is!"


(Ty Lee points to Ba Seng Se and we see a beautiful sky view of of the Earth Capital)


Mai: "Ba Seng Se....Zuko, didn't you and your uncle have a Tea Shop here?"


Zuko: "We are not stopping for tea!"


Mai: "Geez...you don't have to be so harsh."


Azula: "Really, Zuzu, calm down. It's not like Tea was the source of your Banishment or the permanent scar on your face."


Zuko: "Azula, do you think you can keep making fun of me?"


Mai: "It's just tea....Calm down Zuko."


Zuko: "I wouldn't be so angry, if it wasn't for Azula!"


Azula: "Yes, because I am the reason for all of your pain. Face it Zuzu, you're angry at everyone, but me."


Zuko: "Oh, really?!"


(Zuko makes a pose signaling he's going to fight Azula. Azula lays out her hand in a fighting motion in response.)


Azula: "Come and get it."


(Azula smiles)


Zuko: "Ahh!!!!!"


(Zuko goes to strike Azula, but before he begins to firebend, a portion of the upper part of the war balloon explodes.)


Ty Lee: "Woah!"


Mai: "Zuko!"


Azula: "Your accuracy is horrible....Now we're going to drown."


Zuko: "I didn't do anything!"


Mai: "Then how do you explain that?!"


(Mai points to the hole in the balloon)


Zuko: "It wasn't me! I promise!"




Four shadow figures arrive on the Fire Nation Army Ship that accompanied the Fire Nation teenagers.



Smellerbee: "Listen to scarface! He's telling the truth."


(Smellerbee jumps onto the slowly falling War Balloon)


The Duke: "C'mon Pipsqueak!"


Pipsqueak: "Alright!"


(The Duke and Pipsqueak jump down)


Longshot: "This time...."


(Longshot jumps down)


Longshot: "The Fire Nation falls!"


Ty Lee: "I like your hat!"


Azula: "What did the Fire Nation ever do to you?"


Zuko: "Does that question really need an answer? The Fire Nation hasn't exactly been the-"


Azula: "Dear brother, that was called sarcasm. Learn it."


Mai: "You two do know the war balloon is falling...."


Zuko: "I guess these guys are here for a fight. Might as well give them one."


Mai: "Guess not..."


Ty Lee: "Look, a little boy."


Smellerbee: "I'm a girl! Thank you very much!"


Ty Lee: "You're not a very pretty girl, are you?"


Smellerbee: "Well this ugly girl can kick your butt!"


(Smellerbee runs at Ty Lee, but Longshot stops her)


Longshot: "Hold on, Smellerbee. Going into a battle without a plan isn't exactly the best idea."


Mai: "Listen to the guy who jumped onto a falling War Balloon...I'm sure he knows how to handle things."


Longshot: "Pipsqueak! You handle the sarcastic one. The Duke, you can have the one with the scar. Smellerbee! You-


Smellerbee: "I call the girly girl wearing pink!"


Longshot: "Okay. I guess that leaves me with-"


Azula: "ME!"


(Azula shoots her notorious blue fire threw her fist at Longshot, but Pipsqueak uses his signature Wooden Club to counter the flame away.)


Mai: "I think you forgot who that leader of yours paired you up with."


(Mai shoots her shuriken stars at Pipsqueak, but he dodges them. Meanwhile, Smellerbee runs at Ty Lee with two sharpened sticks. Ty Lee avoids the blows.)


Ty Lee: "Aw, so cute! You should really put those sticks down or you'll get hurt."


(Ty Lee starts striking back, aiming for pressure joints, but Smellerbee uses her sticks to block the punches. Zuko runs at The Duke while shooting fire using his finger tips. The Duke jumps onto the balloon's rafters. Zuko goes to shoot him down....)


Mai, while dodging Pipsqueak's wooden club,: "Zuko, don't firebend or you'll burn the whole balloon down. It's already falling....don't make it fall even faster..."


(Zuko pulls out his swords and tries to cut The Duke down.)


The Duke: "Woah! You're pretty handy with those swords! I want one!"


Zuko: "Then come down her and TRY TO GET ONE!"


(Zuko jumps and tries to get The Duke, but The Duke pulls out his knives and blocks the attack while climbing on top of the balloon.)


Zuko: "Get back here!"


(Zuko follows The Duke and begins to climb to the top of the balloon. Down on the platform, Longshot is firing one of his bows covered in blasting jelly at Azula. Azula notices it has blasting jelly on it and narrowly dodges the bow.)


Azula: "Blasting Jelly? Interesting...."


(Azula makes a fireball and throws it at Longshot, but he rolls out of the way and launches another bow. Azula runs and jumps over the bow and casts a small flame from her finger in the bows direction, causing an explosion behind her. Azula then, still in mid-air, attempts to land a leg drop wrapped in fire on Longshot, but he manages to avoid it by doing a backflip. While in the process of the backflip, Longshot shoots an arrow at Azula. Unable to avoid it due to just landing, she awaits the arrow, defenseless. Mai makes the save by using her shuriken star to cast the bow away.)


Mai: "You need to be more careful."


(Just then, Pipsqueak, behind Mai, swipes the club at her in a sideways motion, trying to hit her spine, but Ty Lee tackles Mai out of the way.)


Ty Lee: "You need to be more careful too!"


Mai: "Thanks."


Ty Lee: "Don't mention it!"


(Smellerbee runs at Ty Lee while Pipsqueak runs at Mai.)


Smellerbee: "You're going down!"


(Back on the roof, Zuko clashes his swords with The Duke's knives and pushes him down. He then slashes the roof's ground while walking up to the downed The Duke. He goes to finish him off by lunging his swords at The Duke's abdomen, but The Duke uses his feet to trip Zuko which results in Zuko dropping his swords. The Duke grabs one of the swords and goes after the other. He grabs it, but Zuko grabs his arm.)


Zuko: "Let the sword go, or you'll loose your arm!"


(The Duke uses Zuko's other sword and slashes Zuko's arm. Zuko dodges, but it puts a rip on Zuko's shirt around his shoulder.)


The Duke: "There's more where that came from! Hy-ya!"


(The Duke goes to attack Zuko, but Zuko picks up his other sword and they clash. Zuko kicks The Duke in the gut, thus kicking him away. They charge at each other again. Zuko goes to strike The Duke's legs, but The Duke jumps and tries to cut Zuko's stomach. Zuko uses his free hand to make a fire shield around his stomach which protects him. Zuko spins his sword around like a baton, mixes it with fire, and walks toward The Duke while The Duke backs away.)


The Duke: "Uh, a little help up here!"


Pipsqueak, who shouts from the bottom platform and while also dodgeing Mai's shuriken stars,: "I'm coming!"


The Duke: "I need someone lighter!"


Pipsqueak, while running at Mai: "Oh man.......Smellerbee! Help The Duke!


Smellerbee, who is avoiding Ty Lee's fists: Coming!


(Smellerbee runs up the rafters.)


Ty Lee: "Get back here!"


(Ty Lee begins to chase Smellerbee, but Pipsqueak gets in her way.)


Pipsqueak: "You're pretty...."


Ty Lee: "Ew!!!


(Ty Lee jumps up and uses her feet to hook onto the rafters. She flips up and begins walking on them. Pipsqueak goes to knock her down, but Mai rapidly throws her shuriken stars at Pipsqueak, focusing his attention on her.)


Ty Lee, who smiles: "Thanks Mai!"


Mai: "Just go."


(Ty Lee runs up to the roof, while Azula creates two fire swords in her hands.)


Azula: "Little Zuzu can do this....Shouldn't be too hard. In fact, not only can I do this, I can do it even better!"


Longshot, who's preparing a bow: "Save the speech for someone who cares."


(Longshot shoots a bow, but Azula extends her fire swords and ignites the jelly on the bow which explodes inside the balloon's platform. Longshot is sent off the balloon, but barely holds on to the edge of the balloon via a safety rope. Azula covers her face, while Mai is knocked into Pipsqueak who then falls onto her.)


Mai: "Get off me!"


(The explosion sends the roof platform rocking. Zuko holds his ground, along with The Duke and SmellerBee, but Ty Lee falls backwords and off the roof, but Zuko drops his sword to grab her hand.)


Ty Lee: "Thanks Zuko."


The Duke: "Now's our chance, Smellerbee!"


(They run at Zuko who has his back turn and guard down, but Ty Lee notices this and jumps over Zuko and hits The Duke and Smellerbee's back pressure points. They fall down, dropping their weapons.)


Zuko: "I owe you one Ty Lee."


Ty Lee, who smiles: "Consider us even!"


(Zuko and Ty Lee walk up to their downed opponents, going to finish them off. Meanwhile, below them, Azula walks over to finish off Longshot and Mai continues to fight Pipsqueak. Pipsqueak is backed into a corner by Mai's shuriken stars, and she manages to trap him throwing the shuriken stars at his arms and legs, thus making him drop his weapen."


Mai: "This-"


Zuko: "Fight-"


Ty Lee: "Is-"


Azula, who gives an evil smile: "Over!"


(They each go to finish off their opponents, but the other Fire Nation Balloon rams into them.)


Azula: "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?"


(The door of the Fire Nation Balloon opens, and a shadowy figures appears and gives a smile showing off the twig in his mouth.)


Shadow Figure: "Saving my friends!"


(Shock and awe grows on The Freedom Fighter's faces)


Pipsqeuak: "No....way..."


The Duke: "Can't be........"


Smellerbee: "It is....."


Longshot: "....J-Jet...."


(The shadow figure walks out of the darkness, holding too hook swords, revealing himself to be the former leader of the Freedom Fighters."


Jet: "The one and only."


Azula: "Well, who do we have here?"


Jet: "The names Jet, but you can call me the reason for your downfall. But, I prefer Jet. I think it's easier for you Fire Nation scum to comprehend."


Azula: "Fire...Nation...TRASH!??! I'll have you know we are from The Royal Family! Zuko, tell him!"


Zuko: "....Jet. I'll take it you still remember me."


Jet: "How could I forget the guy who got me arrested my the Di Lee? You know, they used mind control on me, but I NEVER forgot you and your uncle. I knew you were from the Fire Nation, but no one believed me. Not even my Freedom Fighters.....But hey, I'm very forgivable! And I've been waiting for this rematch."


Mai: "Zuko, why am I not surprised he's looking for you?"


Zuko: "You heard him. He was too weak to defeat me, so he was put in prison."


(Zuko turns his head back to Jet.)


Zuko: "Don't worry Jet. Nothing has changed. I am still better than you!"


Jet: "I'm sorry, what'd you say?"


Zuko: "I said...I'M BETTER THAN YOU!!"


(Zuko sends a huge blast of fire at Jet, who avoids the blast by hooking his swords to the roof of the balloon, and flipping to the platform. The fire creates a hole in the door, but no internal damage is done.)


Ty Lee: "Zuko, I don't think you should fire at that balloon like that."


Jet: "Listen to the cutie, Zuko. This balloon here, may be your only way of escaping this mess."


Azula: "Yeah, yeah, she's gorgeous. However, this Jet, has a valid point. We have to get aboard that balloon."


Mai: "Did you figure that all on your own, Azula?"


Azula: "Mai....Now is NOT the time for your attitude!"


Mai: "Whatever..."


Zuko: "Enough bickering! We're getting on that balloon!"


Ty Lee: "Uh, guys...Where'd he go?"


(Zuko, Mai, and Azula look on in shock as Jet is gone. Seizing this opportunity, Jet jumps on the roof and trips Zuko and Ty Lee using his hook swords. He grabs Smellerbee and The Duke and jumps back to the other ship, unseen by the Fire Nation teens.")


Zuko: "Urgh! He got us! We were tricked!"


Ty Lee: "But he won't get us a second time!"


(Zuko and Ty Lee get to their feet.)


Azula: "Be on your toes, Zuko! You two Ty Lee!"


Mai: "He's coming back."


(Jet swings a rope and uses his hooks to glide across it. Halfway across the rope, Azula lights it on fire. Shock grows on Jet's face while a sadistic smile grows on Azulas. Jet falls from the rope.)


Azula: "That was rather boring."


Jet, who's hooks are hanging the edge of the platform: "Show's not over yet!"


(Jet springs up to the platform and runs to Azula. She swipes fire at him and he slides under it and trips her by swiping her right foot out from under her. Mai throws four star shuriken at Jet, but he deflects them using his hooks. He jumps up and hooks onto the rafters and swings over Mai and release Pipsqueak by slashing the shuriken that are holding him against the wall. Jet hands Pipsqueak his signature wooden club.)


Jet: "Go get Longshot! I'll handle them!"


Pipsqueak: "O-okay, Jet!"


(Jet dashes at Mai, deflecting the shuriken in the process, while Pipsqueak goes to get Longshot. Azula fires multiple blasts of fire at Pipsqueak, but he swipes them away. Jet jumps over Mai, kicking her in the back and knocking her down, and runs towards Azula. Azula stares her opponents down, and then decides to attack a dangling Longshot. As soon as she turns around and lights a blue flame at the tip of her fingers, Jet tackles her down. Pipsqueak helps Longshot up and they both stare at Jet.)


Jet: "Go! Now!"


(Longshot fires a rope attached to a bow, and he and Pipsqueak glide across the rope.)


Azula: "Get off me, you filthy peasant!"


(Azula throws fire at Jet's face, through the palm of her hands, but Jet does a backflip and barely dodges the flames.)


Jet: "Whew, that was a close one.)


(Zuko and Ty Lee make their way down to the bottom platform, and along with Mai, corner jet from 3 sides. Azula gets up to make it four.)


Zuko: "Nowhere to run now, Jet! Let's finish this!"


Azula: "Hold on brother. I want this one."


Jet: "I feel honored that someone royal wants me, but since it's Fire Nation trash, I think I'll make my exit!"


(Jet runs at Azula and throws one of his hook swords at her. She ducks, but the sword has a rope attached to it. Jet attaches his other hook sword to it, glances at Azula, smiles, and makes his way back to the other war balloon.)


Zuko: "You're not getting away!"


(Zuko runs towards Jet with fire coming out of his fists, and goes to throw it at Jet, but Azula accidently trips Zuko making him fall off the balloon, but she grabs him by the back of his shirt. She pulls him back up while Jet and the Freedom Fighters stare at the Fire Nation team. Jet stares into Azula's eyes before signaling Longshot to make their departure.)


Zuko: "WHAT WAS THAT?! I HAD HIM!"


Mai: "I don't blame Zuko this time...Azula, what happened?"


Azula: "It's simple. Don't act like it isn't. I miscalculated. I didn't know Zuzu was behind me. Instead of getting mad at me, he's the one to blame for our failure!"


Zuko: "What? Me shouting at the top of my lungs wasn't enough of a warning?"


Ty Lee: "He was pretty loud, Azula."


Azula: "Well, then, if that's how it is....."


(Azula hugs Zuko, while Mai and Ty Lee look on in shock.)


Azula: "Sorry Zuzu. Seems as If I made a mistake. It won't happen again, I assure you."


Zuko: "Please...let go of me...."


(Azula releases the hug.)


Ty Lee: "Aw! That was so cute Azula! You do care about your big brother after all!"


Azula: "Be quiet Ty Lee....or you're next."


Ty Lee: "Are you threatening me with a hug?"


(Ty Lee happily runs up and hugs Azula.)


Mai: "Sorry to ruin you're little hug party...., but in about ten minutes, we'll be drowning. You know how much I would love to do that at this point..."


Azula: "There's a mountain over there we can firebend too. Zuko, grab Mai. Ty Lee, you're with me."


(They use their fire as jets by shooting it from their feet and glide across the sky.)


(Midway in the air, Ty Lee begins to talk to Azula.)


Ty Lee: "Not that I don't love your hugs or anything, but it's such a drastic change from your normal aurora. Normally, you're calm, but when you hugged Zuko you seemed...confused or something."


Azula: "Well, I normally don't make mistakes. So it was confusing to say the least. And hugging Zuzu wasn't the most pleasant thing in the world, but it was the only way to calm him down. I figured I try something nice for once, no matter how sick it made me feel."


Zuko: "I heard that!"


(Ty Lee laughs and smiles at Zuko, and then Azula.)


Ty Lee: "I like this new nice Azula! But it's kind of scary...."


(Azula gives a small chuckle to Ty Lee, and Ty Lee returns the favor.)



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LOLxd it's indeed shocking to see Azula hugging Zukoxd...nice script! Made me look back to the anime/cartoon, really. Now, I'm wondering if the rest of the gang would appear? I guess not since it took months (was it?) for Aang to heal back up, right?
 
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LOLxd it's indeed shocking to see Azula hugging Zukoxd...nice script! Made me look back to the anime/cartoon, really. Now, I'm wondering if the rest of the gang would appear? I guess not since it took months (was it?) for Aang to heal back up, right?
I can just picture that moment as extrmely awkward. The thought itself is weird lol I love anitoon (Anime/cartoon xd)

Here's a little spoiler....


This story is the first of three huge stories. The Aang Gaang will show up, but in the third one. Maybe a little scene in the second. In the second, someone will die. Someone who's main. It's kinda in the air at the moment, but that part is set in stone. Also, the second one focuses around the king/queen (I'm not saying who lol) of Ba Se Seng, betrayal (One of Azula's teamates will join the ******* ********), and Iroh will appear, setting up the third plot.So, that's the plot of the second one. In the third, it's all about the FireLord. Azula and her teamates will go after the Firelord, for power of course, while Aang and his friends also go after them. It'll be a race kinda. A new firelord will be crowned, but I won't tell who lo. The freedom fighters won't have a big role in the third, but they will in the second. The third is basically like the series finale of Avatar TLA, but more complicated lol.

I know that sounds confusing, but it''ll be better in the story lol. I haven't wrote any new ones yet due to computer issues and my Life In The Akatsukui series, plus I'm lazy and had no inspiration, but my thoughtd never stopped! Just my hands.

So Basically.

First-JetZula
Second-Betrayal/Death, crown of Ba Se Seng, Iroh
Third-FireLord, Aang Gaang

It'll be better in story lol
 

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Hmm...quite a plan...looks like, you're twisting the events rather than making a side story that must have taken place somewhere in between the "real" events of the anitoon. Is that what you're doing?^_^
 

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Yes, in a way.

It all goes along with the actual story, but some events have changed. Obviously Jet died, but he's back. What I mean is, it has all the main story elements, but it evolves into it's own. A side story that would fit into the actual story (First of the three) becomes it's own (2nd and third.)
 
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