Izou

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Basic Information:

Name:Izou
Nickname: none
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown
Clan: Uchiha-Clan

Looks: Izou is a tall man with black hair worn in a top ponytail, his clothing is that of a samurai. His eyes are usually keep closed. He has a twig in his mouth. He carries his sword Kousetsu tied to his belt.

Personality: Izou shows himself stoic and calm when he is on missions. But secretly he has a very bloodthirsty side. He needs to kill people to feed his beloved Katana kousetsu. He also cares only for his own buisness , paying not much attention if a war breaks out since he only lives for his Katana. In other words he puts his Katana over his live. His final wish is it to die on the Battlefield in his own blood. He likes battles and he likes Shinobis with a strong Determination to live. He respects strong or brave opponents.

Village information:

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure

Background: About his Background is not much known since he spent his time alone often. Because he was different than other Shinobis and he couldnt fit in, he started to develop a bloodthirsty nature. The Katana with which he killed his first enemy ever became his new friend: Kousetsu. Izou was trained in Swordmanship by The Samurai Mifune since he spent three years in their village. He has not much interest for the story of His Clan but he still spends some time with them.

Rank and Chakra Info:

Ninja Rank:

Speciality: Swordmannship, Kenjutsu

Elements: Ninjutsu:Complete
Fire: Complete Taijutsu: Complete
Water: A-Rank Genjutsu:C-Rank
Wind: Complete Sharingan:Needs practice
Lightning: D-Rank Kenjutsu:Complete
Earth: C-Rank

 

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There are several issues with this bio (Which were stated in the previous submission thread you made)
  • As a Genin, you can NOT create an Uchiha Bio. The requirements are that you have a minimum of 1,500 posts, while you only have 125
  • You can NOT say that you have these stats
    Elements: Ninjutsu:Complete
    Fire: Complete Taijutsu: Complete
    Water: A-Rank Genjutsu:C-Rank
    Wind: Complete Sharingan:Needs practice
    Lightning: D-Rank Kenjutsu:Complete
    Earth: C-Rank
    You have not completed any trainings, nor have you begun any
  • In order to increase your stats, you must request training from a sensei, senpai, or shishou.
  • As a Genin, you may only learn 1 Element and basic Ninjutsu, and only up to D-Rank. (That means you can't even have Taijutsu, Genjutsu, and 4 other elements, and of course no Sharingan because you cannot create an Uchiha bio until you have 1500 posts)
  • You're Village of Alliance relates to the Village Group you are accepted into. For example, my Konoha banner above my avatar signifies my acceptance into Konoha (One of the 7 Permission Groups found in the User CP). You are not part of Konoha, so you may NOT put Konoha as your Village of Alliance. Village of Birth is not a problem unless your are submitting a Special Bio or KG bio that specifically states your bio must originate from a certain Village
  • The proper format for bio submission has the Rank and Chakra placed before the Background Information, and after the Village Information.
Basically, don't submit bios without reading the rules
I think he understands now, thank you, biography moderator Jakai.
 
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