[Approved] "Iwagakure's Blazing Rooster" Dorimaru Tanaka

[ArealSHINOBIbro]

Basic Information
Name: Dorimaru Tanaka
Nickname: Dorimaru, The Blazing Rooster
Gender: Male
Age: 24
Clan: /

Looks: Dorimaru has red unkept hair with a Iwagakure headband. He has bright green eyes. He can be seen wearing a yellow track jacket with an orange trim which he keeps open exposing a mesh shirt. He wears normal Brown ninja pants with matching ninja shoes and Gloves. He is lean and athletic, but not real muscular. he stands 5'8 about 145

Personality: Dorimaru is calm, but at the same happy go lucky. He is never caught off guard he is witty and intellegent to the point where he almost seems to be the exact opposite. He tends to act off of events that happen, calculating things according to how things are happen never having a true plan(He calls it "Playing it by ear."). You could say he is always in a good mood focusing on what is peaceful and not strife almost ignorant to hatred and the such.

Village Info.

Village of Birth: His birthplace in unkown, but when he was young he was found by rock nin in the Land of Rice Fields.
Village of Alliance: Iwagakure

Rank//Chakra Info.

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Elements: Fire - needs training
Your ninjutsu:

Spoiler

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
History:
THE BEGINING
Dorimaru was born towards the begining of the 3rd Great Shinobi War. His parents are unknown to him along with his birthplace. When he was just a baby his father a Konahgakure ninja was running from Iwagakure ninjas. In order to protect Dorimaru from invading ninjas he continued to run from the ninjas untell he reached the land of rice fields. His father had gained some distance on the rock nin, but was still in pursuit because of the intell his father had. He had anough time to stop near a small farm in midst of night. He didnt have the much time though so he wrote out some words on a piece of paper pinned it to his son and put him on the ground softly and knocked on the farm house door and continued his run to lead the rock nin away from the location.

An elderly man answered the door and looked around for the would be guest and steped out to get a better look bumping his foot against the small child that lay at his feet. He picked up the baby with bright green eyes peering up at him. He saw the note pinned to the baby's chest it read "He doesnt have a name.". The old man utterly confused shook his head in distress, but he turned on his feet and walked back into the house closing the door behind him. (To be continued)

Other

Picture:

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I drew this. :3

Theme Song and Background Music: /

Battles

Won: none
Lost: none

~Approved~ removed specialties, you have none

 

[-Albel-]

Taijutsu, Fire and Earth style jutsus, Lava Releases, and Dust realease cannot be your specialty since you have yet to have any training in them, and plus you are only Genin. Also, you can only pick one element to train in first since you are only Genin, so you need to either pick fire or earth.

Just another tip, custom lava bios aren't allowed and same goes for Dust release too(I might be wrong about this one).

 

[ArealSHINOBIbro]

Taijutsu, Fire and Earth style jutsus, Lava Releases, and Dust realease cannot be your specialty since you have yet to have any training in them, and plus you are only Genin. Also, you can only pick one element to train in first since you are only Genin, so you need to either pick fire or earth.

Just another tip, custom lava bios aren't allowed and same goes for Dust release too(I might be wrong about this one).

thanks man i didnt know.

 

[BlacKing]

You arent Wrong, but even then he wouldnt meet the criteria as he is only a Genin.

At a BARE minimum, to get this bio approved, You will have to:

- Remove Lava and Dust Release from your Specialty.
- Change Taijutsu to FREEFORM TAIJUTSU
- Choose either Fire OR Earth.....you cannot have both as you are only a Genin.
- Add all of the Basic E Ranked Ninjutsu techniques in a Spoiler, as all Ninja are required to know those at a bare minimum even without training.

Spoiler

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Overall, the picture is not bad as you drew it.

Sees BishamonSama the First (NB) Tsuchikage reading the bio......you should be honored young Padawan. U_U

If you would actually like Access to Iwagakure to be in the village, you will have to go to your User CP and send in a request to our Current and Third Tsuchikage Toku, who will either accept or deny you whenever he gets a chance to look at it.

 

[ArealSHINOBIbro]

Sees BishamonSama the First (NB) Tsuchikage reading the bio......you should be honored young Padawan. U_U

If you would actually like Access to Iwagakure to be in the village, you will have to go to your User CP and send in a request to our Current and Third Tsuchikage Toku, who will either accept or deny you whenever he gets a chance to look at it.

how do i do all that?

 

[BlacKing]

User CP
Group Memberships
Select Iwagakure (Click selection that says Join Group to the Right)
Select Join Group Below.

Requests to join must be approved by a group leader.
Group leaders: Toku