looks line an american cartoon version of naruto when he is younger...
Itachi did'nt give him the sharingan(i think)but he put a part of himself inside narutoor rather some of his chakra so that he could meet sasuke later on and maybe change him like the 4th put his chakra inside naruto.
You've got the proportions all wrong, try starting with a rough draft and then building upon it. Aside from that I kinda like it.
Yet, that will never happen bro, Itachi didn't give him the sharingan, Sasuke has his eyes.
nice drawing