itachi

[itachi the great]

just wrote a poem and dedicated it to itachi. thought everyone should read. i can't decide it's name. you can suggest a name for it. ​

a lonely person he was
his smile was locked
he was kind inside his heart
he wasn't blind till he fell apart
he was a painting of wounds and scars
it was a headache for him to spend his hours
he died for nothing but lived for something
he thought he was doing right
and lived without light
no one ever knew that he was something they don't know
he always acted as a foe
but in his heart he was saving
inside his heart darkness was craving
his wounds were so deep
that it was impossible to cure them in a single sweep
at last when he was dying
he was still smiling
he gave all his love away
but his memories will forever stay​

 

[Red Slayer]

haha nice + rep

 

[-Raviel-]

How bout Itachi solos for the title

 

[Zlad]

So is this a general discussion?

 

[sky4life]

Nice!! + rep

 

[Melly]

that's really good ^^

 

[zamki]

This is awesome!

 

[itachi the great]

So is this a general discussion?

yes it is.

 

[itachi the great]

Thanks everyone

 

[i OblivioN i]

Good job, please read my thread, it matches your poem

 

[~Zonta~]

great work...........
you just earned a fan for yourself

 

[Itachi Rane]

very nice!!! Title should be ''the night guardian'' in my opinion.....

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Hats off to Itachi

 

[Seffy]

Nice poem ^_^

 

[pandu]

all hail Lord Itachi sama :worshippy:

 

[Reidara]

This is really good. Awesome job there!

 

[Hori]

great job handsome

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[Uchiha Brothers]

good but just good only

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Great poem .

 

[darkprince]

Awesome dedication for itachi.