Itachi+Sasuke- I Will Love You Forever

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Well, I am new to Fan Art, and this is my first! It's the panel on the bottom left on page 16 in chapter "I Will Love You Forever". I think I did ok, but there are lots of inconsistances. This is my first drawing (That wasn't random scetches in my math notebook). I haven't colored it yet, and I hope to by tomorrow. Here it is!

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(Sorry about the white, I have a weird scanner.)

Feel free to comment, compliment, and critisize! I'm trying to get better! :D I'll post the colored version tomorrow (Hopefully).
 

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Looks gud but U_U You should use paper of better quality.
 

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its a really nice drawing, Great-work
 

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You screwed up the proportions, nice try though.

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You should use better paper quality and also you need too practice the proportions, you will need more practice, but it´s already pretty good
 
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Thanks Everyone! I know about the paper, my parents need the computer paper, and I did this for fun.

I had a feeling I did horrible in porportions, but this is my first time. Thanks Everyone, again. :P You guys are friendly :D
 

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Try on normal, a4/letter paper, bro.
 
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