"Itachi Chronicles" - Siblings - Chapter 3 - Revisited Story

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"Itachi Chronicles" - Siblings .. "Wrong or right are in the eye of the beholder"


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Chapter 0.3 -

Itachi - Sasuke..

Itachi- It's time to go..

( One day as past..
Sasuke is on Itachi's back.. Both returning from Itachi's training.. Where Sasuke looked at Itachi with amusement.. )


( Sasuke laughs )

Itachi - How come the one who twisted his ankle is the one Laughing??

Itachi - Was it on purpose so i'd carry you?

Sasuke - No. I'm just happy because tomorrow I'll be starting the Academy too.

Sasuke - Maybe now, i can catch up to you a little.

( It's the end of a day.. Both Itachi and Sasuke are sitting next to each other at their parents house )

Sasuke - Father only cares about you,big brother...

Itachi - You probably hate me,huh??

( Sasuke looks with a surprised face to Itachi but don't answers him )

Itachi - It's all right... It's a fact that Shinobi go through life being hated.

Sasuke - That's not how i feel...

( Itachi gives a rare laugh.. )

Itachi - Being the best isn't all it's cracked up to be..

Itachi - If you have power, you become alienated and also arrogant.

Itachi - Even if you're coveted and sought after at first.
but,we only have each other as siblings..


Itachi - I'm always going to be there for you, even if it's only as an obstacle for you to overcome.

Itachi - Even if you do hate me... That's what big brothers are for..

( Sasuke looks with a very surprised look at Itachi's words.. )

Sasuke - Can you teach me ninjutsu,now??

( Itachi pokes on Sasuke's forehead )

Itachi - Maybe,another time..

Sasuke - You always say that, big brother..


( Itachi stands up and goes to the hallway.. He coughs into his hand..)

" I just had cough blood??? I feel sick and weird inside"

Next Chapter.. 0.4 - "The man in the woods"..
 

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Even if you do hate me... That's what big brothers are for..
yeah the most important line......you placed it good one, but short
Yeah.. They are all small chapters.
It was my first FanFiction..

You can check my new one "Utopic Monkeys" which has been receiving huge acceptment and feedback.
It's a big improvement from this one.
 

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i hope the grammar doesn't stop people from seeing how imaginative this trilogy is. for a first fanfic i think it was great work though!! :)
 
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